daastan e dil

by ankit20 on April 28, 2005, 06:32:58 AM
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2005, 06:57:39 AM »
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2005, 07:08:47 AM »
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2005, 07:45:38 AM »
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
thanks priya.
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2005, 07:46:43 AM »
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
thanks priya.
thanks for ur complements coolguy
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2005, 07:54:26 AM »
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
thanks priya.
thanks for ur complements coolguy
aashiyaane ke phool!!its amazzing.keep it up ankit
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
thanks priya.
thanks for ur complements coolguy
aashiyaane ke phool!!its amazzing.keep it up ankit
thanks shweta!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2005, 07:57:47 AM »
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
thanks priya.
thanks for ur complements coolguy
aashiyaane ke phool!!its amazzing.keep it up ankit
thanks shweta!!
ankit,may i add u??
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
thanks priya.
thanks for ur complements coolguy
aashiyaane ke phool!!its amazzing.keep it up ankit
thanks shweta!!
ankit,may i add u??
ya,sure!!
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
thanks priya.
thanks for ur complements coolguy
aashiyaane ke phool!!its amazzing.keep it up ankit
thanks shweta!!
ankit,may i add u??
ya,sure!!
bahut khoob ankitjii!!
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
thanks priya.
thanks for ur complements coolguy
aashiyaane ke phool!!its amazzing.keep it up ankit
thanks shweta!!
ankit,may i add u??
ya,sure!!
bahut khoob ankitjii!!
thanks shayarjii!bas aapki dua hai
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2005, 09:16:35 AM »
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aashiyaana hum naya banayenge
gar aap hamare aashiyaane me hoon
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gar shak hai mann me tumhare
to dil cheer kar dekh lo hamara
hame poora yakeen hai ke
isme tumhare hi aashiyane ke phool khile honge
isme tumhare aashiyane ke phool...........
beautiful line!!!!!
kya kahoon,kahne ke liye shabd nahi hain!!!!!!!!!
thanks priya.
thanks for ur complements coolguy
aashiyaane ke phool!!its amazzing.keep it up ankit
thanks shweta!!
ankit,may i add you??
ya,sure!!
bahut khoob ankitjii!!

likha bahut ki khub hai

dil mai jab se tum aaye ho
kuch aur jachta nahi
bin tere sanam mera dil lagta nahi
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2005, 09:38:42 AM »
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thanks vikas.tumne bhi bahut aacha likha hai!!kisi

ki dhundhli si tasveer
koi simti se yaad
ansoonon ka saath
aur kuch nai

bahut aacha!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2005, 09:42:18 AM »
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thanks vikas!!  

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ki dhundhli si tasveer
koi simti se yaad
ansoonon ka saath
aur kuch nai
v.good lines
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