dastak de gaya koi!

by salma786 on February 10, 2009, 02:04:11 PM
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Dil ke darwaze pe,
Dastak de gaya koi,
Khabar hi na huyi,
Kab kabza kar gaya koi!

Mayusi k alam me thi mai,
Thi Bhujti lau ki tarah,
Tab aya wo zindegi me,
Ek jalte angar ki tarah!

Ishq ka jazba jagaya mujhme,
Duniya ka naya rang dikhaya,
Mere sare khwabon k raste,
Usne phoolose sajaya!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2009, 02:20:19 PM »
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very nicely said... baar baar padrne ko dil kar raha hai...
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2009, 04:46:32 PM »
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Nice One Salma Ji,.
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2009, 06:20:28 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 10, 2009, 02:04:11 PM
Dil ke darwaze pe,
Dastak de gaya koi,
Khabar hi na huyi,
Kab kabza kar gaya koi!

Mayusi k alam me thi mai,
Thi Bhujti lau ki tarah,
Tab aya wo zindegi me,
Ek jalte angar ki tarah!

Ishq ka jazba jagaya mujhme,
Duniya ka naya rang dikhaya,
Mere sare khwabon k raste,
Usne phoolose sajaya!!

wah wah Salma jee...bahaut dino bad apki shayari padi...acha laga... Applause Applause


bewaffai karke hi pyaar ka matlab sikha gaya koi,
jane anjane humse dil laga gaya koi,
hum toh sukun se jee rahe the ek dafan dil ke saath,
choo ke humari kabar ko phir se pyaar ka ehsaas dila gaya koi...

abhi sukhe hi the humare ansu,
phir se rone ki wajah de gaya koi,
chain se mar rahe the humari andheri duniya main,
juthi roshni dikha ke phir se jeene ki wajah de gaya koi...
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2009, 06:27:39 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 10, 2009, 02:04:11 PM
Dil ke darwaze pe,
Dastak de gaya koi,
Khabar hi na huyi,
Kab kabza kar gaya koi!

Mayusi k alam me thi mai,
Thi Bhujti lau ki tarah,
Tab aya wo zindegi me,
Ek jalte angar ki tarah!

Ishq ka jazba jagaya mujhme,
Duniya ka naya rang dikhaya,
Mere sare khwabon k raste,
Usne phoolose sajaya!!
Khoobsurat klaam Salma ji.asghr
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2009, 04:32:58 AM »
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Shukriya Anjaan ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2009, 04:33:55 AM »
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Thanx janasheen ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2009, 04:35:42 AM »
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M honoured Heart ji !!!!!!!!1
Thank you!
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2009, 04:42:31 AM »
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Shukriya Asghr ji!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2009, 11:00:00 AM »
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very Nice Salma. keep writing...
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2009, 04:47:56 PM »
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M honoured Heart ji !!!!!!!!1
Thank you!
ohh ur welcome!!!
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2009, 11:57:30 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 10, 2009, 02:04:11 PM
Dil ke darwaze pe,
Dastak de gaya koi,
Khabar hi na huyi,
Kab kabza kar gaya koi!

Mayusi k alam me thi mai,
Thi Bhujti lau ki tarah,
Tab aya wo zindegi me,
Ek jalte angar ki tarah!

Ishq ka jazba jagaya mujhme,
Duniya ka naya rang dikhaya,
Mere sare khwabon k raste,
Usne phoolose sajaya!!

dil ke darwaze pe
dastak de gaya koi
khabr hi na hui
kab qabza kar gay koi..........bhut khoob salma ji

nice thought keep it up...............

dil ko dil ki nazar se daikhenge gay
chaand ko apne nagar se daikhnege gay
kia kabr kab us par asar ho jaye aslam
usko hum har baam o dar se daikhenge gay
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«Reply #12 on: February 13, 2009, 05:49:38 AM »
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Thanks aaina ji !
Apne acha likha hai .....
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«Reply #13 on: February 13, 2009, 06:22:26 AM »
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Dil se dekhne ki nazar honi chahye,
Dhadkan ko samjhne ki nazar honi chahye,
Yu to chand me bhi log daag dhund hi lete hai,
Noor-e-chaand dekhne ki nazar honi chahye!
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«Reply #14 on: February 13, 2009, 06:25:22 AM »
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NICE WORK Salma, DH and aaina
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