Could not decide the title.....!!!

by Talat on December 10, 2006, 03:23:48 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 14, 2006, 11:34:15 AM »
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Kya batayen hume ishq ne kya kya hai diya
Dil main utra sukoom, kabhi ashkon ko piya
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«Reply #16 on: December 14, 2006, 12:13:15 PM »
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Teri chahat sukoon ban kar mere andar utar jaati hai
Mere lahu main ghul kar, nas nas main bahe jaati hai

Ye tera  maasoomiyat se  mujhe dekh  kar muskuana
Teri  har  ada se mere dil ki  dhadkan bikhar jaati hai

Ye humare  darmiyaan hain faasle, umr ke mulkon ke
Koi bhi  doori  mujh ko tujhse na  juda  kar  paati hai

Kehti nahin  hoon tujhse par sab tujh ko  khabar hai
Khyaalat,  meri  har soch,  tujh tak pahunch jaati hai

Zindagi  ko  mujhse  roothne ki aadat  si  ho gayi hai
Haan   ye teri   ulfat   hi   use  har  baar  mana  laati  hai

Har  shaam  le  ke aati hai naya andhera zindagi main
Teri mohabbat ban ke subah  nayi  roshni de jaati hai

Na jaane kitne imtihaan baaqi hain tujhe paane ke liye
Par suna hai, hina pis ke hi  pathar pe,  rang laati  hai !!!


TALAT JI .. kya kahun.... tareef ke liye alfaaz kam padh gaye hain..

LAJAWAB-BEHTREEN-KHUBSOORAT... Usual Smile  Usual Smile
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.... bahut khoobbbb........!!!!!!
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«Reply #17 on: December 14, 2006, 02:22:32 PM »
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Bohot bohott Shukriya Vicky Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: December 15, 2006, 06:43:09 AM »
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Teri chahat sukoon ban kar mere andar utar jaati hai
Mere lahu main ghul kar, nas nas main bahe jaati hai

Ye tera  maasoomiyat se  mujhe dekh  kar muskuana
Teri  har  ada se mere dil ki  dhadkan bikhar jaati hai

Ye humare  darmiyaan hain faasle, umr ke mulkon ke
Koi bhi  doori  mujh ko tujhse na  juda  kar  paati hai

Kehti nahin  hoon tujhse par sab tujh ko  khabar hai
Khyaalat,  meri  har soch,  tujh tak pahunch jaati hai

Zindagi  ko  mujhse  roothne ki aadat  si  ho gayi hai
Haan   ye teri   ulfat   hi   use  har  baar  mana  laati  hai

Har  shaam  le  ke aati hai naya andhera zindagi main
Teri mohabbat ban ke subah  nayi  roshni de jaati hai

Na jaane kitne imtihaan baaqi hain tujhe paane ke liye
Par suna hai, hina pis ke hi  pathar pe,  rang laati  hai !!!



wah wah talat ji bahut khoob!!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: December 15, 2006, 10:34:34 AM »
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Shukriya Gesu!!:)
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«Reply #20 on: December 15, 2006, 05:16:02 PM »
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Bohat khoob Talat,as always pleasure reading u.Excellent jeet n Ricky too.
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«Reply #21 on: December 15, 2006, 05:23:44 PM »
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Thank you so much Nidhi.....Tum bhi likho na...its been long to see your beautiful poetry Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: December 15, 2006, 05:41:44 PM »
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Well....i'll try Usual Smile .

"Pyaar bhare nagme kabhi likhti thi kisi ke liye,
      muskuraati thi har waqt kisi ki muskaan k liye,

      aankho me meri uske hi pyaar ki chamak thi,
      judaai me uski pal-pal main bohat tadapti thi,

      waqt badal gaya,zindagi k maayne badal gaye,
      aankho me aaj bas aansoo hi hain reh gaye,

      dil me reh gayi hain un haseen palon ki yaadein,
      chalti aaj bhi uski hi yaadon se hain meri sansein,

      jo bhi hua,nahi jaanti kyon aur kaise huaa,
      kaise zindagi ka kaarwan ek pal me ruk gaya."
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«Reply #23 on: December 15, 2006, 05:43:25 PM »
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Very touching Nidhi...and as usual, excellent .....!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: December 15, 2006, 05:50:34 PM »
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Thanx Talat,ab likhne ki aadat nahi rahi isliye touch me nahi hun,will try pehle jaisa kuch likh sakun Usual Smile .
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«Reply #25 on: December 15, 2006, 06:02:26 PM »
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wah wah  Nidhi,............itne  din  baad tumhari  acchi poem  padhne ko  mili...........very   nice :lol:
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«Reply #26 on: December 15, 2006, 06:12:29 PM »
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lol thanx waheed tongue3 .
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«Reply #27 on: December 15, 2006, 06:23:32 PM »
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ur  welcome  jee  :lol:
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«Reply #28 on: December 16, 2006, 04:23:08 AM »
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wonderful Talat.. ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai....
Superb reply Jeet.... hamehs aki tarah dil se likha hai
Good Job Ricky and Nidhi....
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«Reply #29 on: December 16, 2006, 11:13:44 AM »
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Thanks a lot Pooja Usual Smile
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