dastak de gaya koi!

by salma786 on February 10, 2009, 02:04:11 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 13, 2009, 06:36:27 AM »
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Thanks Pooja ji!
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«Reply #16 on: February 13, 2009, 08:14:03 AM »
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Thanks sophi ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #17 on: February 13, 2009, 08:28:47 AM »
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Bahut khoob Salma Ji
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salma786
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«Reply #18 on: February 13, 2009, 08:57:51 AM »
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Shukriya Rajesh ji!
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«Reply #19 on: February 13, 2009, 09:05:46 AM »
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Dil ke darwaze pe,
Dastak de gaya koi,
Khabar hi na huyi,
Kab kabza kar gaya koi!

Mayusi k alam me thi mai,
Thi Bhujti lau ki tarah,
Tab aya wo zindegi me,
Ek jalte angar ki tarah!

Ishq ka jazba jagaya mujhme,
Duniya ka naya rang dikhaya,
Mere sare khwabon k raste,
Usne phoolose sajaya!!


WAH KYA BAAT HAI SALMA,. VERY NICE

JASBIR SINGH
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salma786
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«Reply #20 on: February 13, 2009, 09:06:59 AM »
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Shukriya jasbeer ji!
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: February 13, 2009, 10:21:11 AM »
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Dil ke darwaze pe,
Dastak de gaya koi,
Khabar hi na huyi,
Kab kabza kar gaya koi!

Mayusi k alam me thi mai,
Thi Bhujti lau ki tarah,
Tab aya wo zindegi me,
Ek jalte angar ki tarah!

Ishq ka jazba jagaya mujhme,
Duniya ka naya rang dikhaya,
Mere sare khwabon k raste,
Usne phoolose sajaya!!


Dil se dekhne ki nazar honi chahye,
Dhadkan ko samjhne ki nazar honi chahye,
Yu to chand me bhi log daag dhund hi lete hai,
Noor-e-chaand dekhne ki nazar honi chahye!


Bohot Khoob Salma....Keep writing.

Nice contributions Heart, Aaina Ji
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salma786
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«Reply #22 on: February 13, 2009, 10:30:55 AM »
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Thanks celmira ji!
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dead heart
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«Reply #23 on: February 13, 2009, 06:54:31 PM »
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NICE WORK Salma, DH and aaina
Shukriya Pooja jee
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dead heart
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«Reply #24 on: February 13, 2009, 06:58:12 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Salma jee...

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pankshivam
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«Reply #25 on: February 13, 2009, 06:59:38 PM »
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Very Nice Salmaji
Aaina aur Rahim Bhai Khoob Likha aap logo ne bhi

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dead heart
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«Reply #26 on: February 13, 2009, 07:01:50 PM »
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Shukriya Pank jee
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pankshivam
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«Reply #27 on: February 13, 2009, 07:47:21 PM »
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Dil ke darvaje pe dastak de gaya koi,
Dekhta raaha khali dil seene me, jab chain sanso ka le gaya koi...

Aakhir hai ye kaisa khumaar, jo chaino sukun baki na raha,
Kaisi khushi hai is dard me, jab sanso ki jaruri ho gaya koi...

~Pank~
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«Reply #28 on: February 13, 2009, 08:19:45 PM »
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bahoot khoob Pank ji!!
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«Reply #29 on: February 13, 2009, 08:33:47 PM »
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Dil ke darvaje pe dastak de gaya koi,
Dekhta raaha khali dil seene me, jab chain sanso ka le gaya koi...

Aakhir hai ye kaisa khumaar, jo chaino sukun baki na raha,
Kaisi khushi hai is dard me, jab sanso ki jaruri ho gaya koi...

~Pank~
Ati sundar Shivam Ji
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