CHAUDVIN RAAT KEE SHAB HAI

by surindarn on September 21, 2014, 05:37:08 AM
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aao ghul.mil baat ho jaaye chaudvi.n ke chaand kee shab hai...
khoyaa waqt haath aajaaye chaudvi.n ke chaand kee shab hai!

gehr ke khat mei.n salaam bhej bhej bahut jalaa chuke ho...
dil meraa jal jal raakh huaa hai, marham lagaane kee shab hai!

tumhen bhool jaane ke liye meh to hum bahut pee chuke hai.n...
abb to aankho.n se pilaa do, aaj aankho.n pilaane kee shab hai!

nahi.n jaante kyaa shikaayat thee humse jo tumh roothe theh...
aake sab saaf saaf batlaa do, gileh shikve sunaane kee shab hai!

jo bhi kaho gey hum maa.n le.n gey, tumhen manaa le.n gey...
aao aaj gale lagaa lo aaj kee shab to manaane kee shab hai!

mudat huee hai tumhse tumhaare nagmei.n sune huey...
aao haathon mei.n haath liye sur mei.n sur milaane kee shab hai!!

Surindar.N                                 "MohanN"
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2014, 07:32:02 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2014, 01:47:26 PM »
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Quote from: deepraghav on September 21, 2014, 07:32:02 AM
Applause Applause :clap:bahut khoob...

shukria Deepraghav Sahib.
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2014, 03:31:03 PM »
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Quote from: surindarn on September 21, 2014, 05:37:08 AM
aaj khul ke baat ho jaaye chaudvi.n raat kee shab hai...
khoyaa waqt haath aajaaye chaudvi.n raat kee shab hai!

gehr ke khat mei.n salaam bhej bhej bahut jalaa chuke ho...
dil jal raakh huaa jaataa hai, marham lagaane kee shab hai!

Tumhen bhool jaane ke liye meh to hum bahut pee chuke hai.n...
aankho.n se pilaa do, aaj aankho.n se pilaane kee shab hai!

nahi.n jaante kyaa shikaayat thee humse jo tumh roothe theh...
aake sab saaf batlaa do, gileh shikve sunaane kee shab hai!

jo bhi kaho gey hum maa.n le.n gey, tumhen manaa le.n gey...
aajaao phir gale lagaa lo gale lagne lagaane kee shab hai!

mudat guzree hai hume.n tumhaare nagmei.n sune huey...
aao haath mei.n haath de.do sur mei.n sur milaane kee shab hai!!

Surindar.N                                 "MohanN"



sir, your though is ok but there is no proper sequence in KAFIA, unlike matla. lagaane,milaane, pilaane,sunaane are same kafia .
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2014, 05:29:44 PM »
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waaaah waaah waaah bohut khub sir ji daaaaaaddddd
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2014, 05:42:29 PM »
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waah bahaut khoob Surindarn ji


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बहुत खूब....

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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2014, 01:27:29 AM »
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bahut shukria Deepraghav Janaab.
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