"' chupp '" 'nirala'

by nirala on December 16, 2010, 09:32:10 AM
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chuppp kab tak rahoge
dard kab tak sahoge
            ayega ik din aisa 'nirala'
           puakaar pukaar mera naam saari duniya se kahoge
mohabbat me yun chupp rehna
        shayd majboori ho teri
seene me chhupe dard ko sahna
        shayd aadat ho teri
ye le kiya mene tujhse ek wada
na kahenge ab hum bhi kuch
        samjhte hai tujhe hum jaan le
        tujhe tujhse bhi bahut jada
ab bata de sanam
chupp kab tak rahoge
dard kab tak sahoge
            "nirala"
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2010, 09:49:33 AM »
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bahut khoob nirala ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2010, 09:54:25 AM »
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bht khubb nirala ji....
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2010, 09:57:14 AM »
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chup rehkar bhi dil sab kuch bol jaata hai
apne pyar ki yaad mein khud ko kyun tarhpaata hai
sun leta hai wohi awaaz jab bhi payal bajti hai
sanson mein uski bas pyar ki khushboo basti hai
humein maalum na tha ke kya hai unke dil mein
kyun woh humein dekhkar chup chup kar hasti hai
hum samjh baithey pyaar isko yeh to uski dillagi thi
yahan pyar to bohut anmol hai musukraahat bohut sasti hai
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2010, 10:00:34 AM »
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last 2 lines superbbbb haisahil ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2010, 10:26:42 AM »
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thx anu ji

yun hi mere dil ko sambhalye rakhna aye dil
apne se juda karke tere sang lagaya hai
socha hai yahi ke tu khush rahega unke paas
yahi sochkar unke dil mein aahsyan tera banaya hai
likhkar apne dil par un zazbaton ko
tere dil ke armaano se barhi shidat se bhijwaya hai
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2010, 11:13:56 AM »
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hahaha----
ye dil bewafa hai tera
           aur tu 'nirala' bewafa kahe dusron ko..!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2011, 08:47:34 AM »
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chuppp kab tak rahoge
dard kab tak sahoge
            ayega ik din aisa 'nirala'
           puakaar pukaar mera naam saari duniya se kahoge
mohabbat me yun chupp rehna
        shayd majboori ho teri
seene me chhupe dard ko sahna
        shayd aadat ho teri
ye le kiya mene tujhse ek wada
na kahenge ab hum bhi kuch
        samjhte hai tujhe hum jaan le
        tujhe tujhse bhi bahut jada
ab bata de sanam
chupp kab tak rahoge
dard kab tak sahoge
            "nirala"
baht khoob janaab

acha khayal hai--

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khus rahen
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2011, 08:51:29 AM »
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chuppp kab tak rahoge
dard kab tak sahoge
            ayega ik din aisa 'nirala'
           puakaar pukaar mera naam saari duniya se kahoge
mohabbat me yun chupp rehna
        shayd majboori ho teri
seene me chhupe dard ko sahna
        shayd aadat ho teri
ye le kiya mene tujhse ek wada
na kahenge ab hum bhi kuch
        samjhte hai tujhe hum jaan le
        tujhe tujhse bhi bahut jada
ab bata de sanam
chupp kab tak rahoge
dard kab tak sahoge
            "nirala"

acha likha hai. per nirala ji aapke sanam ka chupp rahne ki wajah kya hai tongue3 icon_scratch
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