Dastane Mohabbat

by Jaabeer on June 19, 2013, 01:40:35 PM
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Ye meri daastane mohabbat ka haal,
He dil agar lahoo to jigar payemaal he..

Ek hum ke unke ashq bhi bahne na de,
ek wo ke mera khoon bhi un par halal he...

Hum un ki tarah be wafaa hargiz na ho sake,
Aur un ko isi baat ka ranjo malal he...
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2013, 03:10:46 PM »
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Quote from: Jaabeer on June 19, 2013, 01:40:35 PM
Ye meri daastane mohabbat ka haal,
He dil agar lahoo to jigar payemaal he..

Ek hum ke unke ashq bhi bahne na de,
ek wo ke mera khoon bhi un par halal he...

Hum un ki tarah be wafaa hargiz na ho sake,
Aur un ko isi baat ka ranjo malal he...

good,sir
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2013, 05:25:26 PM »
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Quote from: Jaabeer on June 19, 2013, 01:40:35 PM
Ye meri daastane mohabbat ka haal,
He dil agar lahoo to jigar payemaal he..

Ek hum ke unke ashq bhi bahne na de,
ek wo ke mera khoon bhi un par halal he...

Hum un ki tarah be wafaa hargiz na ho sake,
Aur un ko isi baat ka ranjo malal he...
good one ...keep writing..
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2013, 02:06:29 PM »
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Thank you all for your appreciation - Have wrote one other piece please give your comments.  sunny
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