Chalo chalein.......

by jannatjahan on April 30, 2009, 09:00:34 AM
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Chalo chalein dur kahin tum aur hum
behati ho sheetal bayar jahan
ho rumaani mausam
jahan hansi najare ho
jharne ki ho kal kal
farsh par bichi ho jahan
dur talak hariyaali makhmal
jahan parindon ki gunjan ka shor ho
jahan faili rumaniyat har oar ho
gagan ke tale baithein
dharti ki godd me
kisi ghane pipal ki chhanv me
kisi ped ki oat me
jahan nach uthe mann mayura
jahan pura ho jaye har sapna adhura
jahan ho faili dur talak
chhahat ki bahar
jahan baith karein dono
apni mohabbat ka izhaar
lehron ka saahil se milan ho jahan
amber dharti par jhukta ho jahan
chalo chalein wahan
banaye apni chhahat ka jahan
jahan mohabbat hamari
kare har najara bayan
jahan har taraf ho bas pyaar hi pyaar ka shamman
chalo chalein wahan tum aur hum
ho sheetal bayar jahan ho rumani mausam
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2009, 09:21:13 AM »
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bahoth umda jannathjahan ji acha khasa geet likh diya apne hame bahoth pasand aya likhte rahiyega !! Rub tumhe khush rakhe !!

JQ
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2009, 09:29:52 AM »
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Chalo chalein dur kahin tum aur hum
behati ho sheetal bayar jahan
ho rumaani mausam
jahan hansi najare ho
jharne ki ho kal kal
farsh par bichi ho jahan
dur talak hariyaali makhmal
jahan parindon ki gunjan ka shor ho
jahan faili rumaniyat har oar ho
gagan ke tale baithein
dharti ki godd me
kisi ghane pipal ki chhanv me
kisi ped ki oat me
jahan nach uthe mann mayura
jahan pura ho jaye har sapna adhura
jahan ho faili dur talak
chhahat ki bahar
jahan baith karein dono
apni mohabbat ka izhaar
lehron ka saahil se milan ho jahan
amber dharti par jhukta ho jahan
chalo chalein wahan
banaye apni chhahat ka jahan
jahan mohabbat hamari
kare har najara bayan
jahan har taraf ho bas pyaar hi pyaar ka shamman
chalo chalein wahan tum aur hum
ho sheetal bayar jahan ho rumani mausam


Bahut Khoob JJ Dear,  Applause  Applause

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2009, 09:56:42 AM »
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bahoth umda jannathjahan ji acha khasa geet likh diya apne hame bahoth pasand aya likhte rahiyega !! Rub tumhe khush rakhe !!

JQ
Shukriyaa Qadir ji...Itni khubsurat dua ke liye ek baar aur shukriyaa notworthy
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2009, 10:01:12 AM »
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Bahut Khoob JJ Dear,  Applause  Applause

Shally.

Hey Thanks Dear shally..First time on my thread...achha laga Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2009, 12:07:34 PM »
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Chalo chalein dur kahin tum aur hum
behati ho sheetal bayar jahan
ho rumaani mausam
jahan hansi najare ho
jharne ki ho kal kal
farsh par bichi ho jahan
dur talak hariyaali makhmal
jahan parindon ki gunjan ka shor ho
jahan faili rumaniyat har oar ho
gagan ke tale baithein
dharti ki godd me
kisi ghane pipal ki chhanv me
kisi ped ki oat me
jahan nach uthe mann mayura
jahan pura ho jaye har sapna adhura
jahan ho faili dur talak
chhahat ki bahar
jahan baith karein dono
apni mohabbat ka izhaar
lehron ka saahil se milan ho jahan
amber dharti par jhukta ho jahan
chalo chalein wahan
banaye apni chhahat ka jahan
jahan mohabbat hamari
kare har najara bayan
jahan har taraf ho bas pyaar hi pyaar ka shamman
chalo chalein wahan tum aur hum
ho sheetal bayar jahan ho rumani mausam


