Chand Gali To Utra Hoga

by Brijinder on August 26, 2006, 12:37:16 AM
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Chand gali to utra hoga

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Chand gali to utra hoga
Mujhse shayud rootha hoga

Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko
Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga

Chupke chupke poNcha hoga
AaNkh se gar kuch tapka hoga

Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga

NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2006, 01:30:45 AM »
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Well Said Brij!

Kuch kami hai aaj Gum-e-dil main teri,
Warna kuch aur andaz hai mahobat main teri!

Dil main kahin dard liye baitha hai tu,
Nahi majbur to kisase yun rutha hau tu!

Ja pukar le jisey chand samajh baitha hai tu,
Kisey mod per milegi woh bhi jiskar intazar karta hai tu!

BENAM
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Dil jisey dhudhata hai, bus mahobat hai dost,
Ek pal ruthana, ek pal manana yahi toh zindagi hai dost!
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2006, 04:31:28 AM »
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channd se ki hongi baatine tumne
chupke chupke mera pucha hoga
haal mera sun kar usse tumne bhi
daaman se apna girta aansu poocha hoga

sang tere rangeen fizaayen mahke
jo tum ho door to kuch bhi nahi hai
tere bin kaise jiyenge biybaan mai
jaane se pahile ye to tune socha hoga

haal mera sun ke tune apna aansu poocha hoga

brij aapki  kavita itni bholi inti pyaari lagi seedhe dil tak gayi usse bhi milte julte kuch aashar bus jane kaise likh diya

aise hi aap likhte rahe

shrddha
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2006, 05:11:25 AM »
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brij ji, benam ji, shrddha ji bahut khoob..........
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2006, 05:17:29 AM »
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Chaand gali jab utra hoga,
Husn-e-mehtaab ne ek keher dhaad diya hoga,
Palkein jhuka ke jab woh sharmaya hoga,
Sabki dhadkano ko sataya hoga,
Rukh pe jo aanchal ko bikhera hoga,
Kitne hi dil ko usne todha hoga,
Saansein jo badh rahi hongi tezi se
Kis tarah koshish kar use roka hoga,
Chaand gali jab utra hoga
Raat ke aanchal mein kis tarah woh jhula hoga.......

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2006, 11:03:19 PM »
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I am thankful to all of u for the warm words of appreciation.
I am also happy that my poem compelled few of u to express your own thoughts n emotions too.
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