choodiyan....

by Arjun_ on April 08, 2009, 03:45:49 PM
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choodiyan


rang birangi tujhe main choodiyan pehna du
gori gori inn bahaon ko satrangi bana du

innki khaan khaan se meri dhadkan ban jaye
hari neeli laal peeli sab rangon se saja du

dil mein chupi har ek baat samjhe teri choodi
inn par main apni aaj jaan bhi luta du.......

dekhna kahin yeh toot kar bhikar na jaye kahi
teri har choodi mein apni mohhabaat chupa du

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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2009, 03:46:56 PM »
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awwwwwwwww...

its cho chweet...

Awesome... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2009, 03:51:51 PM »
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Thanks Angel... dhanaywad

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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2009, 03:55:38 PM »
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choodiyan


rang birangi tujhe main choodiyan pehna du
gori gori inn bahaon ko satrangi bana du

innki khaan khaan se meri dhadkan ban jaye
hari neeli laal peeli sab rangon se saja du

dil mein chupi har ek baat samjhe teri choodi
inn par main apni aaj jaan bhi luta du.......

dekhna kahin yeh toot kar bhikar na jaye kahi
teri har choodi mein apni mohhabaat chupa du



Bohot pyara likha hai Arjun Ji Bohot Khoob !
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2009, 04:01:15 PM »
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thanks celmira... aap ya angel.. ya jo bhi isse pade.. pls kuch share karein..!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2009, 04:03:17 PM »
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choodiyan


rang birangi tujhe main choodiyan pehna du
gori gori inn bahaon ko satrangi bana du

innki khaan khaan se meri dhadkan ban jaye
hari neeli laal peeli sab rangon se saja du

dil mein chupi har ek baat samjhe teri choodi
inn par main apni aaj jaan bhi luta du.......

dekhna kahin yeh toot kar bhikar na jaye kahi
teri har choodi mein apni mohhabaat chupa du



wah wah wah kaya baat hai Arjun ji, bahoot khoob.. kuch khas man main ayya nahi... magar jo ayya wo likhne ja rahi hu...

Khan khan karati yah choordiyan teri yaad dilaye
Her pal meri dhadkano main tera raag gaaye

Chanak chanak kar her pal mera dil lubhaye
Dil he dil main, mera jiya mujhse he sharmaye

Tujhe dekh yah, kuch jayada he khanak jaaye
Dil mange dua, her janam, tu he choordiyan mujhe pahnaye
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2009, 04:13:27 PM »
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Quote from: Arjun_ on April 08, 2009, 03:45:49 PM
choodiyan


rang birangi tujhe main choodiyan pehna du
gori gori inn bahaon ko satrangi bana du

innki khaan khaan se meri dhadkan ban jaye
hari neeli laal peeli sab rangon se saja du

dil mein chupi har ek baat samjhe teri choodi
inn par main apni aaj jaan bhi luta du.......

dekhna kahin yeh toot kar bhikar na jaye kahi
teri har choodi mein apni mohhabaat chupa du




Rang birangi ye tere naam ki choodhiyan,
Jal tarang si bikhere hain meri choodhiyan

Chhodhiyon ki khan khan, dil ki ye dhadkan,
Tarjumaan hain ye hasraton ki choodhiyan

Bade aramaan se daala hai nazuk si kalai main
Dil tera deewaana ab karengi choodhiyan

Sambhala hai inhe maine dil-o-jaan ki tarah,
Hain tere mere pyaar ki nishaani choodhiyan !!
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2009, 04:14:26 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 04:03:17 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai Arjun ji, bahoot khoob.. kuch khas man main ayya nahi... magar jo ayya wo likhne ja rahi hu...

Khan khan karati yah choordiyan teri yaad dilaye
Her pal meri dhadkano main tera raag gaaye

Chanak chanak kar her pal mera dil lubhaye
Dil he dil main, mera jiya mujhse he sharmaye

Tujhe dekh yah, kuch jayada he khanak jaaye
Dil mange dua, her janam, tu he choordiyan mujhe pahnaye


wah kya baat hai.. dil mange dua ,har janam.. so beautiful..mere dil ko chu gayi

teri khanakti choddiyan mujhe bharmati hain
chod ke sare kam, apne pass mujhe bulati hain

besudh ho kar main bhi chala aata hu inke liye
dekho kaise pass aane par mujhe nakhre dikahati hai

sun lo sanjni ji, itna tang na kiya karo keh do inhe
sari duniya mujhe aapki choodiyan ka ashiq bulati hai
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2009, 04:16:07 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 08, 2009, 04:13:27 PM

