Deewana bana du Tujhko

by Pooja on February 05, 2008, 07:54:16 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 07, 2008, 02:26:11 PM »
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WAH BADALJI ISE KEHTE HAI NEHLE PE DEHLA
WAH JI WAH JWAB NAHI AAPKA
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«Reply #16 on: February 07, 2008, 04:44:59 PM »
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bahoot khoob baadal ji and sagar ji!!! app dono ne hi bahoot acha likha hai!!!

Samet le khud ko aor tujh main simat jaaye
Le chal ishaq-e-hawa jidher bhi ab tu jaaye

Hua hai deewana yah man, na jaane kaya kar jaaye
Rok le a dil apni dhadkan, iske shor se na ab hum mar jaaye

Jidher dekhu, dekhu ussi ko her taraf
Kisi bhi raah-e-manjil se ab hum gujar jaaye

Samet le khud ko aor tujh main simat jaaye
Le chal e-ishaq-hawa jidher bhi ab tu jaaye.............
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«Reply #17 on: February 07, 2008, 05:17:45 PM »
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Wah wah Kya baat Hai Pooja JI.. Kamaal kar Diya aapne.. Lijiye aaj kuch Likh hi dete Hain.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
aur Bahut Khoob Baadal ji aur Sagar Bhai..!!



Mila kar Nazren Phir Jhuka Lena, Sanam Samajh Aata nahi,
Yeh Ishq-o-Hawa Ka Zor Hai, Ya Ishq me Sharmana hai Tera..

Deewane ko Aur Kar Jati Ho Deewana, Bas ek Nazar me hi tu,
Yeh Aankhon se Kuch Kahana Hai, ya Aankhon se Muskunra Hai Tera..

Mar Mite Hain Hum To Teri Ek Nigaah Par, E- Husn-e-Mallika,
Yeh Ishq-o-Hawa Ki Shararat hai, Ya Yeh Husn-e-Jalwa Hai Tera...!!
Winking Winking
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«Reply #18 on: February 07, 2008, 05:30:06 PM »
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Vicky ji wo punjabi mai kahte hai.. mar jawa gurr kha ke...
such mai bahoot hi payara likha hai.. aise hi nahi apko King-e-khumar-e-ishaq ka khitab diya!!!
 hummm bahoot soch mai daal dete hai app ki kaya jawab likha jaaye!!!

Koshish karati hu:

Na dekhon un sharart se, ki na teri aor dekh paaye
Tera yah muskurna, Ya rub, hum yahi na mar jaaye

Jhuk gai nigah, magar dil ne bas yahi chaha
Ajj teri bahon mai akar, hum tujh per mar jaaye

Teri deewangi per yah husan-e-jaan hai fida
Phir bhi chahat, her ek deewangi se ajj gujar jaaye

Yah kaya kiya tune, ki fiza bhi ho gai khamosh
Lo kar li band ankhein, teri sanso ki sargoshio mai ajj pighal jaye!!


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«Reply #19 on: February 07, 2008, 05:58:44 PM »
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Areeeeeee Pooja Ji Main Is Kaabil.. Phir se Sharminda kar rahi hain aap.. Khumaar-e-Queen to aap Hain.. Winking Winking

hahahahaha.. bahut bahut Khubsoorat jawab Likha hai aapne..!!
aur koshish aap nahi koshish To Hum karte hain aapke sath Likhne ki.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


Teri Naaz-e-Jawaani ko Hum, Shabaab Kahate Hain,
Chalke jo Teri Aankhon se, Use Sharaab Kahate Hain...

Jo Dekh le tu Shararat-e-Nazar se Bas ek Baar Sanam,
Teri Is Nazar-e-Ada Ko Hum, Ishq-e-Andaaz Kahate hain...

Fiza me jo Khushbu Tere Badan Ki Ghul aaye Hai Dilbar,
is Manzar ko Hum Gulshan Ka, Husn-e-Gulaab Kahate hain....

Baahon Me jo Aa Jao Tum, Saanson Me jo Pighal Jao Tum,
Is Tamanna Is Khwaaish Ko Hum, Ek haseen Khawaab Kahate hain..