Waah...Bohot Khoob Jannat
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salil2002
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2009, 12:18:18 PM »
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Chalo chalein dur kahin tum aur hum
behati ho sheetal bayar jahan
ho rumaani mausam
jahan hansi najare ho
jharne ki ho kal kal
farsh par bichi ho jahan
dur talak hariyaali makhmal
jahan parindon ki gunjan ka shor ho
jahan faili rumaniyat har oar ho
gagan ke tale baithein
dharti ki godd me
kisi ghane pipal ki chhanv me
kisi ped ki oat me
jahan nach uthe mann mayura
jahan pura ho jaye har sapna adhura
jahan ho faili dur talak
chhahat ki bahar
jahan baith karein dono
apni mohabbat ka izhaar
lehron ka saahil se milan ho jahan
amber dharti par jhukta ho jahan
chalo chalein wahan
banaye apni chhahat ka jahan
jahan mohabbat hamari
kare har najara bayan
jahan har taraf ho bas pyaar hi pyaar ka shamman
chalo chalein wahan tum aur hum
ho sheetal bayar jahan ho rumani mausam



good work jannat......... beautiful aap toh lagta hai kii mohabbat main likhwa kar hi maanengi aur mujhe dard meinlikhna chhodna padega

mohabbat ko dhoondne saath tere chal diye
kya doond paunga , tere sapno ka sansaar
baahon main ho bahein, aur ho neela  aasmaan
jahan ho bas mohabbat aur ho khushiyaan beshumaar
hawaon main , darakhton main bas ho pyaar hi pyaar
khilti har kali ho ,jahan bhawara ho bekaraar
behta ho paani jaise sangeet kii lehrein
aa chal chale hum wahin par ja k thehre
jahan na dushmani ho, aur na ho bhedbhaav
kaahin toh hogi duniya aisi, hoga ek gaanv
meethi meethi baatein jahan karte ho sab
aa chal chale hum, jahan hai rehta RAB


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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2009, 01:00:22 PM »
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Bohat khoob JJ... and Salil
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2009, 12:23:27 PM »
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Waah...Bohot Khoob Jannat
Thanks Dear Celmira Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2009, 01:33:40 PM »
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Bahut khoob Jannat dear and Salil ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2009, 05:42:00 AM »
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good work jannat......... beautiful aap toh lagta hai kii mohabbat main likhwa kar hi maanengi aur mujhe dard meinlikhna chhodna padega

mohabbat ko dhoondne saath tere chal diye
kya doond paunga , tere sapno ka sansaar
baahon main ho bahein, aur ho neela  aasmaan
jahan ho bas mohabbat aur ho khushiyaan beshumaar
hawaon main , darakhton main bas ho pyaar hi pyaar
khilti har kali ho ,jahan bhawara ho bekaraar
behta ho paani jaise sangeet kii lehrein
aa chal chale hum wahin par ja k thehre
jahan na dushmani ho, aur na ho bhedbhaav
kaahin toh hogi duniya aisi, hoga ek gaanv
meethi meethi baatein jahan karte ho sab
aa chal chale hum, jahan hai rehta RAB



Bahut Achhe Salil....Char din ki zindagi hai mere Dost..mohabbat karo aur mohabbat me jiyo...is kambakhat Dard me kya rakha hai......

Chal chalein door kahin
baadlon ke paar
dono mil banaye apne
sapno ka sansaar
rashq kare jahan sara
dekh hamara pyar
jahan ho tumhe hum par
hume tum par aitbaar
jahan mil jaye do bechain
dilon ko karar
jahan na ho kahin
kisi ranjeeson ki deewar
chal chalein ho kar
mohabbat ki kasti me sawar
is jahan se door kahin
chal chalein baadlon ke paar
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2009, 05:57:09 AM »
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Bahut khoob Jannat dear and Salil ji
Thanks Dear Roja
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2009, 04:29:12 PM »
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beautiful, jannat ji.. bohot hi khubsoorat likha hai.. loved it!
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2009, 05:29:06 PM »
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Bahut Khoooooooob JANNAT & SALIL.. Bahut Pyaara Bhara Likha hai aap dono ne... Applause


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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2009, 05:30:12 PM »
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wah good work Jannat and Salil ji
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