Chaahat Ki Intaha....

by punam on July 06, 2008, 07:57:32 AM
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unki yaad har ghadi
unke khayaal har pal
unhi ka naam labon pe
unhi ko talaashti hain nazren her pal...

unko chaahti hun kuch is qadar
puchhe koi toh kah nahin sakti
jitna bolun lagta hai kuch kam
kaise samjhaun woh hi mere sab kuchh
woh hai mera beeta kal aaj aur aane wale kal...

jahan jaun jahan rahoon
unke siva kuchh bhi soojhta nahin
woh hi woh is dil me aaj
bin unke main kuchh bhi nahin...
woh hi meri zindagi jeene ka sahara
woh hai mera beeta kal aaj aur aane wale kal...
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2008, 08:09:42 AM »
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unko chaahti hun kuch is qadar
puchhe koi toh kah nahin sakti
jitna bolun lagta hai kuch kam
kaise samjhaun woh hi mere sab kuchh
woh hai mera beeta kal aaj aur aane wale kal...


Wah Punam Saahiba,,, aap ki har nazm aajkal buhat hi gahri dikh rahi hai...
Aise hi likhte rahen,,, shukriya...
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2008, 08:23:58 AM »
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unki yaad har ghadi
unke khayaal har pal
unhi ka naam labon pe
unhi ko talaashti hain nazren her pal...

unko chaahti hun kuch is qadar
puchhe koi toh kah nahin sakti
jitna bolun lagta hai kuch kam
kaise samjhaun woh hi mere sab kuchh
woh hai mera beeta kal aaj aur aane wale kal...

jahan jaun jahan rahoon
unke siva kuchh bhi soojhta nahin
woh hi woh is dil me aaj
bin unke main kuchh bhi nahin...
woh hi meri zindagi jeene ka sahara
woh hai mera beeta kal aaj aur aane wale kal...


 Applause Applause Applause.....bahoot achche punam... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2008, 08:52:56 AM »
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unki yaad har ghadi
unke khayaal har pal
unhi ka naam labon pe
unhi ko talaashti hain nazren her pal...

unko chaahti hun kuch is qadar
puchhe koi toh kah nahin sakti
jitna bolun lagta hai kuch kam
kaise samjhaun woh hi mere sab kuchh
woh hai mera beeta kal aaj aur aane wale kal...


Bahut accha likha hai punam... wah  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2008, 09:52:43 AM »
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Wah Punam Saahiba,,, aap ki har nazm aajkal buhat hi gahri dikh rahi hai...
Aise hi likhte rahen,,, shukriya...


sukriya syed ji... bas yun hi kuch likh di..
jab koi kisi ko dil aur jaan se chahe shayad woh ho sake aisa hi kahe..
kyun k koi kabhi woh kitna pyar karta hai keha nahi sakta..kehna muskil hai...
bas mujhe aisa laga ..baki pata nahi..
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2008, 10:04:08 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause.....bahoot achche punam... Clapping Smiley

sukriya Sanjeev bhaiya...
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2008, 10:06:57 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai punam... wah  Applause Applause

thanx sonu...mujhe dekh k acha lag raha..aap sab ko acha laga..
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2008, 10:07:56 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Punam Ji...Lagey Raho

Thanx sihab ji...
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2008, 10:15:43 AM »
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(Yeh sher mujhe bahut pasand hai. Mai yahan share kar rahi hu)

Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hava Day Mujh Ko
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Apney Ghar Key Kisi Koney Sey Laga Day Mujh Ko
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Eik Qissa Houn Purana Sa Bhula Day Mujh Ko
Doubtey Doubtey Aawaz Teri Sun Jaoun
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2008, 03:20:06 PM »
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unki yaad har ghadi
unke khayaal har pal
unhi ka naam labon pe
unhi ko talaashti hain nazren her pal...

unko chaahti hun kuch is qadar
puchhe koi toh kah nahin sakti
jitna bolun lagta hai kuch kam
kaise samjhaun woh hi mere sab kuchh
woh hai mera beeta kal aaj aur aane wale kal...

jahan jaun jahan rahoon
unke siva kuchh bhi soojhta nahin
woh hi woh is dil me aaj
bin unke main kuchh bhi nahin...
woh hi meri zindagi jeene ka sahara
woh hai mera beeta kal aaj aur aane wale kal...


Bohut khoob punam ji  
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2008, 03:28:39 PM »
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(Yeh sher mujhe bahut pasand hai. Mai yahan share kar rahi hu)

Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hava Day Mujh Ko
Ungliyaan Pheir Kar Baloun Mein Sula Day Mujh Ko
Jiss Trah Faaltu Guldaan Parey Rehtey Hein
Apney Ghar Key Kisi Koney Sey Laga Day Mujh Ko
Yaad Kar Key Mujhay Takleef Hi Hotti Ho Gi
Eik Qissa Houn Purana Sa Bhula Day Mujh Ko
Doubtey Doubtey Aawaz Teri Sun Jaoun
Akhri Baar Tu Sahil Sey Sada Day Mujh Ko
Main Tery Hijar Mein Chup Chap Na Mar JAoun Kahein


Bohut umda sonia ji behtareen ghazal he, magar ek misra kam he, yaad aa jaaye to likhdena, khair... khoob he. Both Thumbs Up
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2008, 06:00:04 AM »
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(Yeh sher mujhe bahut pasand hai. Mai yahan share kar rahi hu)

Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hava Day Mujh Ko
Ungliyaan Pheir Kar Baloun Mein Sula Day Mujh Ko
Jiss Trah Faaltu Guldaan Parey Rehtey Hein
Apney Ghar Key Kisi Koney Sey Laga Day Mujh Ko
Yaad Kar Key Mujhay Takleef Hi Hotti Ho Gi
Eik Qissa Houn Purana Sa Bhula Day Mujh Ko
Doubtey Doubtey Aawaz Teri Sun Jaoun
Akhri Baar Tu Sahil Sey Sada Day Mujh Ko
Main Tery Hijar Mein Chup Chap Na Mar JAoun Kahein


bahot khoob sonu..thanx..yehan share ki..
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2008, 06:01:36 AM »
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Bohut khoob punam ji  

sukriya sayyid Randeri ji....
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2008, 12:18:28 PM »
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EK HEE JAWAAB  Applause Applause Applause

NETRA...
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2008, 12:40:32 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Punam Ji.
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