Dariyaa key kinaarey utar rahee hai aaj shab!

by abdbundeli on February 15, 2011, 02:28:15 PM
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Yeh neem syaah shaam, aur wo haseen jaw:
Dariyaa key kinaarey utar rahee hai aaj shab!
Kyaa hi hasin neem surkh choonaree, 'abd',
Oudhhey hai; kaho ab na, to, aaougey bhalaa kab?

                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2011, 03:06:52 AM »
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wah wah Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
bundeli sir aaj fursat se aapke saare nagme parhe mene:)
dil khus ho gaya
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2011, 05:03:59 AM »
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wah wah Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
bundeli sir aaj fursat se aapke saare nagme parhe mene:)
dil khus ho gaya

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Nirala ji!

             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2011, 06:07:40 AM »
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ATI SUNDER LINES abd JI...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aaj maine aaftaab kee sunehri kirno ko
Neele sagar k pani me uterte dekha hai

Usha kee laali me tere chehre kee surkhee ko
Dekh dariya ki lehron sa dil machal gayaa hai





Yeh neem syaah shaam, aur wo haseen jaw:
Dariyaa key kinaarey utar rahee hai aaj shab!
Kyaa hi hasin neem surkh choonaree, 'abd',
Oudhhey hai; kaho ab na, to, aaougey bhalaa kab?

                - abd bundeli

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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2011, 10:17:43 AM »
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ATI SUNDER LINES abd JI...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aaj maine aaftaab kee sunehri kirno ko
Neele sagar k pani me uterte dekha hai

Usha kee laali me tere chehre kee surkhee ko
Dekh dariya ki lehron sa dil machal gayaa hai


Bahut-bahut shukriyah Koyal ji!

Ugtey sooraj ko deykh,jab bhi deykhtaa hun tumhain:
Mujhko lagtaa hai kahin chaand to nahin ho tum!!

             - abd bundeli

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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2011, 06:04:17 PM »
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Bahut Khub Abd JI
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2011, 05:44:12 AM »
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Bahut Khub Abd JI

Thanks Rishi ji!

     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2011, 05:45:21 AM »
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Bahut Khub Abd JI

Thanks Rishi ji!

     - abd bundeli
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