Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

by diya_barsat on September 01, 2007, 11:09:56 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 02, 2008, 10:27:07 AM »
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yoindia ki duniya azeeb hai yaaron,
yahan koi kisi se bedili se nahi milta
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«Reply #16 on: December 02, 2008, 10:43:05 AM »
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ote author=diya_barsat link=topic=24775.msg663788#msg663788 date=1188644996]
Na jane Q hume ansu bahana nahi ata,
na jane Q hale dil batana nahi ata,
Q sathi bichad jate hai hamesha humse,
shayad hume hi pyar nibhana nahi ata


PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS
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Haal-e-dil sunau kaise dil hua hai bekaraar
Aankhon mein aanshoo nahi yeh hain raajdaar
Saathi bichad jate hain kar na sakte intezaar
Tu bas unse kah na saki ki tujhe hai unse pyaar
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«Reply #17 on: December 13, 2008, 05:45:48 AM »
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har rahi ko mann chaha mukaam nahi milta ,
jisko jee bhar pyar karsake wo insaan nahi milta,
aasman ke taraon ki tarah hamare armaan bhi bikharte rehte hain,
jo apne dil mein hamein jagah desake woh meherbaan nahi milta
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«Reply #18 on: December 13, 2008, 05:52:39 AM »
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pyasi nigahon ne har pal unka deedar maanga hai,
jaise amavaas ne har raat chand maanga hai,
rooth gaya hum se wo khud abhi humse,
jab humne har dua mein unka saath maanga
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«Reply #19 on: December 24, 2008, 05:36:14 PM »
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ay dost isk me abhi tum kache ho !
Quote from: diya_barsat on September 01, 2007, 11:09:56 AM
Na jane Q hume ansu bahana nahi ata,
na jane Q hale dil batana nahi ata,
Q sathi bichad jate hai hamesha humse,
shayad hume hi pyar nibhana nahi ata


PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS
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«Reply #20 on: December 24, 2008, 05:46:40 PM »
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sach kaha yoindia ki duniya azeeb hai
yahan koi kisi se rubru nahi milta
apni apni shayri k jariye ruh me uterte
ruh se ruh ka milan hota hai yahan.....
Quote from: bekarar on December 02, 2008, 10:27:07 AM
yoindia ki duniya azeeb hai yaaron,
yahan koi kisi se bedili se nahi milta
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«Reply #21 on: January 11, 2010, 06:29:24 AM »
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Quote from: diya_barsat on September 01, 2007, 11:09:56 AM
Na jane Q hume ansu bahana nahi ata,
na jane Q hale dil batana nahi ata,
Q sathi bichad jate hai hamesha humse,
shayad hume hi pyar nibhana nahi ata


PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS



Ans of u r poem by Rahul soni "Rahi"(rahi2001)


aankhen patthar ki hogayi hai aansu nahi aata
nahi hai shabd hal-e-dil nahi bata pata
hai taqdeer ke sathi bichad jate hai hamse
shayad unhe bhi hamara pyar pasand nahi aata

i m so late but plz give me rply
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«Reply #22 on: January 17, 2010, 05:48:37 AM »
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Thank you Rahul its great.
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«Reply #23 on: January 18, 2010, 06:42:47 AM »
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Es kadar they khuddaar hum kay hame pyarr jataana nahi aaya
Khitaab sahan-shilta ki moorat ka nibhane hame rona nahi aaya
Jo bhee mile aaye nazdik hamaare,bichhdd gaye nahi ruk paaye
Kyuki hame khulkar izhaar-e-mohabbat karna kabhi nahi aaya


PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS
Diya_barsat on September 01, 2007, 04:39:56 PM
Na jane Q hume ansu bahana nahi ata,
na jane Q hale dil batana nahi ata,
Q sathi bichad jate hai hamesha humse,
shayad hume hi pyar nibhana nahi ata
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«Reply #24 on: January 18, 2010, 12:17:35 PM »
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Agar dil gham se khaali ho,
To bahlana nahin aata!
Tumhen ghamkhwar ke zakhmon ko,
Sahlana nahin aata!!

Mohabbat ek ibadat hai,
Bharosa karke to dekho,
Mujhe lagta hai shayad,
Dia Ji Barsat mein tumko,
Shole bhadkana nahin aata....

Agar....

Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
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«Reply #25 on: January 18, 2010, 07:09:52 PM »
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guzarti ho dilpe to bhar aayegi aankhen
phir saz-e-jigar hi banjayengi aankhen
qalb garmate hi bharayengi sansen
paygame ishq yunhi pahunchayengi aankhen
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«Reply #26 on: July 28, 2010, 09:03:18 AM »
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kya ishk kisine ki hogi
jo ham ne kiya hai
nazar se nazar mili to thi
par hale dil baya nahi kiya
chadar ki silvate aj bhi beisi hai
jaisa wo chor gaye hai
intezar ka phalsapha yun hai ki
us curahe pe ajj bhi khara hun
janha wo hame chor gaye the

ami_ac

Quote from: diya_barsat on September 01, 2007, 11:09:56 AM
Na jane Q hume ansu bahana nahi ata,
na jane Q hale dil batana nahi ata,
Q sathi bichad jate hai hamesha humse,
shayad hume hi pyar nibhana nahi ata


PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS
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«Reply #27 on: November 30, 2010, 06:31:58 PM »
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this is my 1st time if it bad so plss forget it...

jin nigaho me basti hai mohabbat usme ashko ki jagah nahi hoti...
mohabbat me to dil sun leta hai sab haal-e-dil yaar ka batane ki jarurat nahi hoti...
sathi bichadate nahi kabhi ishq me, amar unki mohabbat hai hoti...
chaha tha sayad jise, use na thi kadr mohabbat ki warna ye judai na hoti...
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«Reply #28 on: November 30, 2010, 10:30:27 PM »
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Wah wah Yash ji kamaal ke likha aapne,bahut khoobsurti se pne ehsaaso ko pesh kiya.welcome to yo. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: December 03, 2010, 08:11:01 AM »
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Nice one Diya
Aap ke liye

Ishq main ansu nahi khun bhi bhaya jata hai
yaar ko hale dil hi nahi dard bhi bataya jata hai
chae bichad jaye koi sathi rahe ishq main
gamon ka saya bachaya nahi jata
bas ek umeed hi hai hamri aankhon main
ki ek bar to ishqe manjil ko paa lange
yarri ishq jajbaat koi saabit karne ki chej nahi hai
ye to bas ehasas karne karane ki chej hai
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