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Charag hawa me hum jalayenge !
Ik ashiya toofaa me bhi hum sajayenge !
bujhti ik Lau ko shola sa bhdkayenge !
gar ho jarurat khud ko bhi bedum tadpayenge
suna h humne,raas na aati mohbt zamane ko
thaam kr haath uska zamane ko bhi jhutlayenge !
rehmat khuda ki hoti h mhbt
nibhakr kasme apni duniya ko hum diklayenge !
bhawar me fasi kasti ko
sahil tak lane ktra ktra khud ko hum azmayenge !
kyun dare,khuff kiska
dilon ki nafraten 'nir' hum mohbt se hi Khaak kar jayenge !
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2011, 07:46:52 AM » |
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nirala ji........
hmm ab kya kahu.........
ho sake to yakin karna ........aajtak apne jab bhi aur jo bhi likha he ye unme se to best he hi but yaha yo per jitni bhi aachi post sab karte he unme bhi apki is post ka bahot ucha mukaam he...........is post ki rythm...theme.and words sabkuch gajab he..........
it is realy wondefrul.........mindblowing.......fantastic.... meaning full and lovable post..........just superb.........
in words of KB ji..its chumeeshwari post........
maja aa gaya nirala ji......wat ane excellent creation........
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2011, 08:07:47 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2011, 10:16:26 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2011, 01:51:26 PM » |
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Thanx Natrix yaara--mujhe itni izzat baksne ke liye.
lekin mujhe lagta hai ki aapne kuch jada tareef kar daali--itne ka haqdaar nirala nhi hai.
mujhe pata hai--
bt aapke hausala afzai ka behad sukriya.
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2011, 02:23:39 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2011, 02:44:08 PM » |
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haha yaara kamaal hain aap bhi. post ki tareef kari to meri bhi ho hi gai na!! ye kya baat hui bhala ki post ki tareef kari aur meri nahi:( meri bhi tareef kari aakhir me bhi INSAAN hun dusron ki karah--to kya hua gar bheja kam hai  |
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2011, 02:47:56 PM » |
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thanx K mam and K sahiba koyal sahiba aapka reply as usual mast than q choooo much " thanx " |
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2011, 04:32:50 PM » |
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Charag hawa me hum jalayenge !
Ik ashiya toofaa me bhi hum sajayenge !
bujhti ik Lau ko shola sa bhdkayenge !
gar ho jarurat khud ko bhi bedum tadpayenge
suna h humne,raas na aati mohbt zamane ko
thaam kr haath uska zamane ko bhi jhutlayenge !
rehmat khuda ki hoti h mhbt
nibhakr kasme apni duniya ko hum diklayenge !
bhawar me fasi kasti ko
sahil tak lane ktra ktra khud ko hum azmayenge !
kyun dare,khuff kiska
dilon ki nafraten 'nir' hum mohbt se hi Khaak kar jayenge !
Bahut hii umdaa soch ke saath likhe khayaal bayaan kiye hai aapne .... Nirala ji ! bahut khoob ... janaab ! dil se daad .... ! |
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2011, 06:43:58 PM » |
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Charag hawa me hum jalayenge !
Ik ashiya toofaa me bhi hum sajayenge !
bujhti ik Lau ko shola sa bhdkayenge !
gar ho jarurat khud ko bhi bedum tadpayenge
suna h humne,raas na aati mohbt zamane ko
thaam kr haath uska zamane ko bhi jhutlayenge !
rehmat khuda ki hoti h mhbt
nibhakr kasme apni duniya ko hum diklayenge !
bhawar me fasi kasti ko
sahil tak lane ktra ktra khud ko hum azmayenge !
kyun dare,khuff kiska
dilon ki nafraten 'nir' hum mohbt se hi Khaak kar jayenge !
bahut behtreen ji |
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2011, 05:42:09 AM » |
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nirala ji bahut khub
aap yun hi chalte rahiye hum hosla aapka badayenge
gar jarurat ho kisi ki to aawaz dena hum saath nibhane chale aayenge
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2011, 06:04:28 AM » |
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bilkul kamal ji-- aap hausala badhaiye aapko hi aawaz denge jarurat par--aakhri saans se pahle aapko hi aawaz denge thanx |
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2011, 06:16:25 AM » |
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Anshumali ji --- Khamosh ji --- Shihaab ji -- aap jaise shayrs se daad milna fakra ki baat hai thanq so much aap sab ke hausala afzai ka. " thanx " |
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«Reply #13 on: February 18, 2011, 11:36:41 AM » |
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wah niralaji.... sach main habut khub kurban aapki is rachna par... kya baat hai..
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2011, 11:40:56 AM » |
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bahut bahut thanku Manju ji--
aapki daad sae aankhon par
thanx
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