Chand Chhup Saa Gayaa

by sun_star1700 on May 02, 2005, 10:16:07 AM
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Chand Chhup Saa Gayaa,
                                                   Raat Tham Si Gayee.

Aap Aaye Hamare Tasabbur Men Jab,
                            Baate Hoti Raheen, Raat Dhalati Rahi.
Subah Aai, Par Mai To Rahaa Bekhabar,
                   Kuchh Ne Pagal kahaa, kuchh divana kahen,
Kahanaa Mushakeel Tha, In Me Mai Kya Tha. Magar
                      Jab Tasabbur Ne Mujha Par Keeya Ye Asar,
Rubru Agar Kaheen Tum Se Bate Hui,
                                         To Wahin Dam N Jaye Neekal.
Kaisa Jalwa Tera, Uf, Kahun Kees Tarah,
                           Dil Dhadakne Lagaa, Saans Ruk Si Gayi,
Aap Aaye Hamare Tasabbur men Jab.
                           
                  Chand Chhup Saa Gayaa,
                                                      Raat Tham Si Gayee.
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2005, 01:10:32 PM »
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Chand Chhup Saa Gayaa,
                                                   Raat Tham Si Gayee.

Aap Aaye Hamare Tasabbur Men Jab,
                            Baate Hoti Raheen, Raat Dhalati Rahi.
Subah Aai, Par Mai To Rahaa Bekhabar,
                   Kuchh Ne Pagal kahaa, kuchh divana kahen,
Kahanaa Mushakeel Tha, In Me Mai Kya Tha. Magar
                      Jab Tasabbur Ne Mujha Par Keeya Ye Asar,
Rubru Agar Kaheen Tum Se Bate Hui,
                                         To Wahin Dam N Jaye Neekal.
Kaisa Jalwa Tera, Uf, Kahun Kees Tarah,
                           Dil Dhadakne Lagaa, Saans Ruk Si Gayi,
Aap Aaye Hamare Tasabbur men Jab.
                           
                  Chand Chhup Saa Gayaa,
                                                      Raat Tham Si Gayee.


kya yaar koi meri shayri ko to padakar reply de..............
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2005, 05:01:05 PM »
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Chand Chhup Saa Gayaa,
                                                   Raat Tham Si Gayee.

Aap Aaye Hamare Tasabbur Men Jab,
                            Baate Hoti Raheen, Raat Dhalati Rahi.
Subah Aai, Par Mai To Rahaa Bekhabar,
                   Kuchh Ne Pagal kahaa, kuchh divana kahen,
Kahanaa Mushakeel Tha, In Me Mai Kya Tha. Magar
                      Jab Tasabbur Ne Mujha Par Keeya Ye Asar,
Rubru Agar Kaheen Tum Se Bate Hui,
                                         To Wahin Dam N Jaye Neekal.
Kaisa Jalwa Tera, Uf, Kahun Kees Tarah,
                           Dil Dhadakne Lagaa, Saans Ruk Si Gayi,
Aap Aaye Hamare Tasabbur men Jab.
                           
                  Chand Chhup Saa Gayaa,
                                                      Raat Tham Si Gayee.


bahot  khoob.............sun_star1700............aisa nahi hai .........aap  ne  bahot accha likha......

ur  welcome  to  "Yoindia"

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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2005, 11:05:25 AM »
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thanking to you ......

aap ne meri shayri ki kadar to kiiiiiiiii
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