Chup na raho yuun, meet!

by abdbundeli on July 08, 2009, 03:55:55 PM
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Kahnaa hai jo bhee, kaho;
Chup na raho yuun, meet!
Sou jaauun suntaa huaa;
Jo bhee ho sangeet!!

          - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 04:05:24 PM »
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How sweet.. bahoot Pyara likha hai ABD ji.
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 04:23:02 PM »
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bahut pyaara ehsaas hai
keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 04:43:20 PM »
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kya baat hai   abdji........

tuhi meri meet hai,tu hi meri preet,
sunta-sunta sou jaauun,sunade koi geet.
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2009, 10:49:33 PM »
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Wah Abd ji wonderful creation ,beautiful lines by Nira ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2009, 11:25:27 PM »
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Abd ji bohot hi khoob..
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2009, 11:26:24 PM »
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Cara ji umda likha aapne bhi.
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2009, 11:33:59 PM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji and Cara ji.
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Deepati
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 12:39:57 AM »
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Bahut he pyaari lines hain, Abd Ji! Applause
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 04:37:41 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 08, 2009, 04:05:24 PM
How sweet.. bahoot Pyara likha hai ABD ji.
Quote from: Nira on July 08, 2009, 04:23:02 PM
bahut pyaara ehsaas hai
keep writing
Thanks a lot Sophi ji/ Nira ji!
                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 04:49:44 AM »
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Quote from: cara on July 08, 2009, 04:43:20 PM
kya baat hai   abdji........

tuhi meri meet hai,tu hi meri preet,
sunta-sunta sou jaauun,sunade koi geet.


Dhanyawaad cara ji! Wah!

Madhuritu aayee, gayee bhee;
Aaye, gaye prasoon;
Padchaapoun mein wyakt hai,
Ho adhikaadhik nyoon!!

           - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 04:55:23 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 08, 2009, 10:49:33 PM
Wah Abd ji wonderful creation ,beautiful lines by Nira ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 08, 2009, 11:25:27 PM
Abd ji bohot hi khoob..
Quote from: Pooja on July 08, 2009, 11:33:59 PM
bahoot khoob Abd ji and Cara ji.
Quote from: Deepati on July 09, 2009, 12:39:57 AM
Bahut he pyaari lines hain, Abd Ji! Applause

Kotishah dhanyawaad Madhu ji/Sayyid Randeri ji/Pooja ji/Deepati ji!
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2009, 03:36:20 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 08, 2009, 03:55:55 PM
Kahnaa hai jo bhee, kaho;
Chup na raho yuun, meet!
Sou jaauun suntaa huaa;
Jo bhee ho sangeet!!

          - 'Ramwatiya'


Jaante toh ho tum meri majburiyan
Tum ko kya du duaye tumhi ab kaho
Gar Khuda meri sun le toh mai ye kahu
Muskurate raho tum, sada khush raho... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2009, 05:44:54 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 09, 2009, 03:36:20 PM

Jaante toh ho tum meri majburiyan
Tum ko kya du duaye tumhi ab kaho
Gar Khuda meri sun le toh mai ye kahu
Muskurate raho tum, sada khush raho... Usual Smile


Bahut-bahut shukriyah Roja! Wah! Bahut hi dilkash! Only a true woman can speak like this! I'm happy!

Sahee hai, ki, ham kitney majboor hain!
Isee mulk mein hain, magar, door hain!
Wahee aasmaan hai, wahee hai samaa;
Magar phir bhi ham maah key noor hain!!

                          - abd bundeli
                                   
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2009, 05:49:34 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 09, 2009, 05:44:54 PM

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Roja! Wah! Bahut hi dilkash! Only a true woman can speak like this! I'm happy!

Sahee hai, ki, ham kitney majboor hain!
Isee mulk mein hain, magar, door hain!
Wahee aasmaan hai, wahee hai samaa;
Magar phir bhi ham maah key noor hain!!

                          - abd bundeli

aha ... what a great appreciation from u dear uncle  Usual Smile

Neki ka jo karta hai yahan kaam bahut
Paata hai zamana mein vohi naam bahut
Gairon ke liye kasht utata hai jo mauj
Kehte hai usse milta hai aaram bahut...!!  icon_thumleft
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