Chaand Ka TukDa...!!!

by Delicate_Doll on February 26, 2007, 12:50:37 PM
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2007, 06:56:44 PM »
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Superb Expression of feelings with Love...Excellent.....!!!!!! :D
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2007, 04:29:39 AM »
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sweetest one....
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2007, 06:01:21 AM »
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Jab wo Chandani  raaton mein chupke se  aa  jaate hain
Apni  khubsoo se  mujhe  mehka  jaate   hain

Jab woh apni baahein faila ke pass bulate hain
badh jati hai dhadkane,hum unki baahon mein simat jaate hain
 
Jab wo hume apni khayalon mein tasavur karte hain
Dil-o-jaan ko na jaane wo bechain se kar jate hain

Jab wo meri mohabbat ki pyaas ko bujate hain
Mere din aur raat ko madhosh kar jate hain

Jab wo hume neend mein karwat badlte dekhte hain
Meri rooh ke pass hone ka ehsaas de jate hain

Jab woh hume apni aagosh mein bhar lete hain
Humari jazbah ko iztiraab ka anjaam de jate hain

Jab woh hume Chand ka tukda keh jate hain
Hum khudko aaine mein dekh kar sharma jate hain




bahoot khuub..... bahoot aacha likha hai aapne....
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2007, 10:12:32 AM »
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Superb Expression of feelings with Love...Excellent.....!!!!!! :D



:D  Usual Smile  :oops:  Usual Smile  :D  :oops:  :oops:  sachi muchi  :oops:

Thanks a lot..Badnaam_Shayar  Usual Smile

aap aaye humare darbar pe (Thread) bina kuch likhe chal diye
aap toh Yo ke mahan-shayar ho..aise hi tarif kar k chal diye

aap bhi kuch likhte toh aacha lagta
anyway

Thank u so much for praising my work  Usual Smile

tuti futi likhne ki kabhi kabhi khosis kar leti hu
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2007, 10:15:29 AM »
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sweetest one....


Thank u soooooooooo much deepika jee  :oops:  Usual Smile  

bahut bahut shukriya mujh jaisi fatichar shayari likhne wali ko tarif karne  k liye

aap b bina likhe chal gaye ...apka sweetest one kehna hume bahut pyaar laga  :oops:
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2007, 10:20:54 AM »
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Jab wo Chandani  raaton mein chupke se  aa  jaate hain
Apni  khubsoo se  mujhe  mehka  jaate   hain

Jab woh apni baahein faila ke pass bulate hain
badh jati hai dhadkane,hum unki baahon mein simat jaate hain
 
Jab wo hume apni khayalon mein tasavur karte hain
Dil-o-jaan ko na jaane wo bechain se kar jate hain

Jab wo meri mohabbat ki pyaas ko bujate hain
Mere din aur raat ko madhosh kar jate hain

Jab wo hume neend mein karwat badlte dekhte hain
Meri rooh ke pass hone ka ehsaas de jate hain

Jab woh hume apni aagosh mein bhar lete hain
Humari jazbah ko iztiraab ka anjaam de jate hain

Jab woh hume Chand ka tukda keh jate hain
Hum khudko aaine mein dekh kar sharma jate hain




bahoot khuub..... bahoot aacha likha hai aapne....


Thanks a lot Alon Bad jee :oops:  :oops:  tarif k liye shukriya

aap to yo k winner ho aur aap b nahi likha..khair

once again thank u so much  Usual Smile  :oops:
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2007, 11:13:44 AM »
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Tumne pukara or hum Chale aaye


Gujrunga jab bhi me teri Gali se.....
Toh Nazron me hamesha tera ek Armaan rakhunga.....

Phookunga kuch Kalam ki Daad tujhe.....
Aur tujhe Yoon hee Khat ke Jariye roz ek naya Farmaan likhunga......

Khata nahi yeh Aadil Dil ki phir tere Naam yeh Sansaar likhunga.....
Janam Janam ka Pyasa hai tera Dil toh usi  ke naam apna harr Jaam likhunga.....

Gujrunga jab bhi me teri Gali se.....
Toh Nazron me hamesha tera ek Armaan rakhunga.....!!! :wink:
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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2007, 11:30:07 AM »
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sweetest one....


