chahat.....!!!!!!!

by sarfira on May 19, 2013, 07:33:31 PM
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kabhi khushi bann ke kabhi khaar bann ke
tu aana zindagee me bahaar bann ke

maana teri raahen judaa mujhse
tu chlnaa mgr saath iss dil ka karaar bann ke

badee muskill dagar aur hawaaye.n hain sard
tu lipattnaa mere tann se makhmalee faar bann ke

hogi rashk mujhko uskee kismat pe jaanaa
tu barsegi jispe, khushiyon ki phuhaar bann ke

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jai babaji

mujhe iss post me sirf technically fault dikhaiega
its my reqst coz its an experiment only
thanx
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2013, 12:27:42 AM »
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Bahut khoob Baba jee
perfect
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2013, 01:19:44 AM »
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kooch sarfiree c post rahee sarfira ji,.........
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2013, 02:39:29 AM »
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kabhi khushi bann ke kabhi khaar bann ke
tu aana zindagee me bahaar bann ke
lekin main aao.n gi singaar kar ke aur aisa singaar kar ke ki bhootni lagoo.n Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
maana teri raahen judaa mujhse
tu chlnaa mgr saath iss dil ka karaar bann ke
jai baba tumhein mere saath qaraar kabhi nahin aaye gaa icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
badee muskill dagar aur hawaaye.n hain sard
tu lipattnaa mere tann se makhmalee faar bann ke
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hogi rashk mujhko uskee kismat pe jaanaa
tu barsegi jispe, khushiyon ki phuhaar bann ke
bataao.n gi uska naam waqt aane do per jelous mat hona
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jai babaji

mujhe iss post me sirf technically fault dikhaiega
its my reqst coz its an experiment only
thanx
Usual Smile

sahi jaa rahe ho jaibaba.............!
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2013, 03:35:42 AM »
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kabhi khushi bann ke kabhi khaar bann ke
tu aana zindagee me bahaar bann ke

maana teri raahen judaa mujhse
tu chlnaa mgr saath iss dil ka karaar bann ke

badee muskill dagar aur hawaaye.n hain sard
tu lipattnaa mere tann se makhmalee faar bann ke

hogi rashk mujhko uskee kismat pe jaanaa
tu barsegi jispe, khushiyon ki phuhaar bann ke

Usual Smile
jai babaji

mujhe iss post me sirf technically fault dikhaiega
its my reqst coz its an experiment only
thanx
Usual Smile

Baba ji, kshama chaahuNga, ismeiN Technical, Chemical ya Mechanical faults to nahiN dikh rahiN mujhe, haaN grammatical faults zaroor haiN  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile. Kaafiye matching nahiN haiN, aur ye kalaam behr meiN nahiN hai. Aapne behr meiN likhi hoti to kaafiye phir bhi chal jaate.

Zyaada discuss karna ho to YoIndia Helpline- 1800-420-4200 pe call kareiN, agar ye no. nahiN mile (MaiN bata duN k aisi poori sambhaawana hai  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile,) to aap mujhe bejhijhak kisi bhi time PM kar sakte haiN, ye alag baat hai ke maiN apne time pe hi PM check karuNga  laughing4 laughing4 laughing4.

By the way, aap agar hamaari salaah chaahte haiN apni shayari meiN improvement ke liye to kaafi achhi baat hai, hameiN khushi hogi help karke. Ham jo bhi haiN, jitne meiN haiN, aapko neyk salaah deNge. You are most welcome.
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2013, 02:41:04 PM »
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Hello Check..Poem Testing,,Poem testing..

No technical Faults Found..
Experiment Successful..
Congratulations..happy9 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2013, 03:55:54 PM »
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Baba ji, kshama chaahuNga, ismeiN Technical, Chemical ya Mechanical faults to nahiN dikh rahiN mujhe, haaN grammatical faults zaroor haiN  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile. Kaafiye matching nahiN haiN, aur ye kalaam behr meiN nahiN hai. Aapne behr meiN likhi hoti to kaafiye phir bhi chal jaate.

Zyaada discuss karna ho to YoIndia Helpline- 1800-420-4200 pe call kareiN, agar ye no. nahiN mile (MaiN bata duN k aisi poori sambhaawana hai  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile,) to aap mujhe bejhijhak kisi bhi time PM kar sakte haiN, ye alag baat hai ke maiN apne time pe hi PM check karuNga  laughing4 laughing4 laughing4.

By the way, aap agar hamaari salaah chaahte haiN apni shayari meiN improvement ke liye to kaafi achhi baat hai, hameiN khushi hogi help karke. Ham jo bhi haiN, jitne meiN haiN, aapko neyk salaah deNge. You are most welcome.

bahot bahot shukriya aapka
mujhe yahi Janna tha ki fault kidhar hai
mene PM Kia hai aapko..dhyan dijiega jab time mile Usual Smile

baaki sabhi dosto ka bhi shukrguzaar hoon dil se
thank you so much Usual Smile

khush rhie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2013, 07:45:38 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob sarfiraji. ekdam perfect. congrats..
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2013, 02:10:20 AM »
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kabhi khushi bann ke kabhi khaar bann ke
tu aana zindagee me bahaar bann ke

maana teri raahen judaa mujhse
tu chlnaa mgr saath iss dil ka karaar bann ke

badee muskill dagar aur hawaaye.n hain sard
tu lipattnaa mere tann se makhmalee faar bann ke

hogi rashk mujhko uskee kismat pe jaanaa
tu barsegi jispe, khushiyon ki phuhaar bann ke

Usual Smile
jai babaji

mujhe iss post me sirf technically fault dikhaiega
its my reqst coz its an experiment only
thanx
Usual Smile

bahot khoob sirfira ji mere bus ka nahin hai aap ke azeem kalaam mein nukhs nikaalna
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2013, 09:39:41 PM »
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kabhi khushi bann ke kabhi khaar bann ke
tu aana zindagee me bahaar bann ke

maana teri raahen judaa mujhse
tu chlnaa mgr saath iss dil ka karaar bann ke

badee muskill dagar aur hawaaye.n hain sard
tu lipattnaa mere tann se makhmalee faar bann ke

hogi rashk mujhko uskee kismat pe jaanaa
tu barsegi jispe, khushiyon ki phuhaar bann ke

Usual Smile
jai babaji

mujhe iss post me sirf technically fault dikhaiega
its my reqst coz its an experiment only
thanx
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naice
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2013, 03:14:06 PM »
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bahot khoob sirfira ji mere bus ka nahin hai aap ke azeem kalaam mein nukhs nikaalna
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Sirji thoda sa fault to nikal dete na Usual Smile
thnq ji
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