Chaley Bhi Aao - R. Rangila

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Chaley Bhi Aao Ke Ham Intezaar Kartey Hain
Tumhari Yaad Se Aankhon Me Ashk Bhartey Hain

Tumhen Bhanak Bhi Na Hogi Hamari Chahat Ki
Magar Ham Hain Ke Bas Ek Tumse Pyar Kartey Hain

Bina Tumharey Sabhi Soona Soona Lagta Hai
Judaai Me Tumhari Jeetey Hain Na Martey Hain

Ayan Karen Bhi To Chahat Ki Dastaan Kyon Kar
Tumharey Naam Ki Bad’naami Se Jo Dartey Hain

Apney Hontaon Ko Rakhen Band Bhi To Kya Hasil
Hijr Ka Dard To Nazren Bhi Bayan Kartey Hain

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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2016, 11:20:18 PM »
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bahut bahut umdah Rangila Jee waah waaahhhhh waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2016, 03:33:41 AM »
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Bahot khoob..!
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2016, 05:54:39 AM »
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Chaley Bhi Aao Ke Ham Intezaar Kartey Hain
Tumhari Yaad Se Aankhon Me Ashk Bhartey Hain

Tumhen Bhanak Bhi Na Hogi Hamari Chahat Ki
Magar Ham Hain Ke Bas Ek Tumse Pyar Kartey Hain

Bina Tumharey Sabhi Soona Soona Lagta Hai
Judaai Me Tumhari Jeetey Hain Na Martey Hain

Ayan Karen Bhi To Chahat Ki Dastaan Kyon Kar
Tumharey Naam Ki Bad’naami Se Jo Dartey Hain

Apney Hontaon Ko Rakhen Band Bhi To Kya Hasil
Hijr Ka Dard To Nazren Bhi Bayan Kartey Hain  nazre.n moannas hain phir to karti hain hogaa jo suitable nahin hai

hijr kaa dard hum nazro.n se bayaa.n karte hain


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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2016, 07:42:11 AM »
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very nice....
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bahut bahut umdah Rangila Jee waah waaahhhhh waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Bahot khoob..!

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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2016, 08:49:22 AM »
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very nice....

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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2016, 12:46:54 PM »
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Ayan Karen Bhi To Chahat Ki Dastaan Kyon Kar
Tumharey Naam Ki Bad’naami Se Jo Dartey Hain

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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2016, 07:54:21 PM »
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Chaley Bhi Aao Ke Ham Intezaar Kartey Hain
Tumhari Yaad Se Aankhon Me Ashk Bhartey Hain

Tumhen Bhanak Bhi Na Hogi Hamari Chahat Ki
Magar Ham Hain Ke Bas Ek Tumse Pyar Kartey Hain

Bina Tumharey Sabhi Soona Soona Lagta Hai
Judaai Me Tumhari Jeetey Hain Na Martey Hain

Ayan Karen Bhi To Chahat Ki Dastaan Kyon Kar
Tumharey Naam Ki Bad’naami Se Jo Dartey Hain

Apney Hontaon Ko Rakhen Band Bhi To Kya Hasil
Hijr Ka Dard To Nazren Bhi Bayan Kartey Hain

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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2016, 06:37:45 AM »
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Adil bhai bahot bahot shukriya maonas aur muzakkar ka farqh batane ke liye - sach mashkoor hoon aapka, ke kuch jan'ne aur seekh'ne ko mila Usual Smile
Aese hi aapki rahnumaai darkaar hogi... koi ustad nahi hai mera aur na hi main ne Ghalib, Iqbal, Meer etc ka diwaan padh kar kuch seekha hai - bas kuch shaoqh hai so apna hi likh leta hoon...
Aap'se itni hi guzarish hai ke meri islah karte rahiye ke main kuch seekh sakon Usual Smile shukriya Usual Smile


salaam alaikum janaab rangeela sahab,

aap ki baato.n se tanz ki boo aa rahi hai . mera khayaal hai aap ko meri baat buri lagi mujhe muaaf karin.mujhe maloom hai aap urdu achchchi jante hain isliye moannas aur mozaakkar ke maane bhi jaante hain main ne apni baat ko stress dene ke liye nazar ke hawaale se moannas likha . aap mujhe is tarah jawaab dene ke badle mein correct kar lete to achcha hota uss misre ko yaa phir mujhe ye kah dete ki jo aap ne likhaa hai sahi hai. main bhi aap ki tatah seekh hi rahaa hoon .aainda main aisa kuchh nahin kahoon gaa. problem ye hain naa rangeela saahab yahaan likhne walaa her insaa.n chaahe gadhaa likhe yaa ghodaa likhe waah waah hi chaahtaa hai isliye puraane shaayar YOINDIA CHHORR kar chale gaye hain yaa bahot kam aate hain. doosri baat aap shaayad hyderabaad se hain isliye dakkani urdu bolte hain aur likhne mein bhi kuch alfaaw mein clash hotaa hai jaise agar hum bole ge to paani ka katra yaa qatra bole ge aur hyderabaad waale paani ka khtra bolte hain ab ye confusion hotaa hai ki ye kaun saa khatraa hai danger walaa hai kyaa aise kai lafz aap bhi likhte hain aur digar mere hyderabaad ke doosre saathi jaise mast qalandar saahab raushan saahab ye koi aib nahin hai . Any ways main apni baat waaps letaa hoon aur mujhe muaf karein.


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«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2016, 02:08:56 PM »
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salaam alaikum janaab rangeela sahab,

aap ki baato.n se tanz ki boo aa rahi hai . mera khayaal hai aap ko meri baat buri lagi mujhe muaaf karin.mujhe maloom hai aap urdu achchchi jante hain isliye moannas aur mozaakkar ke maane bhi jaante hain main ne apni baat ko stress dene ke liye nazar ke hawaale se moannas likha . aap mujhe is tarah jawaab dene ke badle mein correct kar lete to achcha hota uss misre ko yaa phir mujhe ye kah dete ki jo aap ne likhaa hai sahi hai. main bhi aap ki tatah seekh hi rahaa hoon .aainda main aisa kuchh nahin kahoon gaa. problem ye hain naa rangeela saahab yahaan likhne walaa her insaa.n chaahe gadhaa likhe yaa ghodaa likhe waah waah hi chaahtaa hai isliye puraane shaayar YOINDIA CHHORR kar chale gaye hain yaa bahot kam aate hain. doosri baat aap shaayad hyderabaad se hain isliye dakkani urdu bolte hain aur likhne mein bhi kuch alfaaw mein clash hotaa hai jaise agar hum bole ge to paani ka katra yaa qatra bole ge aur hyderabaad waale paani ka khtra bolte hain ab ye confusion hotaa hai ki ye kaun saa khatraa hai danger walaa hai kyaa aise kai lafz aap bhi likhte hain aur digar mere hyderabaad ke doosre saathi jaise mast qalandar saahab raushan saahab ye koi aib nahin hai . Any ways main apni baat waaps letaa hoon aur mujhe muaf karein.


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«Reply #14 on: April 29, 2016, 09:50:39 PM »
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Very nice rustumji...
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