deedare yaar

by sanchit on April 03, 2010, 12:26:45 PM
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Sochkar unhe din guzar jata hai,
Raat ko chehra unka chand me nazar aata hai,
Karte hain deedar unka chaand ke bahane se hum,
Aur yun hi dheere dheere raat ka samaa guzar jaata hai...
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2010, 05:36:48 PM »
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Nice creation Sanchit ji.
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2010, 07:14:59 PM »
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bahut achcha likha hai aapne sanchit ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2010, 07:37:57 PM »
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Wahhhhhhhh
Sochkar unhe din guzar jata hai,
Raat ko chehra unka chand me nazar aata hai,
Karte hain deedar unka chaand ke bahane se hum,
Aur yun hi dheere dheere raat ka samaa guzar jaata hai...
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