~ * CHHABI * ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on August 08, 2010, 10:10:13 AM
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Ugte huae Suraj ke sath me teri,
palke roj bichhati hu,
chand me teri parchaai dekh,
mann hi mann me muskurati hu,

ajib se iss rishte ko kya naam du?
samjh me nahi aata fir bhi,
dhime se pyar ke kadmo ke sath,
tujme hi silti jati hu,

sapno ki mithi mithi chadar odhkar,
teri aahosh me sama jati hu,
saptrangi badalo se banai he pichhi,
our usme yaado k rang bharti jati hu,

parchhai banke rehti hu, tere sath,
isliye teri "CHHABI" keh lati hu....
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2010, 10:45:30 AM »
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Wonderful....devangi-di.......bahuj saras..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2010, 10:49:06 AM »
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thanku so much....
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2010, 12:59:20 PM »
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Ugte huae Suraj ke sath me teri,
palke roj bichhati hu,
chand me teri parchaai dekh,
mann hi mann me muskurati hu,

ajib se iss rishte ko kya naam du?
samjh me nahi aata fir bhi,
dhime se pyar ke kadmo ke sath,
tujme hi silti jati hu,

sapno ki mithi mithi chadar odhkar,
teri aahosh me sama jati hu,
saptrangi badalo se banai he pichhi,
our usme yaado k rang bharti jati hu,

parchhai banke rehti hu, tere sath,
isliye teri "CHHABI" keh lati hu....


Its Too Good ..... Very Nice Creation.....Likhte Rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2010, 01:10:09 PM »
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wah Devangi ji wah.. ek alag andaaz , ek nahi soch... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... bahut pasand aayi humein... bahut sundar likha hai aapne...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2010, 06:15:32 AM »
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Bahot pyari poem likhi hai  Think ji. Ye andaaz bahot achha laga. Ek purkashish peshkash ke liye daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2010, 07:00:34 AM »
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bahot khub likha hai aapne Devangi ji..

chhabi teri madhur madhur pyaare
par aansuu mere haare hain
nainon se bahe jal ki dhaaraa
man mein mere angaare hain..

aasha ke palav suukh gaaye
kumhalayii sapano ki kaliyaan
kal milan murali kaa baagi jahaan
suuni man madhuban ki galiyaan
suune naino ke gagan bich
ye aansuu bhor ke taare hain
man mein mere angaare hai..

jab chaah na puuri honi thi
dii chaah milan ki kyon man ko
yuun jina hai to jine ka
adhikaar diyaa kyon jivan ko
kab ghadii milan ki aayegi
ye vikal praan path hare hain
man mein mere angaare hain..

# Lyricist: Pt. Narendra Sharma
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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2010, 10:57:38 AM »
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sukriya....



Its Too Good ..... Very Nice Creation.....Likhte Rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2010, 11:03:21 AM »
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bahot bahot sukriya klaskar ji n riyaz ji....

wah Devangi ji wah.. ek alag andaaz , ek nahi soch... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... bahut pasand aayi humein... bahut sundar likha hai aapne...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP



Bahot pyari poem likhi hai  Think ji. Ye andaaz bahot achha laga. Ek purkashish peshkash ke liye daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2010, 11:06:01 AM »
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thanku so much rancho ji...

bahot khub likha hai aapne Devangi ji..

chhabi teri madhur madhur pyaare
par aansuu mere haare hain
nainon se bahe jal ki dhaaraa
man mein mere angaare hain..

aasha ke palav suukh gaaye
kumhalayii sapano ki kaliyaan
kal milan murali kaa baagi jahaan
suuni man madhuban ki galiyaan
suune naino ke gagan bich
ye aansuu bhor ke taare hain
man mein mere angaare hai..

jab chaah na puuri honi thi
dii chaah milan ki kyon man ko
yuun jina hai to jine ka
adhikaar diyaa kyon jivan ko
kab ghadii milan ki aayegi
ye vikal praan path hare hain
man mein mere angaare hain..

# Lyricist: Pt. Narendra Sharma
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2010, 11:07:01 AM »
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Mujhse mat pooch ki kyun aankh jhuka li maine,
Teri Chhabi thi jo tujhse chupa li maine,
Jis pe likha tha ki tu mere muqaddar mein nahi,
Apne maathe ki woh lakeer mita li meine,
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2010, 11:07:27 AM »
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sukriya shihab ji aapne meri post ko padha....


Bahut Khub Think Sahiba...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

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«Reply #12 on: August 09, 2010, 11:12:04 AM »
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Mujhse mat pooch ki kyun aankh jhuka li maine,
Teri Chhabi thi jo tujhse chupa li maine,
Jis pe likha tha ki tu mere muqaddar mein nahi,
Apne maathe ki woh lakeer mita li meine,






Ugte huae Suraj ke sath me teri,
palke roj bichhati hu,
chand me teri parchaai dekh,
mann hi mann me muskurati hu,

ajib se iss rishte ko kya naam du?
samjh me nahi aata fir bhi,
dhime se pyar ke kadmo ke sath,
tujme hi silti jati hu,

sapno ki mithi mithi chadar odhkar,
teri aahosh me sama jati hu,
saptrangi badalo se banai he pichhi,
our usme yaado k rang bharti jati hu,

parchhai banke rehti hu, tere sath,
isliye teri "CHHABI" keh lati hu....
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«Reply #13 on: August 10, 2010, 01:54:06 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Mohtarma Think Ji.

Khush Rahiye.
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«Reply #14 on: August 10, 2010, 01:56:57 PM »
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sukriya ham-dam ji aapne waqt diya padhne ke liye....
thanku so much...


Bohat Khoob Mohtarma Think Ji.

Khush Rahiye.

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