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nahi koi chahiye jab saath me hain chand tum aur main
andhera kyun vahhan jab sath me hain chand tum aur main
safar har khush numa hai rasta kitna bhi lamba ho
dilon se khush vo badhate ja rahe hain chand tum aur main
garahan aane se bashak duniya se door ho hi jaate hain
magar tab bhi to sang hain chand tum aur main
us jalte suraj se door hai apni ye sard duniya
isise khush hain rahte chand tum aur main
ye duniya khoobsurat hai jahan pe aa base hain ham
nahi koi aur hai bas chand tum aur main
vo din ki talkh tapish duniya ki berahmi aur baaten
ham is raat me hanste rahe hain chand tum aur main
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2006, 05:07:25 PM » |
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WoW!! bahut hi Achha Likha hai Aapne...
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2006, 05:30:07 PM » |
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Haanstay Haanstay Roo Perhty Thi
Kitny Pagal Wo Larki Thi
Us K Hoont To Chup Rehtay Thay
Aankho Se Baatain Karty Thi
Chat Per Dhoop Mian Baithay Baithay
Din Bhar Wo Sapnay Bunty Thi
Uljhi Yaadain Suljhanay Main
Saari Raat Ganwa Dete Thi
Kitna Tha Thehraoo Us Main
Lekin Wo Kitny Gehri Thi
Ek Din Chaltay Chaltay US Nai
Mujh Se Koi Baat Kahi Thi
Aur Phir Raasta Ek Nahy Tha
Us Ki Manzil Aur Koi Thi
Bilkul Waisay Phool Khilay Hain
Jaisay Wo Haansty Rehty Thi
Aab To Bhool Giya Houn Shaid
Us Per Ek Ghazal Likhi Thi
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2006, 07:01:16 PM » |
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wah touchy wah aapka to jawab hi nahi yani ya to likhna nahi likhna to bas bahut hi achcha likhna
arz kiya hai
jis ladki ki baat ho karte
vo sach me bilkul aisi thi
chand ko dekhke vo roti thi
tum ko dekhke muskati thi
sabse alag raha karti thi
phoolon se baaten karti thi
titali yan uski sakhi saheli
tare sare uske saathi
tum dono ka sath anutha
saath saath achche lagte the
vo tum se ye kah na paai
uski bhi koi majboori thi
tum se door kahin rahti hai
tum ko sapno me rakhti hai
tumne jo vo gazal likhi thi
aaj bhi usko vo gungunati hai
rote rote hans deti hai
hanste hanste ro deti hai
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2006, 07:06:18 PM » |
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wah touchy wah aapka to jawab hi nahi yani ya to likhna nahi likhna to bas bahut hi achcha likhna
arz kiya hai
jis ladki ki baat ho karte
vo sach me bilkul aisi thi
chand ko dekhke vo roti thi
tum ko dekhke muskati thi
sabse alag raha karti thi
phoolon se baaten karti thi
titali yan uski sakhi saheli
tare sare uske saathi
tum dono ka sath anutha
saath saath achche lagte the
vo tum se ye kah na paai
uski bhi koi majboori thi
tum se door kahin rahti hai
tum ko sapno me rakhti hai
tumne jo vo gazal likhi thi
aaj bhi usko vo gungunati hai
rote rote hans deti hai
hanste hanste ro deti hai Bahut khooob tabassum Jee.......Superbb |
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2006, 07:11:02 PM » |
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aapki zyada achchi hai
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2006, 07:27:21 PM » |
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Aapki toh Aadat hai Tareef karne ki........Aur Khoobsoorat likhne ki.
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2006, 07:50:52 PM » |
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ji ye hamari nahi aapki aadat hai.......
tanha tanha rahte ho
kam kam zara tum likhte ho
lekin jab jab likhte ho
sab se achcha likhte ho
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2006, 08:47:10 AM » |
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hain kitne ab akele chaand tum aur main
sabhi hi ghamzada hain chand tum aur main
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2006, 09:41:09 AM » |
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wah tabassum and touchy dono ne bahoot hi acha likha hai
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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2006, 09:42:46 AM » |
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wah tabassum and touchy dono ne bahoot hi acha likha hai Thanks Pankhuri Jee. |
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2006, 12:13:35 PM » |
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shukriya pankhuri touchy hamesha bahut achcha likhte hain
par zara kam likhte hain
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2006, 12:28:35 PM » |
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Good Work All of You . . .
Kaun hain jo har dum saath rahenge
Chaand Tum aur Main
Har pal har gadi ek duje se pyaar karenge
Chaand Tum aur Main
Es Jalim Duniya se mil kar ladenge
Chaand Tum aur Main
Raat ke andheron ko door yun Karenge
Chaand Tum aur Main
Jaamane ko PREM ki yaad hamesha denge
Chaad Tum aur Main
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2006, 12:53:50 PM » |
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ye jaane chaand bhi kya cheez hai
jo saath hai mere
nahi ham dam koi jo saathye na ho
tum hamse door ho itna
ki bas ab kah nahi sakte
ye ham se door hokar bhi hame
dikhta to rahta hai
mera hai ik sahara chand hi to
ki tum to door bas saalon se hi ho
kabhi bas saath me the
chaand tum aur main
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2006, 01:01:46 PM » |
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Nice one . . .
Kya sama tha jab saath rehte the
Chaand Tum aur Main
Har raat der tak baat karte the
Chaand Tum aur Main
Kaise hota hai PREM Jaamane ko sikhate the
Chaand Tum aur Main
Aaj chahe hum Juda ho par ek-duje ko Yaad to karte hai
Chaand Tum aur Main. . . .
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