churake la !

by sahal on September 06, 2012, 07:07:26 AM
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                                    CHURAKE  LA!    
{main is kalam mein apne dil se mukhatib hoon}

Saqee maikade se  botal churake la,
Ruthke baitha hai  sanam kabse  mana ke la.
Gardish e ayyam ne sukoon se milne nahi diya,
Waqt e haazir se do pal churake la.
Unke tan ki mehak se mehka hai yeh badan,
Mush o amber se jake khushboo churake la.
Judai mein uski pagal sa hogaya hai ,kahe
Majnu se jake uski laila churake la.
Ulfat e jayaz jagir hai meri,
Gurbat se jake meri ameeri churake la.
Meri acchiyan bhi unhe pasand aati hai bohut,
Badaamaliyon se meri naki churake la.
Makhlooq mein koi ghamzada na rahe ,
Taqdeer  se jake pehle hasi churake la.
Mere siwa koi unki tareef karey yeh gawara nahi humey,
Shayer se jake uski shayeri churake la.
Zameen-e-dil pe barsa nahi khayalon ka paani abtak,
Badal se jake unki yaadein churake la.
Akelepan ne unko chupchap sa kardiya hai,
Tanhaiyon se  unki guftar churake la
Zindagi bhar saath dene ka humne bhi wada karliya,
Gardish-e-maut se unki hayat churake la.
Bandagi mein teri kuch zouq to paida kar “sahal”,
Awargi se pehle meri  ibadat churake la.
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2012, 07:25:20 AM »
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                               CHURAKE  LA!   
{main is kalam mein apne dil se mukhatib hoon}

Saqee maikade se  botal churake la,
Ruthke baitha hai  sanam kabse  mana ke la.

Gardish e ayyam ne sukoon se milne nahi diya,
Waqt e haazir se do pal churake la.

Unke tan ki mehak se mehka hai yeh badan,
Mush o amber se jake khushboo churake la.

Judai mein uski pagal sa hogaya hai ,kahe
Majnu se jake uski laila churake la.

Ulfat e jayaz jagir hai meri,
Gurbat se jake meri ameeri churake la.

Meri acchiyan bhi unhe pasand aati hai bohut,
Badaamaliyon se meri naki churake la.

Makhlooq mein koi ghamzada na rahe ,
Taqdeer  se jake pehle hasi churake la.

Mere siwa koi unki tareef karey yeh gawara nahi humey,
Shayer se jake uski shayeri churake la.

Zameen-e-dil pe barsa nahi khayalon ka paani abtak,
Badal se jake unki yaadein churake la.

Akelepan ne unko chupchap sa kardiya hai,
Tanhaiyon se  unki guftar churake la

Zindagi bhar saath dene ka humne bhi wada karliya,
Gardish-e-maut se unki hayat churake la.

Bandagi mein teri kuch zouq to paida kar “sahal”,
Awargi se pehle meri  ibadat churake la.


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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2012, 07:31:33 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2012, 08:18:58 AM »
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                               CHURAKE  LA!   
{main is kalam mein apne dil se mukhatib hoon}

Saqee maikade se  botal churake la,
Ruthke baitha hai  sanam kabse  mana ke la.
Gardish e ayyam ne sukoon se milne nahi diya,
Waqt e haazir se do pal churake la.
Unke tan ki mehak se mehka hai yeh badan,
Mush o amber se jake khushboo churake la.
Judai mein uski pagal sa hogaya hai ,kahe
Majnu se jake uski laila churake la.
Ulfat e jayaz jagir hai meri,
Gurbat se jake meri ameeri churake la.
Meri acchiyan bhi unhe pasand aati hai bohut,
Badaamaliyon se meri naki churake la.
Makhlooq mein koi ghamzada na rahe ,
Taqdeer  se jake pehle hasi churake la.
Mere siwa koi unki tareef karey yeh gawara nahi humey,
Shayer se jake uski shayeri churake la.
Zameen-e-dil pe barsa nahi khayalon ka paani abtak,
Badal se jake unki yaadein churake la.
Akelepan ne unko chupchap sa kardiya hai,
Tanhaiyon se  unki guftar churake la
Zindagi bhar saath dene ka humne bhi wada karliya,
Gardish-e-maut se unki hayat churake la.
Bandagi mein teri kuch zouq to paida kar “sahal”,
Awargi se pehle meri  ibadat churake la.



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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2012, 08:23:30 AM »
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very very evry verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyy  thank brother  khamosh_awaaz.
this praises is all Alone Almighty...yeh my RAU IS 0 ....WAT IS RAU???
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2012, 09:47:17 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2012, 09:49:33 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2012, 11:15:03 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Sahal ji....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2012, 11:35:23 AM »
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Wah wah Sahal jee
Kya khoob likha hai..aap nahee jaante ..is naayaab kalaam kee keemat..
Bhai maan gaye..aise ehsaas likhna…kasie tareef karun..shayad mere bas kee baat nahee.
Ek nahee hazaar baar padhne ko jee kar raha hai..
Last ke do sher to….DAAD DAAD DAAD DAAD
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2012, 01:00:54 PM »
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bahot bahot khoob....

jab kisi ki koi  rachna bahot achchi lagti haI to ham Rau bhi de sakte hai comments k saath...ab Khamosh ji ne aapko Rau diya hai, to appka Rau=1 ho gaya hai, sabhi ke namm k neeche unke Rau count aap dekh sakte hai....
when u  complete 100 posts then u get the power of giving Rau, which u can give once in 8 hrs and if u want to give it to the same author twice then it takes 15 hrs...chk support section to know more..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: November 27, 2012, 01:57:14 PM »
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bahot bahot khoob....

jab kisi ki koi  rachna bahot achchi lagti haI to ham Rau bhi de sakte hai comments k saath...ab Khamosh ji ne aapko Rau diya hai, to appka Rau=1 ho gaya hai, sabhi ke namm k neeche unke Rau count aap dekh sakte hai....
when u  complete 100 posts then u get the power of giving Rau, which u can give once in 8 hrs and if u want to give it to the same author twice then it takes 15 hrs...chk support section to know more..... Usual Smile
Thankyou ! sps
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«Reply #11 on: November 29, 2012, 06:56:12 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Sahal ji....!!!
Thankyou ! hriday ji
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«Reply #12 on: November 29, 2012, 06:59:48 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

badiya  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2012, 07:01:08 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

badiya  Thumbs UP
Thankyou ! suman ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2013, 11:22:12 AM »
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Wah wah Sahal jee
Kya khoob likha hai..aap nahee jaante ..is naayaab kalaam kee keemat..
Bhai maan gaye..aise ehsaas likhna…kasie tareef karun..shayad mere bas kee baat nahee.
Ek nahee hazaar baar padhne ko jee kar raha hai..
Last ke do sher to….DAAD DAAD DAAD DAAD

Thankyou ! mukesh ji ...
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