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by thinkhattk on August 08, 2010, 10:10:13 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 11, 2010, 04:19:50 AM »
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Bohat khoob likha aapne, ake innocent si concept hay, likhtay rahiyay
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«Reply #16 on: August 11, 2010, 04:55:41 AM »
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Wah wah Deevangi sis ,bahut pyari aur lajawab kavita pesh kiya aapne,Rancho ji aur Koyal sis ne bhi bahut khoobi se saath nibhaya.great creation. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: August 11, 2010, 05:24:56 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht pyaari poem devangi ji...

mujhme sama k mere sang rahe jo
meri khamoshi ko chupke se samjhe wo
na kahe kuch na samjhaye kuch
bas hath thaame mere jo chale wo

haan tum wahi meri *chhabi* ho sakhee
meri soch mere sath mere sang
chalti ho tum sakhee banke meri hi *chhabi*
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«Reply #18 on: August 12, 2010, 11:17:55 AM »
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sukriya life ji, madhu di n kasak....

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht pyaari poem devangi ji...

mujhme sama k mere sang rahe jo
meri khamoshi ko chupke se samjhe wo
na kahe kuch na samjhaye kuch
bas hath thaame mere jo chale wo

haan tum wahi meri *chhabi* ho sakhee
meri soch mere sath mere sang
chalti ho tum sakhee banke meri hi *chhabi*

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«Reply #19 on: August 15, 2010, 05:03:18 PM »
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Bahut Acche Devangi... Bahut Pyaari Poem Likhi hai aapne.. Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #20 on: August 16, 2010, 09:01:33 AM »
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bahot bahot sukriya vicky ji....
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