!!__-Dard-__!!:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

khamosh.larka

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Har Dard Ko Ae Jaan Main Seeney Main Chupa Loun
Kaante Teri Raahon Ke Main Palkon Pe Saja Loun

Bichdi Hai Meri Neend Bhi Bichda Hai Tu Jab se
Jee Chahae Tuje Roz He Khawabon Main Bula loun

Tu Paas Na Aa HaaN Zara Daman Tu Badha De
Ashkon Ko Kahan Tak In Ankon Main Sanbhalun

Ye Ishq Ka Ilzam Bhi Ilzam Hai Koi
Tere Liye Duniya Ke Har Ilzam Utha Loun

LE Jaye Kahan Jane Hamen Waqt Ka Darya
Is Dil Pe Lage Zakham Zara AJ Dikha LouN...

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Ghulam Haider

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Re: !!__-Dard-__!!

«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2008, 05:18:15 PM »

Quote from: khamosh.larka on October 14, 2008, 04:11:09 PM

Bohot pyaare, Ma'soom, mohabbat se bhare khayaalaat haiN dost !
Aap ki ghazal se ye mahsoos hua ke wazn aour behr se aap waaqif haiN, is liye aap ki ghazal mere liye qaabil-e-ghour hai.
YahaN kuchh baatoN ki taraf isharah karna aap ke liye munaasib samajhta hoN.
(1)- Aap ke shea'r -(3)ke doosre misra' meN "AshkoN ko kahaN tak" ke ba'ad rawaangi mutaassir ho rahi hai.
(2)- Aakhiri shea'r ka doosra misra' bhi kuchh-ma'na aour matalab ke ia'tebaar se-zaE'ef hai.
Aik behtareen ghazal ke liye meri taraf se bohot si daad haazir hai. Likhte rahiye aap bohot pyaara likhte haiN, bohot khushi hui aap ki ghazal paRh kar.
"Haider"


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honeyrose

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Re: !!__-Dard-__!!

«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2008, 06:42:13 PM »

Bohat umda likha hai khamosh ji...


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abdbundeli

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Re: !!__-Dard-__!!

«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2008, 05:14:03 AM »

Quote from: khamosh.larka on October 14, 2008, 04:11:09 PM

khamosh.larka ji,
Applause

Poori gazal umdah hai! Yeh teen asha'ar to khaasey dilkash hain! Badhaayee!
-abd bundeli


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Tanha(Saurabh)

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Re: !!__-Dard-__!!

«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2008, 06:26:09 AM »

bohat bohat bohat umda, kya baat hai...
bohat hi khoobsoorti se aapne khayal bayaan kiya hai khamosh ji.
Applause


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Azeem Azaad

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Re: !!__-Dard-__!!

«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2008, 02:50:48 PM »

Nice One Khamosh JI.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: !!__-Dard-__!!

«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2008, 06:30:57 AM »

KHAMOSH JI AAPNE SACH MEI BOHUT HI KHUBSURAT SI GAZAL LIKHI HAI Applause

BE POSITIVE THINK POSITIVE AND MAKES LIFE HAPPY


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khamosh.larka

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Re: !!__-Dard-__!!

«Reply #7 on: October 16, 2008, 02:18:33 PM »

bouth shukriya jinab saab ka


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Re: !!__-Dard-__!!

«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2008, 11:02:00 AM »

U Are welcome Dost,.


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