Chalo Na... Us Chaand Ki Dharti Par!!!.... {{Angel}}

by angel4u on April 07, 2009, 03:43:59 PM
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Chalo Na!
Chalein Us Chaand Ki Dharti Par,
Khilkhilate Sitaaron Ki Aagosh Mein,
Thak Gaye Hai Is Zamane Ki Chehelpehel Se,
Neeli Chaadar Mein Simatne Ko Dil Karta Hai Ab,

Dekho Na Ye Hawa Ki Doli Saji Hai Hamare Liye,
Har Ek Pannchhi Pata Dega Hamein Chaandke Ghar Ka,
Pahadon Pe Ruk Jayenge Ghadi Do Ghadi Jaanam,

Le Lenge Isse Phoolon Ka Ek Haseen Guldasta,
Teri Baahon Sa Narm Na Sahi Maana Meri Jaan,
Sanwar Lenge Hum Bhi Inse Tujhe Rijhane Ke Liye,

Jab Padenge Hamare Qadam Us Makhmali Chaandni Par,
Samet Lena Apni Baahon Mein Kahin Fisal Na Jaaye Hum,

Wahan Bana Lenge Ek Chhota Sa Mitti Ka Aashiyaana,
Sukoon Se Karenge Har Ek Tootte Hue Taare Se Baatein,
Odh Lenge Aasman Ki Chhat Chehekti Sardiyon Mein,
Garmiyon Mein Baithe Rahenge Kisi Oss Ki Boond Mein,

Chalo Na............. Chalo Na.........

Dekho Wo Chaand Bhi Gungunane Laga Hai Dheeme Dheeme,
Apni Chaandni Se Kehne Laga Hia Kuch Chupke Chupke,
Inki Mohabbat Mein Bus Yunhi Pighal Jaaye Hum Tum,

Tu Chaand Hai Is Dilki Zameen Ka Humdam,
Main Hoon Shayad Koi Kali Teri Taraf Dhali Hui,
Dekhenge Kuch Aise Hi Haseen Manzar Teri Hi Aankhon Mein,
Guzaar Lenge Apni Puri Zindagi Teri Chaahon Mein Hum,

Yehi Khwaab Humne Sambhale Hai Teri Amanaton Ki Tarah,
Piroke Isme Har Ek Moti Apne Asuvan Ka,
Chun Lenge Teri Palkon Se Dard Ka Har Mausam,

Chalo Na....!!!
Chale Us Masoom Chaand Ki Dharti Par...
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2009, 03:55:20 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob!! Ek Khoobsurat Geet Ke Jaisi Hai aapki yeh poetry,
Bahut Hi Khoobsurti se likha hai aapne Angel!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2009, 04:01:26 PM »
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Bahut shukriya Khwaish Ji...
Thanks for always reading and commenting on my works...

Its really a pleasure to read your comments... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2009, 04:15:26 PM »
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Thanks...
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2009, 04:25:02 PM »
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Wooow Sweetu... bahut khoob  Applause Applause
Jaise khwaish ji ne kaha ek geet sa laga padkar.  Thumbs UP
Keep flowing dear.
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2009, 04:29:23 PM »
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Thank You Soooooo much Roja...

Thankyou !
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2009, 04:45:52 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on April 07, 2009, 04:29:23 PM
Thank You Soooooo much Roja...

Thankyou !

Welcome sweetu
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2009, 04:48:54 PM »
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Bohot maasoom bohot pyara sa...bohot hi khoobsurat Angel.... bohot khoob dear  icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2009, 04:50:18 PM »
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Beautiful, angel.. bohot hi khoobsurat tareekey se apni khwaish zahir ki hai..
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2009, 04:57:45 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 07, 2009, 04:48:54 PM
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Bohot maasoom bohot pyara sa...bohot hi khoobsurat Angel.... bohot khoob dear  icon_flower
Thank You Sooo much Talat..
Glad to receive such a lovely comment from you... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2009, 04:58:30 PM »
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Quote from: sanya310 on April 07, 2009, 04:50:18 PM
Beautiful, angel.. bohot hi khoobsurat tareekey se apni khwaish zahir ki hai..

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanya....  Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2009, 08:22:12 PM »
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Applause Applause Bahaut khoob Angel jee...
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2009, 02:28:40 AM »
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Thanks DH... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2009, 05:45:54 AM »
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Quote from: angel4u on April 07, 2009, 03:43:59 PM
Chalo Na!
Chalein Us Chaand Ki Dharti Par,
Khilkhilate Sitaaron Ki Aagosh Mein,
Thak Gaye Hai Is Zamane Ki Chehelpehel Se,
Neeli Chaadar Mein Simatne Ko Dil Karta Hai Ab,

Dekho Na Ye Hawa Ki Doli Saji Hai Hamare Liye,
Har Ek Pannchhi Pata Dega Hamein Chaandke Ghar Ka,
Pahadon Pe Ruk Jayenge Ghadi Do Ghadi Jaanam,

Le Lenge Isse Phoolon Ka Ek Haseen Guldasta,
Teri Baahon Sa Narm Na Sahi Maana Meri Jaan,
Sanwar Lenge Hum Bhi Inse Tujhe Rijhane Ke Liye,

Jab Padenge Hamare Qadam Us Makhmali Chaandni Par,
Samet Lena Apni Baahon Mein Kahin Fisal Na Jaaye Hum,

Wahan Bana Lenge Ek Chhota Sa Mitti Ka Aashiyaana,
Sukoon Se Karenge Har Ek Tootte Hue Taare Se Baatein,
Odh Lenge Aasman Ki Chhat Chehekti Sardiyon Mein,
Garmiyon Mein Baithe Rahenge Kisi Oss Ki Boond Mein,

Chalo Na............. Chalo Na.........

Dekho Wo Chaand Bhi Gungunane Laga Hai Dheeme Dheeme,
Apni Chaandni Se Kehne Laga Hia Kuch Chupke Chupke,
Inki Mohabbat Mein Bus Yunhi Pighal Jaaye Hum Tum,

Tu Chaand Hai Is Dilki Zameen Ka Humdam,
Main Hoon Shayad Koi Kali Teri Taraf Dhali Hui,
Dekhenge Kuch Aise Hi Haseen Manzar Teri Hi Aankhon Mein,
Guzaar Lenge Apni Puri Zindagi Teri Chaahon Mein Hum,

Yehi Khwaab Humne Sambhale Hai Teri Amanaton Ki Tarah,
Piroke Isme Har Ek Moti Apne Asuvan Ka,
Chun Lenge Teri Palkon Se Dard Ka Har Mausam,

Chalo Na....!!!
Chale Us Masoom Chaand Ki Dharti Par...


kya baat hai angel.............bhut acha likha hai aapne.........bhut khoob...........aise hi likhte rhiye,
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2009, 03:15:07 PM »
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Bahut shukriya Aslam...

Thanks for appreciating
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