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«Reply #135 on: July 31, 2006, 02:19:26 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Tabassum....
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«Reply #136 on: August 01, 2006, 04:02:50 AM » |
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shukriya aryan
chaaand ka ham se saath hai kaisa
main na rahun tosaath tumhare
tum na raho to saath mere hai
chaand hai zyada mera saathi
aaj mujhe ye pata chala hai
main na aai chaand tha tanha
isko soch ke main hun aai
tum aao ya na aao par
chaand saath hai mere azal se
kabhi the saath me teeno
chaand tum aur main..................
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #137 on: August 03, 2006, 12:58:02 PM » |
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chaand hai sabke dukh ka saathi
jitani bhi jaagi aankhe hain
jitani bhi roi aankhen hain
sari hain bas isaki saathi
gham ka naata isase gahara
kabhi kahin na chaand hai thahra
chalta raha hai saath ghamon ke
sabke aansu isane dekhe
mera tumhara to kya kahna
hansna kam hai rona zyada
chaand ko sab maaloom hai jaana
meri jaan hai tum me jaana
mera koi gham na apna
tera har gham saath mere hai
jaise chalta chaand saath me
kabhi chale ham bhi the sang sang
vo hi din yaad karte
chaand tum aur main....................
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«Reply #138 on: August 03, 2006, 01:04:52 PM » |
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nice one TABBU JI........
Intzaar rahata hai ab, bas shaam hone ka,
ki falak se wo chand mera baahar aayega......
tarasti aur tadapti in do aankhon ko meri,
uski chandni me naha kar hi karaar aayega.....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #139 on: August 03, 2006, 01:06:06 PM » |
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Tabassum
Bahut achcha likha hai aap ne !
Aap aise he achcha likhte rahiye !
Rajbir
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«Reply #140 on: August 06, 2006, 01:12:42 PM » |
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shukriya raajbeer ji
chaand hamaara khafa khafa sa
raat se baat na karta dekho
saath chale hai raat ke hardam
dil me lagan hai raat ki usake
chehra dekho rutha rutha
nazaren dekho mithi mithi
ye hai naya koi dhang ishq ka
maine poocha jab ye tum se
tum ne hans ke mujh ko dekha
chaand aur raat bhi hanse saath me
chalo ab raat ke sang hans rahe hain
chaand tum aur main .....................
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Rajbir
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«Reply #141 on: August 06, 2006, 01:25:53 PM » |
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Tabassum
Again very beautiful wordings !
Rajbir
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«Reply #142 on: August 07, 2006, 03:19:26 PM » |
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thanx raajbeer ji
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«Reply #143 on: August 07, 2006, 03:24:06 PM » |
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ye jo hai chaand kuchh kuchh hai ye tumsa
kabhi chhupta kabhi ye hai nikalta
ke aksar ye bhi gham me choor lagta
tabhi to hai hamara saathi lagta
hamare saath ye chalta hi aaya jaane kabse
kabhi hamne nahi poochha
ki hai kya gham ji isko
ki isane baante hain
apne to saare gham hamesha
kya isase pooche bin chalte rahenge?
chaand tum aur main...................
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«Reply #144 on: August 07, 2006, 03:29:18 PM » |
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Tabassum
Bahut khoob ! Very nice !
Magar yahan khumar mein likho :D
Rajbir (jyada beer mat pilaiye) :wink:
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«Reply #145 on: August 08, 2006, 07:32:42 AM » |
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thanx ji ab itna lamba thread ho chuka hai khumar zindagi dard sabhi ek ke baad ek hain
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«Reply #146 on: August 08, 2006, 07:35:46 AM » |
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jo hai ye raat aai chaand aaya
magar saathi mere tu hai kahan par
ki tujhko dhundati meri nazar hai
ye dekho raat kitni khush hai hansati
jo tu aae to main bhi muskuraun
teri hi raah par apni nazar hai
jo aae saath chalden
chaand tum aur main.............
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«Reply #147 on: October 13, 2006, 08:03:30 PM » |
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chaand hamara door hai hamse
tum bhi door hue ab hamse
saari raaten ab roti hain
yaaden teri mujhme jeetin
unke bina main kuchh bhi nahi hun
saath rahe ham teeno the kab ?
azal se ham to juda juda the
lekin doori se bhi saathi
chaand tum aur main...................
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Zamir Ka Qaidi
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«Reply #148 on: October 13, 2006, 08:15:35 PM » |
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tere bare main jab soocha nahi tha
main tanha tha magar itna nahi tha
teri tasveer se kerta tha batein
mere kamre main aaina nahi tha
samander ne mujhe pyasa hi rakha
main jab sehra main tha pyasa nahi tha
manane roothne k khel main hum
bichar jaein ge ye soocha nahi tha
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«Reply #149 on: October 13, 2006, 08:29:21 PM » |
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very nice .........
chaand hamara chaand se pyara
use kisiki nazar lage na
door se ham par jaadu uskaa
paas hamare kabhi rahe na
raat dekh kar use hai kehati
ye sach me hai chaand se roshan
chaand kabhi hai gussa karta
sath dekh hame phir hans deta
ki akhir ko purane saathi hain teeno
chaand tum aur main...............
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