~:: Daag dekar Saaf chehra manti ho Jaana ::~

by nirbhay on May 02, 2006, 04:14:59 AM
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Daag de kar saaf chehraa mangti ho Jaana
loot ti bhi ho aaur hissa mangne ka bhi karti ho bahana
din mein jism par dhoop ki divaar ban ke Jalaa deti ho
aur shab hotey hii chandni jalaa deti ho Jaana
eik to zakhm deti ho ilm bhi padta hai TifL ko uthana
Shaam hotey hii kehti ho kii tum kuch lamha door hojaana
pyar ka kyun bazaar lagati ho Zalim-e-Jaana  
Baaton ka maar ke thapad, acha lagta hai tumhein mujhe rulaana?
koun hai ye sikhataa tumhein haizabar dasti ka fun
Ke khinch kar diwaar do jimson ke bich mangti ho raasta jaana?
Loot kar jo kar deti ho khaali dil-e-khazana ko tamam shab
fhir subeh karti ho charcha uska SaQion mein jaana!!
Daag de kar saaf chehra mangti ho Jaana
Loot ti bhi ho aaur Hisaa mangne ka bhi karti ho bahana!!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2006, 05:13:23 AM »
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kaya baat hai NEER good one.....
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2006, 05:52:39 AM »
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Loot kar jo kar deti ho khaali dil-e-khazana ko tamam shab
fhir subeh karti ho charcha uska SaQion mein jaana!!
Daag de kar saaf chehra mangti ho Jaana
Loot ti bhi ho aaur Hisaa mangne ka bhi karti ho bahana!!!
 
 
these lines are beautiful........

bahut khub likha hai aapne Nirbhay.......

with best wishes

ranju
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2006, 06:34:50 AM »
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Thanks so very much Vikas Bhai & Ranjana!
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2006, 07:24:49 AM »
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NIRBHAY BHAI humesha ki tarah aapne is baar bhi behtreen likha hai...nice yaar
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2006, 08:57:08 AM »
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bahut khoob neer ji....
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2006, 11:32:55 AM »
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Thnx Vicky Bhai & gesu , aaur aap logg bhi kuch llikhein please!!
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