CHALE AAO HAMARE GAAW MAIN

by poem143s on July 06, 2007, 03:02:12 AM

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Kabhi chale aao tum hamare gaaw main
Dono baithenge fir peepal ki chhaw main
Unche niche hain parvat, pathreele hai rashte
Chalna sambhal ke kahi kaanta na chubh jaaye paaw main
Jab aaoge tum to pyar bhari beeten hongi
Dono haath main haath liye baitha karenge naaw main
Kabhi chale aao tum hamare gaaw main
Dono baitha karenge fir peepal ki chhaw main


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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2007, 04:57:37 AM »

So Innocent Poetry... Usual Smile

Sameer... the best thing about ur writing is that, you use very simple words but with different theme always... Usual Smile

Good... Keep Writing..


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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2007, 06:32:37 PM »

I second with Shikha.. Simple yet Good. !


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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2007, 02:27:44 AM »

Ricky & Shikha thanks for your valuable comments
Ab to mera gaawn gaawn nahi sahar ho gaya, kyoun ricky bhai sahi kaha na, aawadi barne lagi pahile shikha ji aaye fir ricky bahi ab pata nahi kon aa jaaye chalo sahi hai na sab mil ke rahenge

Take care
Sameer