dard-e-judai

by diya786 on February 07, 2008, 05:27:38 AM
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as a new member i need everyone's love n support to keep my spirits alive
koi gustakhi ho jaye to maaf bhi kar dijiyega



jis aanshian ke banne ke dekhe the maine khwab
us ghar mein k raat ki mehmaan bhi na thi

rooti rahi agarche mein main majboor thi bahut
woh raaat katni koi aasaan bhi na thi

jiski aankhon se dekhte aaye is jahan ko abtak
us aankh mein mere liye pehchaan bhi na thi

itna samajh chuki thi main uske mizaz ko
ki woh jaa raha tha aur main hairaan bhi na thi
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2008, 05:59:25 AM »
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Welcome diya ..Bohat acha likha hai aapne..nice Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2008, 07:19:56 AM »
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wohh Quatil hai jo katleaam ho gaya
yeh Katla kaisa jo sareaam ho gaya
ooth gaya dekho jo kabhi katl hua tha
jaaney jee ke bhi wohh kyon bejaan ho gaya.
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diya786
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2008, 09:09:36 AM »
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thanks a lot zakhmola and honeyrose i will try my best to write more
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2008, 02:23:49 PM »
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Very Good Work Diya...
and nice reply Zakhmola... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2008, 05:04:23 AM »
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bahoot aache diya ji & zakhmola ji

Mizaz kisi ka kya samjhe,
Jab khud ko hi na samaj paaye,
Bahoot the majboorian.
Jo tere raahe na hum bhoola paaye!!!!


Baadal
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2008, 03:32:43 AM »
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bahut khoob baadalji
thanks a lot
ijazat ho to aapki lines mein kuch aur mila do

 Usual Smilekyun mere humraaz tune dil ki halat pooch li
tujhko bhi rona pada mujhe bhula dene ke baad
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2008, 04:15:36 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on February 07, 2008, 05:27:38 AM
as a new member i need everyone's love n support to keep my spirits alive
koi gustakhi ho jaye to maaf bhi kar dijiyega



jis aanshian ke banne ke dekhe the maine khwab
us ghar mein k raat ki mehmaan bhi na thi

rooti rahi agarche mein main majboor thi bahut
woh raaat katni koi aasaan bhi na thi

jiski aankhon se dekhte aaye is jahan ko abtak
us aankh mein mere liye pehchaan bhi na thi

itna samajh chuki thi main uske mizaz ko
ki woh jaa raha tha aur main hairaan bhi na thi
Quote from: diya786 on February 09, 2008, 03:32:43 AM
bahut khoob baadalji
thanks a lot
ijazat ho to aapki lines mein kuch aur mila do

 Usual Smilekyun mere humraaz tune dil ki halat pooch li
tujhko bhi rona pada mujhe bhula dene ke baad

Diyaa...Tumne To aate Hi dhamakedaar Shura'aat Ki Thi.
Itni Jabardast Entry..
Us waqt Bhale aap Naye ho Lekin Andaaz e shayrana To wohi Puraana Jo asksar bade bade shayaro me paya jaata hai..
Badhiya..

Dua Hai Rab se Ki " Wo LikhaeiN aur aap LikheiN..Jisme Kashish sada Mauzud RaheiN "
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«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2008, 07:18:54 AM »
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aisa lagta hai ki aap aaj sirf meri hi posts dekhne online aaye hain
ek aur baar shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2008, 07:26:55 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on November 14, 2008, 07:18:54 AM
aisa lagta hai ki aap aaj sirf meri hi posts dekhne online aaye hain
ek aur baar shukriya

aapi post Mein Kashish hi Itni Hai ki,,Kya KaheiN  ??
Khinche Chale aate Hai sub aur Kya ??
acha,,suno
Fir waqt MehrbaaN ho Na ho,,is Liye Tumhare saare Kalaam Padh Liye,Insha allah Fir Mauqa mile Ya Na Mile,zindagi wafa Kare Na Kare............
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«Reply #10 on: November 14, 2008, 07:32:10 AM »
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aapke chahne waalo ki kami nahin hai
ALLAH sab ko aapka saath naseeb karein AMEEN!!
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«Reply #11 on: November 14, 2008, 07:33:58 AM »
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Very wonderfully presented work Diya Ji
Bas likhte rahiyega
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diya786
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«Reply #12 on: November 14, 2008, 10:19:45 AM »
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shukriya Rajesh ji
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«Reply #13 on: November 14, 2008, 11:03:32 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on February 07, 2008, 05:27:38 AM
as a new member i need everyone's love n support to keep my spirits alive
koi gustakhi ho jaye to maaf bhi kar dijiyega

jis aanshian ke banne ke dekhe the maine khwab
us ghar mein k raat ki mehmaan bhi na thi

rooti rahi agarche mein main majboor thi bahut
woh raaat katni koi aasaan bhi na thi

jiski aankhon se dekhte aaye is jahan ko abtak
us aankh mein mere liye pehchaan bhi na thi

itna samajh chuki thi main uske mizaz ko
ki woh jaa raha tha aur main hairaan bhi na thi



...nice start Diya...it's good one...keep it up and keep writing...Welcome to the Yoindian Family...
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«Reply #14 on: March 09, 2009, 06:00:13 AM »
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nice sharing janab
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