Brijinder"Sagar"ka kallam

by Brijinder on February 04, 2009, 01:06:02 AM
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Teray naam


Jab tu meri aagosh maiN hoti hai
Teri admundhi aankhain
Teray laraztay huay hoNt
Daitay hain bahut si ankahi baatoN ka pataa
Teray jism ki haraarat
UnglioN ki shraarat
NihaaN jaanay kitnay maikhaanoN ka nashaa

Jhatak kar khol daiti ho
Jab tum ghanay syaah gaisu
Aur bar jataa hai un paloN ka khumaar
Phir shiddat say woh jazba
Hai rooh tak mehsoos hotaa
Kartay hain jism jab us pyaar ka izhaar

Purmaaeni ho jaati hai meri hayaat
Hoti hai beshak mukhtsar si hamari mulakaat

Jab tu meri aagosh maiN hoti hai!Sach!
Meri zad maiN hoti hai jaisay saari qaaynaat

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«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2009, 09:02:22 PM »
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Keemiya-2

Raat ki aankhoN maiN haiN raushni kay khwaab
Din ki nazar maiN aNdhayroN ka sakooN
Bus isi giraft maiN haiN hai ziNdagi ki rau
Aur farayboN pay palta hua iska fasooN
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FasooN-magic
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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2009, 08:18:42 PM »
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any feedback plz?
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2009, 10:43:29 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Brijinder Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2009, 11:33:23 PM »
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Sehar Say Sehar Tak

Afsurdgi pay paltay huay mery ayaam
Roz yaas ki siyaahioN maiN doob jaatay haiN
Phir shub wahi sum lay kar sehar tak mujhko jagaati hai
Phir tweel raatoN main teri yaad tanhaaiaN baraati hai
Phir meray geet tujhko dair tak bulaatay haiN
Phir maaniNd-i-roz
MaiN jaagta hooN aur taaroN ko neeNd aati hai

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Meanings: afsurgi-udaasi, ayaam-din,yaas- dukh,sum-zehar,taweel- laMbi, ManiNd-e-roz-har roz ki tarah
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2009, 12:07:36 AM »
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any feedback plz?
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2009, 06:11:47 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hia aapne Brijender Ji..

Its always a pleasure reading you..

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2009, 07:55:26 AM »
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Subhan_allah Brijinder bohat bohat khoob...
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2009, 02:04:57 AM »
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Tzaad

YaadoN kay bawaNdar say uth rahaiN hai Takh_yul ki sar zamiN pay
Barq bau kay chamkta hai teri afsurda haNsee ka chehra
Honay lagi hai teray naaz-o-karam ki rimjhim
Meri takhleeq maiN main woh pehli barsaat si soundhi khusbu aa rahi hai

Tanha bahut tanha hai dil teray jaanay kay baad
SaMbhla nahi wajood shorishoN maiN bhi doob jaanay kay baad
Zamanaa to samjhtaa hai isay shauq-i-fitoor mera
Har chahray maiN agar dhooNdta hooN teray wajood ki parchaiNaN
Aur uqta kay uth aataa hooN phir apnay khyaaloN ki duniya maiN
Siyaah aur siyaah ho jaati haiN phir meri tanhaaiyaaN

Ab tu bani hai kisi ga_ir ki zindagi ka unwaaN
Ab teri raataiN uski baahoN main basi rehti haiN
Ab na us ulfat ki haqeeqat baqi
Phir bhi nadaan umeedaiN dil maiN baniN rehtiN haiN

Puchta hooN maiN aksar apni talkh raatoN say
Ki kya hai aqaayud-i-mehabbat ki asaas
Kya hai yeh rasoomaaat maiN lipta ik shuq-i-bekaar
Kya hai yeh ishq kay naam pay paltay huay pazmurda ahsaas

Kya hai yeh mehabbat yeh mehabbat ki tashheeer
Kadam bar kadam samjotoN ki besood taameer
Kya hai yeh jis-o-rooh kay alag alag meyaar
Kya hai parstish pay palta yeh falsafa-i-taqdeer

Thehar ab zauq-i-talab thehar
Aaj na yeh baat baat uthaa
Aaj ki raat barstaa hai gujishta mehabbat ka jaadoo
Aaa ki raat kuch na keh kuch na sunaa
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Meanings:Tzaad: Takraav
Takh_yul- Imagination(kalpana), Barq-lightening,Afsurda-Udaas, Takhleeq-rachna,creation
ShorishoN-kolahul(noise), Aqqayud-e-muhabbat-prem kay prati vishwaas,
Rassomaat- rasmaiN, Asaas-foundation, Pazmurda-half dead
Tashheer-Advertisement, Besood taameer-useless constrruction
Mayaar-parameters, Phalsupha-e-taqdeer-philosophy of fate
Gujishta-pas
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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2009, 02:12:13 AM »
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Tanha bahut tanha hai dil teray jaanay kay baad
SaMbhla nahi wajood shorishoN maiN bhi doob jaanay kay baad
Zamanaa to samjhtaa hai isay shauq-i-fitoor mera
Har chahray maiN agar dhooNdta hooN teray wajood ki parchaiNaN
Aur uqta kay uth aataa hooN phir apnay khyaaloN ki duniya maiN
Siyaah aur siyaah ho jaati haiN phir meri tanhaaiyaaN

Ab tu bani hai kisi ga_ir ki zindagi ka unwaaN
Ab teri raataiN uski baahoN main basi rehti haiN
Ab na us ulfat ki haqeeqat baqi
Phir bhi nadaan umeedaiN dil maiN baniN rehtiN haiN

Bahut khoob Brijinder ji.... Nice to see you  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2009, 07:12:26 AM »
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Bahut khooooooob Brijinder Ji. Har Rachna Khubsoorat likhi hai Dost.. Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2009, 07:14:07 AM »
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Bohat Achche Brijender Ji,.
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2009, 07:10:27 PM »
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I am very thankful to all of you for the kind words of appreciation.
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«Reply #13 on: June 21, 2009, 10:12:58 PM »
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WAQT-E-FURQAT

Yeh waqt-e-furqat kitna kathin hai meri jaaN
Hoga mushkil maanaa tha, magar itnaa mushkil
Socha bhi naa thaa

Woh chaNchal si khilkhilahat
Woh tumhari maNd maNd si muskaan
Woh tumharay badan say aatay bahaar kay jhoNkay
Woh tumhaari saadgi maiN daanaai kay imkaan

Woh tumhaaraa meri baahoN maiN duniya ko bhool jaanaa
Woh behtay ashkoN maiN laraztay laboN ka muskuraanaa
Woh tumhaari pal pal ko shiddat say jeenay ki chaah
Woh tumhaari nazar maiN phool say komal khwaaboN ki raah

Woh tumhaari dabdabaai aaNkhoN maiN unkahayay sawaal
Woh tumhaaray ghanay dasht say gasuoN ka jamaal
Woh tumhaaray hoNthoN ka tilsmee khumaar
Woh tumhaaraa mujh par beloss aitbaar

Bahut yaad aataa hai yeh sub meri jaaN
Aur yaad aataa hai bahut tumhaaraa woh-
"SUNO NA"
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«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2009, 10:39:36 PM »
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Good work indeed with beautiful Urdu wording.
However, besides liberal poetry, try to write Ghazals.
Keep the spirit up
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