Rang birangi ye tere naam ki choodhiyan,
Jal tarang si bikhere hain meri choodhiyan

Chhodhiyon ki khan khan, dil ki ye dhadkan,
Tarjumaan hain ye hasraton ki choodhiyan

Bade aramaan se daala hai nazuk si kalai main
Dil tera deewaana ab karengi choodhiyan

Sambhala hai inhe maine dil-o-jaan ki tarah,
Hain tere mere pyaar ki nishaani choodhiyan !!



wah wah wah kaya baat hai Celmira.. bahoot he payara jawab likha hai apne.... wah !!
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2009, 04:17:16 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 04:03:17 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai Arjun ji, bahoot khoob.. kuch khas man main ayya nahi... magar jo ayya wo likhne ja rahi hu...

Khan khan karati yah choordiyan teri yaad dilaye
Her pal meri dhadkano main tera raag gaaye

Chanak chanak kar her pal mera dil lubhaye
Dil he dil main, mera jiya mujhse he sharmaye

Tujhe dekh yah, kuch jayada he khanak jaaye
Dil mange dua, her janam, tu he choordiyan mujhe pahnaye


Could not see this.....Bohot hi pyaara likha hai Pooja...Vrey beautiful reply...
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2009, 04:17:53 PM »
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Quote from: Arjun_ on April 08, 2009, 04:14:26 PM
wah kya baat hai.. dil mange dua ,har janam.. so beautiful..mere dil ko chu gayi

teri khanakti choddiyan mujhe bharmati hain
chod ke sare kam, apne pass mujhe bulati hain

besudh ho kar main bhi chala aata hu inke liye
dekho kaise pass aane par mujhe nakhre dikahati hai

sun lo sanjni ji, itna tang na kiya karo keh do inhe
sari duniya mujhe aapki choodiyan ka ashiq bulati hai

An equally good reply from you Arjun Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2009, 04:23:12 PM »
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Quote from: Arjun_ on April 08, 2009, 04:14:26 PM
wah kya baat hai.. dil mange dua ,har janam.. so beautiful..mere dil ko chu gayi

teri khanakti choddiyan mujhe bharmati hain
chod ke sare kam, apne pass mujhe bulati hain

besudh ho kar main bhi chala aata hu inke liye
dekho kaise pass aane par mujhe nakhre dikahati hai

sun lo sanjni ji, itna tang na kiya karo keh do inhe
sari duniya mujhe aapki choodiyan ka ashiq bulati hai

such main bahoot he payara jawab likha hai... last line bahoot pyari likhi hai apne.....app jitna payara to nahi likh pa rahi hu... magar jo bhi man main ayya wo pesh hai..

Pahnaai hai tumne choodiya, tumhe yah bharmayegi
Kaise rah paaye door tum se, her pal pass tumhe he bulayegi

Teri deewangi main, meri bhi sudh-bugh yah bhulayegi
Taane phir sari dunia se, yah choordia  mujhe sunwayegi

Sune sajani, aor kaya kaya sun kar rakhein yaad
Tere bin Birah ke, tere sung Milan ke Geet yah choordia gaayegi!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2009, 04:24:26 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 08, 2009, 04:17:16 PM
Could not see this.....Bohot hi pyaara likha hai Pooja...Vrey beautiful reply...

Thanks Celmira!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2009, 04:29:55 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah!!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Arjun ji. Applause Applause Applause
Utna Hi Khoobsurat Kavitaye aap Dono Ne bhi Likhi Hai Pooja aur Talat..Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ek Choti si Koshish,Mere Taraf se Bhi...


Teri Choodiyon Ki Chan-chan Awaaz Se,
Zindagi Meri Hamesha Yuhi Mehakti Rahe...

Jahan Par Bhi Jaau, Har Jagah,Har Pal!!!
Aanhein Meri Tujhe Dhoondti Rahe....

Inn Chhoodiyon Ke Rang Ke Jaise Hi,
Zindagi Ki Bahaarein Naye Rango Se Chehakti Rahe....

"Khwaish" Ki Bas Ab Yehi Khwaish Hai,
Teri Choodiyon Ki Awaaz Mere Kaano Mein,
Sargam ke Jaise Barasti rahe....
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2009, 04:33:05 PM »
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Waah...bohot pyaara likha hai aapne Khwaish...Khumar se bhara.

Pooja beautiful reply again !
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