Brijinder"Sagar"ka kallam

by Brijinder on February 04, 2009, 01:06:02 AM

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Brijinder

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«Reply #15 on: June 26, 2009, 12:28:09 AM »

Thanks a lot for the kind words.I love free verse poetry and have composed it most of the time.Thanks a lot for your appreciation.Hope even this form of poetry will find a place in your heart.


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Re: Brijinder"Sagar"ka kallam

«Reply #16 on: July 31, 2009, 07:22:41 AM »

Kya hai Zindagi?

Mai ka jadu bhara mast payaala hai
Ya ki tanhai kay seenay maiN laga khaNjar
Mehboob kay hoNtoN ki sheerni hai
Ya ki zar-o-zameeN kay khawaaboN ka naam
Har nafs maiN zinda hairat ki taazgi hai
Ya ki sub ka sham say ik thaka sa rishta?
Zindagi kisko kehtay haiN, dost??

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Re: Brijinder"Sagar"ka kallam

«Reply #17 on: July 31, 2009, 08:13:53 AM »

Do it as it pleases you, but most of the readers like rhythm.
You are good in free verse style, I like it also.


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Re: Brijinder"Sagar"ka kallam

«Reply #18 on: July 31, 2009, 09:19:00 AM »

Brijinder Ji,
Give every poem its own space / Topic. This way more and more people can see it.
You should see this topic: Maximum Exposure to a Poem on Yoindia


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Re: Brijinder"Sagar"ka kallam

«Reply #19 on: July 31, 2009, 09:30:25 AM »

bahut khub Brij ji......aapki har rachna lajwab hai Applause


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Re: Brijinder"Sagar"ka kallam

«Reply #20 on: August 11, 2009, 09:28:14 PM »

Sard-bedard mausam

Sard hai raat bahut
Chand say pighal-pighal rahi hai barf chandni
Aur utar rahi hai meray takhhyul ki vaadioN main
Meray khwaaboN kay jharnoN maiN
Meray armaanoN kay goshoN maiN
Kohra ban kay ghayray hai mujhay abr-e-tanhai
Aur yakhbasta sa ho gaya jaisay mera tamaam vajood
Lagta hai is baar
Ki garmi-e-jazbaat bhi bacha na payaygi ziNdagi meri
Is baar jo aya hai yeh sard-bedard mausam
Is baar yeh khatm nahi hoga kabhi.....

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Meaning:1.Takhhyul-kalpana,2. abr-e-tanhai-tanai ka badal,
3.Yakhbasta-jamaa hua(frozen)


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Re: Brijinder"Sagar"ka kallam

«Reply #21 on: May 04, 2010, 08:04:59 PM »

Chand gali to utra hoga
Mujhse shayud rootha hoga

Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko
Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga

Chupke chupke poNcha hoga
AaNkh se gar kuch tapka hoga

Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga

NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga