choodiyan....

by Arjun_ on April 08, 2009, 03:45:49 PM
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«Reply #45 on: April 09, 2009, 04:46:39 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on April 09, 2009, 04:45:16 PM
ARJUN.. Bahut Pyaare Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne.. Aur Khaas kar Last Line Bahut Khoob Likhi hai..!! aur Pooja Ji, Khwaish Aur Celmia ji.. Sabhi Ne Is Thread par Likh kar Iski Khubsoorat Ko Aur Badha diya Hai.. Applause Applause

**~** Mann **~**


Shukaria Mann ji... agar apki taraf se bhi kuch lines aa jaaye to kaya kahne phir to is thread ke....

waise is thread main badnaam shayr ji ki bhi bahoot yaad aai hai... un tak humara yah sandesha pahuncha dena !!!
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«Reply #46 on: April 09, 2009, 04:54:03 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 09, 2009, 11:06:55 AM
Verry beautiful, Angel

Thanks talat..
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«Reply #47 on: November 20, 2011, 06:52:36 AM »
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Quote from: Arjun_ on April 08, 2009, 05:41:52 PM
apka comment bohat encouraging hai.. waise mera mood kabhi kabhi karta hai aaise likhne ko...

Chum ke yeh teri choodiyon
ek ek karke main pehnau

ho bas tum sirf meri
itna suna kar har galti bhool jaun

sharmili si teri yeh hassi
uss pe yeh khanakti choodiyan

sath jab de jaye inka bindi
main ek pal mein hosh gawa jaun

naak pe saja yeh koka tera
paaron mein bajti natkat payal

na pucho sajni kya jadu chale
karti hain yeh kitna ghayal

har pal hain hum sung sung
ek pal bhi tum na yeh bhulna

payar mera teri choodi sa najuk
dekho sajni! isse kabhi na tordna
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«Reply #48 on: December 15, 2011, 09:25:38 AM »
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Quote from: Arjun_ on April 08, 2009, 03:45:49 PM
choodiyan


rang birangi tujhe main choodiyan pehna du
gori gori inn bahaon ko satrangi bana du

innki khaan khaan se meri dhadkan ban jaye
hari neeli laal peeli sab rangon se saja du

dil mein chupi har ek baat samjhe teri choodi
inn par main apni aaj jaan bhi luta du.......

dekhna kahin yeh toot kar bhikar na jaye kahi
teri har choodi mein apni mohhabaat chupa du



good........!
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«Reply #49 on: March 31, 2012, 10:44:42 AM »
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Badiya Hai
Quote from: Arjun_ on April 08, 2009, 03:45:49 PM
choodiyan


rang birangi tujhe main choodiyan pehna du
gori gori inn bahaon ko satrangi bana du

innki khaan khaan se meri dhadkan ban jaye
hari neeli laal peeli sab rangon se saja du

dil mein chupi har ek baat samjhe teri choodi
inn par main apni aaj jaan bhi luta du.......

dekhna kahin yeh toot kar bhikar na jaye kahi
teri har choodi mein apni mohhabaat chupa du


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«Reply #50 on: June 21, 2012, 08:19:36 AM »
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agr tu kahe to rang birangi tujhe chodiyaan pehna du
teri gori gori inn bahaon ko satrangi bana du
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Sultan Mirza
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«Reply #51 on: June 21, 2012, 08:21:26 AM »
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waah wa bohat khob Amit
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«Reply #52 on: August 01, 2013, 01:14:44 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 09, 2009, 11:14:27 AM
Bohot bohot shukriya hausla afzaai ka Sanjay Ji  Usual Smile




SO MUCH THANKS FOR YOU ALL MY SWEET SWEET FRIENDS.. Applause
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«Reply #53 on: August 01, 2013, 01:49:09 AM »
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bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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