Ek Haseen Khawaab Kahate hain...!!
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«Reply #20 on: February 08, 2008, 04:57:18 AM »
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bahoot khoob vicky ji & pooja ji
aap jitna aacha to nahi likh sakta lakin saath de sakta hu
isliye thori koshish ki,



Aa jao ke marna sikha du tumhe,
Pyar kya hai dikha du tumhe,

Apne pe garoor hoga tumhe,
Ishq main apne jalna sikha du tumhe,

Aata hoga tadapna tumhe,
Us tadap ko mitana sikha du tumhe,

Aaa ki Deewana bana du Tujhko,
BAADAL ke raho se gujarna sikha du tujhko........




Baadal




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«Reply #21 on: February 08, 2008, 11:02:15 AM »
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kya baat hai vicky bhai aaj to sabhi romantic hue ja rahe hai,par kya kare shayad ye mousam ka hi asar hai hum sabhi pe.
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«Reply #22 on: February 08, 2008, 03:26:46 PM »
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wowow Too good Vicky ji kaya kahne apke.. bahoot bahoot hi acha likha hai apne.. Shabdo ko shayari mai pirona apko khoob atta hai....

Baadal ji bahoot hi payara likha hai apne... hamesha ki tarah simple words magar bahoot gahre!!!

Good job Both!!!
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«Reply #23 on: February 08, 2008, 03:33:56 PM »
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Vicky ji... apki kavita ka jawab dene ki koshish kar rahi hu:

kahte ho kaya kaya kuch samjh  atta nahi
dekh le jo tumko ek baar, hosh phir rah jaata nahi

man muchal uthata hai, teri ek najar se sanam
dil ki dhadkano ko phir koi chain atta nahi

Fiza mai rangat le atte ho, apni ek chuan ke sath
Manjar phir tere siwa, in ankhon ko najar atta nahi

Behkata hai yah man, kanp jata hai yah badan
Tujh main kho jaane ke baad, Hosh phir rah jaata nahi!!
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«Reply #24 on: February 08, 2008, 03:43:18 PM »
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Baadal ji apki kavita ke jawab mai ek koshish .....

Pyar ko jaana hai tujhse milane ke baad
Yah dil deewana hai tujhse milane ke baad

Apne per garoor kyun na ho, tujhse milane ke baad
Kaya hai Ashiq ki deewangi, yah jaana hai tujhse milane ke baad

Tadap kahte hai kise, yah samjh ayya tujhse milane ke baad
Her baar aor badati gai yah tadap, tujhse milane ke baad

Aa tujhko bhi deewana bana du, her Milan ke sath
Sochna sirf aor sirf mujhko, her apne Milan ke baad!!!
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«Reply #25 on: February 08, 2008, 03:43:41 PM »
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kya baat hai vicky bhai aaj to sabhi romantic hue ja rahe hai,par kya kare shayad ye mousam ka hi asar hai hum sabhi pe.

sagar ji is baar app kuch nahi likh kar gaye Huh?
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«Reply #26 on: February 09, 2008, 07:55:07 AM »
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kya baat hai Pooja ji n badal

acha likh rahe ho aise hi likhte raho
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«Reply #27 on: February 12, 2008, 03:51:45 PM »
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shukaria sam... apka likha hua magar kaha hai??
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«Reply #28 on: March 06, 2008, 09:20:13 PM »
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Ankho ki bhasha se ajj tujhko samjha du
Aa kareeb mere, tujhko deewana bana du

Kajal ki bhasha mai tujhko padna sikha du
Aa kareeb mere, tujhko deewana bana du

Kahata hai kaya kangna, yah tujhko samjha du
Aa kareeb mere, tujhko deewana bana du

Bindia ki bhasha, churri ki khankhan
Sab tujhko samjha du
Aa kareeb mere, tujhko deewana bana du

Payal ki runjhun, raato ki dhunbun
Sab ka ek aaina dikha du
Aa kareeb mere, tujhko deewana bana du!!!
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«Reply #29 on: April 22, 2008, 01:03:00 PM »
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hosh main nahi main, aa tere bhi hosh urda du
laker apni bahon main, tujhko apna DEEWANA bana du
mehkati is fiza ke zare zrae ko behka du
dekhon jo meri taraf, tujh se tujhi ko chura lu

Apni pehchan aa teri pehchan se bana lu
le lo jo bahon main, zindagi bhar ka sung mehka du

hosh main nahi main, aa tere bhi hosh urda du
laker apni bahon main, tujhko apna DEEWANA bana du
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