Could not decide the title.....!!!

by Talat on December 10, 2006, 03:23:48 PM
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Teri chahat sukoon ban kar mere andar utar jaati hai
Mere lahu main ghul kar, nas nas main bahe jaati hai

Ye tera  maasoomiyat se  mujhe dekh  kar muskuana
Teri  har  ada se mere dil ki  dhadkan bikhar jaati hai

Ye humare  darmiyaan hain faasle, umr ke mulkon ke
Koi bhi  doori  mujh ko tujhse na  juda  kar  paati hai

Kehti nahin  hoon tujhse par sab tujh ko  khabar hai
Khyaalat,  meri  har soch,  tujh tak pahunch jaati hai

Zindagi  ko  mujhse  roothne ki aadat  si  ho gayi hai
Haan   ye teri   ulfat   hi   use  har  baar  mana  laati  hai

Har  shaam  le  ke aati hai naya andhera zindagi main
Teri mohabbat ban ke subah  nayi  roshni de jaati hai

Na jaane kitne imtihaan baaqi hain tujhe paane ke liye
Par suna hai, hina pis ke hi  pathar pe,  rang laati  hai !!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2006, 03:30:25 PM »
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talat ji...... bahoot hi khoobsurat.... :D :D
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2006, 03:47:51 PM »
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talat aapi vry nice!!!!!!! :D
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2006, 03:54:30 PM »
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Quote from: "Talat"

Kehti nahin  hoon tujhse par sab tujh ko  khabar hai
Khyaalat,  meri  har soch,  tujh tak pahunch jaati hai


yeh do lines sabse pyaari laagi....

Meri dewangni ka asar shayad tujhe bhi ho gaya hai
Meri tarah,khawaboN mein tera hal pal kho gaya hai

mere jeevan ki dorr abb tere hathon mein rahegi sada
tere sath mera abb umar bhar ka naata ho gaya hai

chaleinge jo sung sung,har mushkil asan kar jayeinge
thaam kar ek duje ka hath hum,duniya se lad jayeinge

tujhe jeevan sathi chuuna hai maine mere mehboob
abb tere bina mera reh pana naMumkin ho gaya hai......
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2006, 04:24:20 PM »
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wah Talat , kya baat he !! Its great. :D
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2006, 05:09:18 PM »
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awesome  Talat........  beautiful  ghazal.....bahot hi acchi  lagi mujhe......bahot  acche andaaj mein pesh kiya tumne......  too   good  Jeet........ very  nice reply.........title  to  likh  do......
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2006, 05:29:19 PM »
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Its wonderful Talat !

Though every line is wonderful but I liked
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Na jaane kitne imtihaan baaqi hain tujhe paane ke liye
Par suna hai, hina pis ke hi pathar pe, rang laati hai !!!
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Jeet, you also did nice work! Keep it coming.
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2006, 06:04:29 PM »
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Ki likh rahein hain Kalaam teri Mohabbat ka..
Ki Kaise hum upni chahat tujhe batayenge !!

Herf rooth kar kahin chale gaye hain humse,
Alfaazon ne bhi koi dushmani kar lee hai..
Koshish chahe lakh karein par lagta hai jaise,
Chup rehne kuch na kehne ki kasam bhar lee hai..

Ukerne ki chah mein tasveer teri iss kaaghaz per,
Wast-ae teri ulfat hum yun nazm likh rahe hain...
Laga hume.n yun aise ki yeh kalam aur syaahi jaise,
Teri ulfat ki saagar sae moti chun rahe hain...

Jo kiya tassavur tera inn annkhon nae,
Zingagi ko ek baar phir hum jee jaayenge,
Jo mile muskurahat ta-umra tujhe mere dilnashee.n
Jahan mein tab hum azeem sukoo.n payenge !!!

Ki likh rahein hain Kalaam teri Mohabbat ka..
Ki Kaise hum upni chahat tujhe batayenge !!

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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2006, 01:58:59 AM »
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Bohat khoob Talat, Ek baar phir se apne talent ki intehaa kar daali aap ne..
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2006, 02:01:24 AM »
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Beautiful Replies Jeet & Ricky...
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: December 11, 2006, 02:40:20 PM »
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Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
talat ji...... bahoot hi khoobsurat.... :D :D

Thanks Jeet :D

Quote from: "anjani_si"
talat aapi vry nice!!!!!!! :D

Thanks Anjani :D

Quote from: "afzalxp"
wah Talat , kya baat he !! Its great. :D

Thanks Afzal !

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
awesome  Talat........  beautiful  ghazal.....bahot hi acchi  lagi mujhe......bahot  acche andaaj mein pesh kiya tumne......  too   good  Jeet........ very  nice reply.........title  to  likh  do......

Thank you Waheed :D
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«Reply #11 on: December 11, 2006, 02:43:00 PM »
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Its wonderful Talat !

Though every line is wonderful but I liked
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Na jaane kitne imtihaan baaqi hain tujhe paane ke liye
Par suna hai, hina pis ke hi pathar pe, rang laati hai !!!
.

Jeet, you also did nice work! Keep it coming.


Thank You Ricky...I also liked the last line most !! Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2006, 02:43:57 PM »
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Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat khoob Talat, Ek baar phir se apne talent ki intehaa kar daali aap ne..


Bohot bohot Shukriya Aryaan :D
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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2006, 02:44:56 PM »
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Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "Talat"

Kehti nahin  hoon tujhse par sab tujh ko  khabar hai
Khyaalat,  meri  har soch,  tujh tak pahunch jaati hai


yeh do lines sabse pyaari laagi....

Meri dewangni ka asar shayad tujhe bhi ho gaya hai
Meri tarah,khawaboN mein tera hal pal kho gaya hai

mere jeevan ki dorr abb tere hathon mein rahegi sada
tere sath mera abb umar bhar ka naata ho gaya hai

chaleinge jo sung sung,har mushkil asan kar jayeinge
thaam kar ek duje ka hath hum,duniya se lad jayeinge

tujhe jeevan sathi chuuna hai maine mere mehboob
abb tere bina mera reh pana naMumkin ho gaya hai......


You also have written very good Jeet...Very Nice !! Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2006, 02:49:14 PM »
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Ki likh rahein hain Kalaam teri Mohabbat ka..
Ki Kaise hum upni chahat tujhe batayenge !!

Herf rooth kar kahin chale gaye hain humse,
Alfaazon ne bhi koi dushmani kar lee hai..
Koshish chahe lakh karein par lagta hai jaise,
Chup rehne kuch na kehne ki kasam bhar lee hai..

Ukerne ki chah mein tasveer teri iss kaaghaz per,
Wast-ae teri ulfat hum yun nazm likh rahe hain...
Laga hume.n yun aise ki yeh kalam aur syaahi jaise,
Teri ulfat ki saagar sae moti chun rahe hain...

Jo kiya tassavur tera inn annkhon nae,
Zingagi ko ek baar phir hum jee jaayenge,
Jo mile muskurahat ta-umra tujhe mere dilnashee.n
Jahan mein tab hum azeem sukoo.n payenge !!!

Ki likh rahein hain Kalaam teri Mohabbat ka..
Ki Kaise hum upni chahat tujhe batayenge !!

Edited total in 1 time by Ricky


Its beautiful....and different, like your every poem !! :D
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