-----/// Deewaanaa aajkal huwaa ///----- Hriday

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jabse natkhat tumhaari aankhon kaa kaajal huwaa
yeh dil meraa fir se  mohabbat mein paagal huwaa

jab chehre se apne zulfon ko hataayaa tumne tab
yeh dil meraa barasne  ko pyaar kaa baadal huwaa

koshish laakh karlo  tum, main duur jaaun tum se
yeh dil meraa tumhaare  aur kareeb pal pal huwaa

yun asar kiyaa hai  tumhaari aankhon ne mujh par
dil meraa  lutne  ko paagal tum par har pal huwaa

thaa  yeh  aashiq barson se haseen har chehre kaa
dil  meraa  dekh  tumhe  deewaanaa aaj kal huwaa


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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2013, 05:59:52 PM »
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waah waah kya baat hai hriday ji.. bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2013, 06:47:12 PM »
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क्या बात है ह्रदय जी, बारिशों के मौसम में क्या रूमानियत भरी पेशकश है......
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WAAH WAAH...SUPER.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Very nice..Hriday ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bahut bahut bahut hi achchi peshkash rahi hriday ji. sabhi ashaar bahut pyaare hai. aur yeh sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya. dheron daaaaaaaaaaad..

koshish laakh karlo  tum, main duur jaaun tum se
yeh dil meraa tumhaare  aur kareeb pal pal huwaa

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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2013, 08:33:09 PM »
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Sudhar jaa sudhar jaa warna khuub maar khaoge kusi din jo hr ek chehre k deewane bane tum..

Bht acha likha h kp..... maza aaya ji
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बहुत खूब हृदय जी.. Applause
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Hawa kharab hai ajkal ki
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«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2013, 04:52:05 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 03, 2013, 05:47:20 PM


jabse natkhat tumhaari aankhon kaa kaajal huwaa
yeh dil meraa fir se  mohabbat mein paagal huwaa
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jab chehre se apne zulfon ko hataayaa tumne tab
yeh dil meraa barasne  ko pyaar kaa baadal huwaa
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koshish laakh karlo  tum, main duur jaaun tum se
yeh dil meraa tumhaare  aur kareeb pal pal huwaa
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yun asar kiyaa hai  tumhaari aankhon ne mujh par
dil meraa  lutne  ko paagal tum par har pal huwaa
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thaa  yeh  aashiq barson se haseen har chehre kaa
dil  meraa  dekh  tumhe  deewaanaa aaj kal huwaa

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waah waah bahut khoob
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa bhaai....!!!

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 03, 2013, 05:59:52 PM
waah waah kya baat hai hriday ji.. bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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