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by sayani kuri on August 23, 2008, 09:50:43 PM
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tumhy jo besabab mujh sy khafa hony ki aadat hai
Ye aghaz-e-judai hai k andaz-e-muhabbat hai

Wafa k rang mai dekho jafa ache nai hoti
Kise sy pyar mai itne ana ache nai hoti

Fakht kehny ki baty hain nibhata kon hai kis ko
Chalo ab dekhty hain manata kon hai kis ko............
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2008, 04:54:15 AM »
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VERY NICEE
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2008, 05:42:41 AM »
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good one...
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2008, 06:00:19 AM »
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Very nice SK, keep going.
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2008, 06:36:40 AM »
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Bahut khoob..Sayani Kuri..  Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2008, 08:42:21 AM »
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Good Start by YOU S K,
Wase Manay Hooho ko Manane ki,
Jarurat hi nahi hoote.
by harish pilot
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2008, 12:12:41 PM »
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thank you frndz
Je har koi mana hoa nai hota besabab b loog roth jaty hain janab....
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2008, 01:36:27 PM »
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thank you frndz
Je har koi mana hoa nai hota besabab b loog roth jaty hain janab....
bahut khub S K ji
"Per Rootho ko Manna to, Kudioo ko atta hai"
by Harish Pilot
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2008, 11:25:15 PM »
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kia humy aur kaam nai hain je jo hum manaty rahy ....
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2008, 06:19:26 PM »
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Bahut Khub SK ji,
Per Manane Ka kaam to tum hi karo,
Baki kaam hum kar denge.
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2008, 10:58:10 PM »
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ok je ap ka hukum salaakhoo'n par NaNaNa
Lijiye ap ki nazar ek poetry kerti hon jaanab arz kia hai

Chahat ka k nafrat ka wo koi paigham to deta
Benaam taaluq ko koi naam to deta

Dukh us ky badlny ka nai dukh hai es ka
Wo meri wafa ko koi ilzaam to deta

Rakh laita bharam kuch to meri tashna labi ka
Khali he deta par jaam to deta

Manzil to bohat dor bohat dor the laiken
Ay kash mery sath wo 2 gaam deta

Rangeeni-e-shab ki na talab the na tawaqqa
Sahil pe bas ek dard bhari shaam to deta

Badly mai muhabbat k muhabbat na sahe DARD
Kuch dard kuch alaam kuch ikraam to deta........
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«Reply #11 on: August 26, 2008, 02:27:54 AM »
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Beautiful lines written by you SK,
Perhaps I cannot write such good poem from myself
but I try to write you shortly from my words and
you wrote extermely beatuiful.
Thanks
Harish pilot
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2008, 06:29:49 AM »
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ok je ap ka hukum salaakhoo'n par NaNaNa
Lijiye ap ki nazar ek poetry kerti hon jaanab arz kia hai
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Hukum salaakhon par rakhna aaj dekha,
Sar Aankhon pe rakhte the pahle hamen. -

Very nice. -
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2008, 06:34:41 PM »
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sarahny ka shukriya janaab
mai aise he ho har bat anokhe kerti ho ap abe to aghaz hai agy aagy dekikhiye ho ta hai kia janaaab
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2008, 10:29:44 AM »
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ye raat itne tanha kyo hoti hai
Kismat sy sab ko shekayat kyo hoti hai
Kabhi milo us khuda sy to puchna jis ko pa nai sakty usi sy kyo muhabbat hoti hai.....
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