....dar lagta hai....

by diya786 on May 23, 2009, 12:02:09 PM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1541 times)
diya786
Guest
Reply with quote
Jab se mohabbat mili hai
unse door hone ka dar lagta hai

Jo mehke phool bhi kabhi
to unke sookh kar bikharne ka dar lagta hai

Nain hai koi shikwa is zindagi se mujhe
jo mile woh kismat hai, bas kismat se dar lagta hai

chah kar bhi nahin sambhalta mujhse pyar tumhara
mujhe tumhari is dillagi se dar lagta hai

Meri tanhaai ka yeh kaisa aalam hai "Kashish"
tere siwa koinis darwaaze par aaye to dar lagta hai


Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
***DAR LAGTA HAI*** by yasir_sensitive in Shayri-E-Dard
DaR LAgTA hAi by clicksahil in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
der lagta hai by samnoj in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2  All »
Lagta hai...... by Sonu in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
DAR LAGTA HAI by kyon dil aaj dukha hai in Shayri-E-Dard
k.shael
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2009, 12:09:26 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut khoob Diya dear, umda work, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Na ho jaana dur tum kahiin darr lagta hai,
Mujhe zindagi pe yaqeen nahi kho dene se tumhe darr lagta hai,

U bhi to kayi baar bikhri uljhi aur tooti mein,
Iss baar paa ke phool ko daldall me dhasne se darr lagta hai,

Ye hawayien kabhi bhi na rahi wafadaar mujhse,
Teri mohabbat ke sahare udd to rahi ho par gir jaane se darr
lagta hai,

Shally.

Logged
vikas2210
Guest
«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2009, 12:23:57 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob Divya and Shally. bahut hi accha likha hai aap dono  ne......
Logged
k.shael
Guest
«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2009, 12:32:03 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob Divya and Shally. bahut hi accha likha hai aap dono  ne......

Shukriya vikas ji,

Shally.
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 6 hours and 29 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19903
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2009, 12:41:25 PM »
Reply with quote
Mashallah Bohat Achche Likha Hai Phirse Kashish Ji,AnsShally Ji,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
Logged
deepika_divya
Guest
«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2009, 04:53:32 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahoot bahoot khoob Kashish..

Well replied Shally!
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2009, 02:52:35 AM »
Reply with quote
Jab se mohabbat mili hai
unse door hone ka dar lagta hai

Jo mehke phool bhi kabhi
to unke sookh kar bikharne ka dar lagta hai

Nain hai koi shikwa is zindagi se mujhe
jo mile woh kismat hai, bas kismat se dar lagta hai

chah kar bhi nahin sambhalta mujhse pyar tumhara
mujhe tumhari is dillagi se dar lagta hai

Meri tanhaai ka yeh kaisa aalam hai "Kashish"
tere siwa koinis darwaaze par aaye to dar lagta hai


Wah kitna pyara shayari share kiya aapne Diya dear. Bahut khoob  Applause
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2009, 02:53:26 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahut khoob Diya dear, umda work, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Na ho jaana dur tum kahiin darr lagta hai,
Mujhe zindagi pe yaqeen nahi kho dene se tumhe darr lagta hai,

U bhi to kayi baar bikhri uljhi aur tooti mein,
Iss baar paa ke phool ko daldall me dhasne se darr lagta hai,

Ye hawayien kabhi bhi na rahi wafadaar mujhse,
Teri mohabbat ke sahare udd to rahi ho par gir jaane se darr
lagta hai,

Shally.



Wow shally bahut umda likha hai aapne b... sabhash dear  Thumbs UP
Logged
Sager4u
Guest
«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2009, 03:36:52 AM »
Reply with quote
Jab se mohabbat mili hai
unse door hone ka dar lagta hai

Jo mehke phool bhi kabhi
to unke sookh kar bikharne ka dar lagta hai

Nain hai koi shikwa is zindagi se mujhe
jo mile woh kismat hai, bas kismat se dar lagta hai

chah kar bhi nahin sambhalta mujhse pyar tumhara
mujhe tumhari is dillagi se dar lagta hai

Meri tanhaai ka yeh kaisa aalam hai "Kashish"
tere siwa koinis darwaaze par aaye to dar lagta hai



Hi diya!! Very good job. Keep writing
Logged
vitasta
Guest
«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2009, 03:43:23 AM »
Reply with quote
diya ji aur shally ji, aap donon ne kamaal likha hai
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #10 on: May 24, 2009, 06:38:36 AM »
Reply with quote
very very nice diya ji,beauty, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
qayda
Guest
«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2009, 12:56:36 PM »
Reply with quote
bahoot bahoot behtareen jee diya jee. kafi achhi lagi apki batein...
Logged
SARVESH RASTOGI
Guest
«Reply #12 on: May 26, 2009, 02:29:35 AM »
Reply with quote
Behatareen rachna Diya Ji
Good
SARVESH RASTOGI
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2009, 11:13:28 AM »
Reply with quote
Jab se mohabbat mili hai
unse door hone ka dar lagta hai

Jo mehke phool bhi kabhi
to unke sookh kar bikharne ka dar lagta hai

Nain hai koi shikwa is zindagi se mujhe
jo mile woh kismat hai, bas kismat se dar lagta hai

chah kar bhi nahin sambhalta mujhse pyar tumhara
mujhe tumhari is dillagi se dar lagta hai

Meri tanhaai ka yeh kaisa aalam hai "Kashish"
tere siwa koinis darwaaze par aaye to dar lagta hai




Bohot Khoob Kashish
Logged
_Vicky_
Guest
«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2009, 07:20:48 AM »
Reply with quote
Jab se mohabbat mili hai
unse door hone ka dar lagta hai

Jo mehke phool bhi kabhi
to unke sookh kar bikharne ka dar lagta hai

Nain hai koi shikwa is zindagi se mujhe
jo mile woh kismat hai, bas kismat se dar lagta hai

chah kar bhi nahin sambhalta mujhse pyar tumhara
mujhe tumhari is dillagi se dar lagta hai

Meri tanhaai ka yeh kaisa aalam hai "Kashish"
tere siwa koinis darwaaze par aaye to dar lagta hai




Wah Kya Baat hai Diya Dear... aap to Humesha se Hi Kamaal Likhti Hain. Aur Yeh Peshkash Bhi Humesha Ki tarah Lajawab Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause

Aur shally.. aapne Bhi Behad Khoob Likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 25, 2024, 08:12:43 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]

[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]

[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]

[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]

[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]

by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]

[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]

[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.114 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8509 Real Poets and poetry admirer