Chupke chupke se tum mere dil Mai - shikha

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Chupke chupke se tum mere dil mai rahete ho,
Apni pyari hansi se fir muje ghayal karte ho,
Sapne mai aakar fir muje jagaya karte ho,
Har lamha pyar ke ehesas ko zinda karte ho.

Chori chori se aakar muje hi dekha karte ho,
Jab nazre milti hai hum dono ki to hans lete ho,
Baaho mai lekar fir muje  bahot pyar karte ho,
Har lamha pyar ke ruhani ehesas ko milte ho.

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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2016, 02:31:53 PM »
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Bahot khooob, bahot hi pyarey aur haseen ehsasaaat waaaaaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2016, 05:57:53 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2016, 06:53:49 PM »
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Chupke chupke se tum mere dil mai rahete ho,
Chupke chupke mere dil mein rahaa karte ho
Apni pyari hansi se fir muje ghayal karte ho,
Sapne mai aakar fir muje jagaya karte ho,
Har lamha pyar ke ehesas ko zinda karte ho.

Chori chori se aakar muje hi dekha karte ho,
Jab nazre milti hai hum dono ki to hans lete ho,
Jab nazare milti hai to tumh hansa karte ho
Baaho mai lekar fir muje  bahot pyar karte ho,
Har lamha pyar ke ruhani ehesas ko milte ho.
Har lamha hee pyar ka ehsaa diya karte ho

What I am suggesting is not perfect, I am only making you aware that as a shayar you should atleast try to rhyme.

Shikha

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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2016, 07:38:01 PM »
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sundar rachnaa...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2016, 08:23:55 PM »
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Bahot khooob, bahot hi pyarey aur haseen ehsasaaat waaaaaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2016, 08:05:58 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2016, 01:13:31 PM »
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