Thank u soooooooooo much deepika jee  :oops:  Usual Smile  

bahut bahut shukriya mujh jaisi fatichar shayari likhne wali ko tarif karne  k liye

aap b bina likhe chal gaye ...apka sweetest one kehna hume bahut pyaar laga  :oops:



How sweet u r.... I lyk the way u written over here...

Tere askho na girne denge Zamin par..
Hum tere liye Aisi Sawgaat likh denge...

Sajati ho jo raang apne sapno mein
Hum Khuda se keh un duhao ko tere naam kara denge...

Zamane ka tho barosa nahi hai hume
par hum khud ki khusiyon ko tere naam kar denge....
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2007, 11:32:20 AM »
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bahut ache bachi n all
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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2007, 12:07:05 PM »
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Tumne pukara or hum Chale aaye


Gujrunga jab bhi me teri Gali se.....
Toh Nazron me hamesha tera ek Armaan rakhunga.....

Phookunga kuch Kalam ki Daad tujhe.....
Aur tujhe Yoon hee Khat ke Jariye roz ek naya Farmaan likhunga......

Khata nahi yeh Aadil Dil ki phir tere Naam yeh Sansaar likhunga.....
Janam Janam ka Pyasa hai tera Dil toh usi  ke naam apna harr Jaam likhunga.....

Gujrunga jab bhi me teri Gali se.....
Toh Nazron me hamesha tera ek Armaan rakhunga.....!!! :wink:


shukriya aane k liye aur likhne k liye ..he he
wah wah...

hum bhi kuch likhne ki dubara khosis karenge..jaldi hi  :oops:  Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2007, 12:09:25 PM »
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Tumne pukara or hum Chale aaye


Gujrunga jab bhi me teri Gali se.....
Toh Nazron me hamesha tera ek Armaan rakhunga.....

Phookunga kuch Kalam ki Daad tujhe.....
Aur tujhe Yoon hee Khat ke Jariye roz ek naya Farmaan likhunga......

Khata nahi yeh Aadil Dil ki phir tere Naam yeh Sansaar likhunga.....
Janam Janam ka Pyasa hai tera Dil toh usi  ke naam apna harr Jaam likhunga.....

Gujrunga jab bhi me teri Gali se.....
Toh Nazron me hamesha tera ek Armaan rakhunga.....!!! :wink:


shukriya aane k liye aur likhne k liye ..he he
wah wah...

hum bhi kuch likhne ki dubara khosis karenge..jaldi hi  :oops:  Usual Smile


My Pleasure.....and i will dafenately Wait for ur next Poem....!!! :wink:
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2007, 12:27:26 PM »
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sweetest one....


Thank u soooooooooo much deepika jee  :oops:  Usual Smile  

bahut bahut shukriya mujh jaisi fatichar shayari likhne wali ko tarif karne  k liye

aap b bina likhe chal gaye ...apka sweetest one kehna hume bahut pyaar laga  :oops:



How sweet u r.... I lyk the way u written over here...

Tere askho na girne denge Zamin par..
Hum tere liye Aisi Sawgaat likh denge...

Sajati ho jo raang apne sapno mein
Hum Khuda se keh un duhao ko tere naam kara denge...

Zamane ka tho barosa nahi hai hume
par hum khud ki khusiyon ko tere naam kar denge....


thanks..blush blush  :oops:  he he..apne hume sweet jo kaha iss k liye
thanks..ye meri phele khosis thi ishq me..isske aag apni collection hi dala tha..kabhi khud likhne ki khosis nahi ki thi..

again excellent like u Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 28, 2007, 12:31:12 PM »
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bahut ache bachi n all


thanks mateen...srif bahut aache se kaam nahi chalega..tume likhna hai

warna khair nahi  :lol: tumhara likha huamre thread me na ho..toh thread adhora hojayega na lolzz
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«Reply #14 on: February 28, 2007, 12:35:52 PM »
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aur badnaam jee..hum zaroor likhenge..shyari k hisab se picture b doond rahe hain..jaldi hi post karenge,..aur umeed hai ki main bahut aacha likhne ki khosis karoon..apki umeedon pe khadi utharon lolzz ..thanks one again guys..mere hausla badne k liye..warna me likh b nahi paati
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