Dekha hai maine...

by brokenbyluv on September 19, 2010, 07:03:14 PM
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Dekha hai maine terri palko k har khwab ko,
dekha hai maine terri ankho mein behte sailaab ko,

dekha hai maine jab jab tu udas tha,
dekha hai maine merri maudgi mein terri muskaan ka raaz tha,

dekha hai maine tujhe chhupate hue terri mhbt ko,
dekha hai maine terri khamoshi mein terri hasrat ko,

dekha hai maine kayi mausamo ko terre khayalo mein badlte hue,
dekha hai maine baato mein chaht k lafzo ko milte hue,

dekha hai maine door kahiin apna bhi ashiya,
dekha hai maine terri nazaro se ik naya sa jahan,

dekha hai maine tujhe hi door door tak har saaye mein,
dekha hai maine tujhe hi merre apno aur paraye mein,

dekha hai maine ab merri tanhai terre ujalo mein khone lagi hai,
dekha hai maine dard k lamho ko ab khushi se mhbt hone lagi hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2010, 07:20:22 PM »
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wah Geet ji... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... par iska location change ho gaya dekhte dekhte... maine jawaab tayyar kar liya tha to usko yahin post kar deta hoon...


tumhaaare hothon pe hum ab muskaan saja denge,
kaaton ko chunke raahon pe phool bichha denge,

jo dekhen the khwaab tumne wo hum poore karenge,
hum tumhaare aansoo ki har ek boond mita denge,

ek chhota sa aashiyaan hoga apna aur hum honge,
us aashiyaane ko ab hum khushiyon se saja denge,

na dard ki awaaz hogi na ghum ka koi saaya hoga,
khud ko tumhaare har dard ki hum dawa bana lenge,

ab har lamha hum ek dusre ke bas saath rahenge,
duniya ko bhula denge hum aur har rasm mita denge,

aangan me tumhaare chaahat ka chiraag jala denge,
chaahat ke mehek se tumhaari zindagi mehka denge,

tumpe hi hum ab apni ye zindagi loota denge,
kuch na karenge hum, bas tumse pyaar karenge...
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2010, 07:23:29 PM »
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Shukriya aur Bahut khoob kapil ji..bahut khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2010, 07:27:47 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2010, 07:35:00 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Shihab ji...!!!


Quote from: Shihab on September 19, 2010, 07:31:13 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji
Aur Janaab Klaskar Ji Aapne Bhi
Jawaab Mein Bahut Achcha Likha Hai.


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2010, 07:43:39 PM »
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BBL jee aadaab!

Achchi creation hai ..... daad..
Itna sab kuch dekhkar bhi khamosh raheN ... Very sad.. tongue3
Just kidding..

Aapne achche khayaloN meiN dhala hai is kalaam ko..
Keep writting..
Keep posting...
keep smiling... Usual Smile
          

.... Hum ne just aapke post per shayari meiN rely dene ki koshish kii hai Plz don't mind hope aapko bura nahi lageNga....


Suna tha tujhe ab bhi mujhse pyaar hai
Suna tha tujhe ab bhi mera intezaar hai

Suna tha tumne Khuda se kafi shikayate ki
Suna tha tum milne ko ab bhi bekaraar hai

Suna tha tuu humesha mujhe yaad karti hai
Suna tha tere dil meiN mousam e bahaar hai

Suna tha teri baateN meri muskuraahatoN pe
Suna tha mera nahi kisi aur ka iqtiyaar hai

Suna tha meri moujudgi bhi tujhe sukun deti thi
Suna hai aaj kal woh sari baateN bekaar hai



    

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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2010, 11:19:12 PM »
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BBl ji bhut achi kavita kahi hai apne......

Bhut hi khoob !!!!!!!!!

Keep writing ... so we could get this kind of gud poems ....
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2010, 07:51:14 AM »
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bahut badhiya  icon_salut
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«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2010, 08:55:14 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        BROKENBYLUV JI....


DEKHA HAI MAINE TUJHKO MERI HASRAT KARTE

DEKHA HAI MAINE TUJHKO MERA GHANTON INTEZAAR KARTE

DEKHA HAI MAINE MERE PYAAR MEIN TUJHKO TARDAFTE

DEKHA HAI MAINE TERI NAZRON MEIN KHUDKO

DEKHA HAI MAINE APNI BHAHON MEIN TUJHKO

DEKHA HAI MAINE APNE DIL MEIN TUJHKO

DEKHA HAI MAINE APNAATE IK DUJHE KO......
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«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2010, 10:34:33 AM »
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Ur welcome kapil ji...Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji,parwaaz ji,neel ji,cara ji n amar ji...aur parwaaz ji n cara ji apne bahut khoob likha hai bahut bahut shukriya share karne k liye..........
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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2010, 01:00:27 PM »
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Geet Ji Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Likha Hai aapne.. Mohabbat Ko Lafzon Me Dhaalna aap Khoob Jaanti hain.. Pyaar Bhare ek ek Lamhe ko Bahut Saadgi se Pesh kiya hai aapne... Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen Dil Se...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #11 on: September 27, 2010, 05:08:58 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya mann ji...daad kabul ki...notworthy
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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2010, 11:07:50 AM »
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bohat bohat bohat khoob likha hai geet ji....
bohat accha laga mujhe padhkar......
dil se dua'in nikal rahi hainaapke liye.....  notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #13 on: October 01, 2010, 11:22:20 AM »
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bahut khoob geet ji  Applause
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«Reply #14 on: October 02, 2010, 12:58:13 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut bahut shukriya kashish ji..n badal ji shukriya apka bhi...Usual Smile
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