choodiyaan!!!!!!!!!!

by Gesu on January 23, 2006, 10:43:59 AM
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Chudiyon ki khanak kehti hai tumse kuch sanam,
Har chudi ka sapna alag O-MERE-SANAM,
Kuch chudiyon ka armaan tumko sotey hue jagaana hai,
Kuch kehti hain humko to bus unko tadpaate jana hai,
Kuch aisi bhi chanchal hai jinhey roothey tumse jaana hai,
Humse milti julti ikk laal rang ki chudi hai,
Jo kehti hai sajna ko humne to baahon mein bharr lana hai.....

gesu's choodiyan!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2006, 10:51:31 AM »
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Wah gesu... :D Too good !

Ab saare chudiyon ke deewane yahan par aayen aur
is post ko chudiyon ke rangon ki tarah rangeen banayen... :D

Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2006, 10:53:10 AM »
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thanx ke pasand aaya but hamein jama nahi abhi jaldi mein likha kal likhenge badiya sa!
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2006, 11:01:32 AM »
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Gesu's naya shauk... :D

Chaliye aap ise aur rangeen banate rahiye...

Abhi to aur bhi aate honge apni rangeen choodiyon ke saath... :D

Abhi to yahan roz choodiyon ka mela lagega  :wink:

All new bollywood fashion choodiyan available here... :D
Everyone welcome to place their orders here (i mean replies)... :D

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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2006, 01:05:36 PM »
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hey gesu, kuchh adhura to lag hi raha tha kyunki laal rang ke baad, neele rang ki baari ati hai, hope to see the one without jaldi soon.
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2006, 02:18:30 PM »
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woww .....  the topic is really nice one ...and everybosy written nicly as well ...... gonna add few lines more .... in dis topic !!  Chodiya !!!

Teri hi yaad subho shaam dilati hai chodiya
mujh ko khawaboon mein le jati hai chodiya

Tere ishq ke rangon mein rangi hai sanam
duniya ke har rang ko dhikati hai chodiya

jab bhi mere hathoon mein khankti hai kabhi
sirf tumko hi dilbhar bulati hai chodiya !!!  
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2006, 03:40:42 PM »
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Okay i tried but was not very good....

Unn haathon ko sambhal ke rakhna,
Choodiyan pehnayenge zaroor, tum sabh dekhna...

Sharmayegi woh, nazron ko jhukakar,
Bahon mein samet lenge, tum sabse chipakar....

Khan khan choodiyon ki, sunati hain mujhe,
Pyaar se itne, nazdeek bulati hain mujhe....

Main kaise bhul jaon ki woh mujhse duur rehti hain,
Lekin gum nahin mujhe, kyunki dil mein woh rehti hain......
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2006, 03:43:56 PM »
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:lol:  :lol: ha ha ha ha...Hope everyone writes...Agar sab ek bhi likh denge to maza aa jayega....


Quote from: "Rajbir"
Gesu's naya shauk... :D

Chaliye aap ise aur rangeen banate rahiye...

Abhi to aur bhi aate honge apni rangeen choodiyon ke saath... :D

Abhi to yahan roz choodiyon ka mela lagega  :wink:

All new bollywood fashion choodiyan available here... :D
Everyone welcome to place their orders here (i mean replies)... :D

Rajbir
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2006, 06:31:24 PM »
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Bahut khoob kya topic hai.........and gud job u all...............

Choodion ki khankhanahat ab acchi see lagti hai,
Apne pyar ko tadpane ki kuch kashmakash see lagti hai,
Lagti ho tum or bhi acchi poore shringaaar mein,
Par choodion k bina kuch adhoori see lagti hai,
Rang Birangi choodian pehen k jab nikalti ho tum bahar,
Toh sach kahen toh tumhari Angdai bhi feeki see lagti hai............ :wink:
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2006, 11:02:15 PM »
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Rajbir paaji,
Aapne hum sabhi ko likhne keh diya lekin khudh kuch bhi na likhe...Aisa kyu?Huh???
Hum chahte hain ki aap bhi kuch likhiye.....Kyun wot u say guys........
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2006, 02:05:01 AM »
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Dildaar bhai...Kyun yahan par meri waat lagwaoge... :D

Mujhe shayari likhni nahi aati, magar main aap sab doston ki
shayari bahut pyar se padhta hoon... :D

Kisi ne bahut achcha likha hai, aap sab ke saath share kar raha hoon...

dard-e-dil ko mere hitchkiyan samjhti hein;
siddat-e-gum ko yaro siskiyan samjhti hein;
sawan kee raton mein piya birha kee pida;
koi jaane na jaane CHURIYAN samjhti hein;

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Please keep contributing... :D

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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2006, 02:56:11 AM »
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wah sabhi ne kaya khoob likha hai....Wade Veer ji apka to jawab nahi.....Very Good lines!!!

khan khan jab khankati hai churiyan
tarpaati hai tab yah teri meri dooriyan
tere hatho mai akar jab tootati hai churiyan
bhed sare mere yah kholati hai churiyan

har ek rang ki churi muje bhaati hai
lal hare rang mai soorat teri najar atti hai
chun chun kar ke tuje bulaati hai
dil mere sajna ka lubhaati hai
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«Reply #12 on: January 24, 2006, 07:13:27 AM »
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kya baat hai pooja ji!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2006, 07:20:08 AM »
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Quote from: "gesu_kapoor"
Chudiyon ki khanak kehti hai tumse kuch sanam,
Har chudi ka sapna alag O-MERE-SANAM,
Kuch chudiyon ka armaan tumko sotey hue jagaana hai,
Kuch kehti hain humko to bus unko tadpaate jana hai,
Kuch aisi bhi chanchal hai jinhey roothey tumse jaana hai,
Humse milti julti ikk laal rang ki chudi hai,
Jo kehti hai sajna ko humne to baahon mein bharr lana hai.....

gesu's choodiyan!!!!!!!!!!!




bahut khoob my friend
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2006, 07:43:40 AM »
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thanx ajay ji

aap bhi kuch likhtey to accha tha
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