-----/// Dekhe jaa rahaa hoon ///----- Hriday

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tumhe khoob kahun, yaa tumhaare shringaar ko kahun
main dekh ke tumhe, bas tumhe dekhe jaa rahaa hoon

baadal ko kahun, yaa fir aankhon ke kaajal ko kahun
tumhaari surmayi aankhon ko bas dekhe jaa rahaa hoon

shaayad chaand utar aayaa hai aasmaan se zameen par
kabhi tumko kabhi chaand ko bas dekhe jaa raha hoon

mere saanson ki tezi bhi aaj kuch tez si ho rahi hai
ye bandhne lagi hain tumse, inse kahun to kyaa kahun

yeh kaisaa nashaa chadhaa tumhaare roop kaa mujh par
main hoon nahi khud me, gum kahin huye jaa rahaa hoon


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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2013, 06:13:20 AM »
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bahut khoob kapil ji badaa achhaa kalaam hai badhaai
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2013, 07:00:56 AM »
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wah wah, dhero dad
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2013, 08:43:45 AM »
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Nice!!! Very Romantic!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2013, 10:30:05 AM »
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how romantic hriday jee. ek dum mast. dheron daad qubool kare
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2013, 11:24:05 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2013, 11:56:58 AM »
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mere saanson ki tezi bhi aaj kuch tez si ho rahi hai
ye bandhne lagi hain tumse, inse kahun to kyaa kahun

yeh kaisaa nashaa chadhaa tumhaare roop kaa mujh par
main hoon nahi khud me, gum kahin huye jaa rahaa hoon
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2013, 05:48:48 PM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab... kis apsaraa ko dekhe jaa raheN hai..Usual Smile
badi hi dekhud kalaam kah gaye .. bahut khoob janab..

Behad achche khayaalOn ko baNdha hai.. HUmari dheroN daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2013, 01:08:14 AM »
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bahut khoob
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2013, 02:30:07 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2013, 06:16:21 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Nandbahu ...!!!

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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2013, 04:21:54 AM »
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thanks a lot Shireen ji.....!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on January 03, 2013, 08:43:45 AM
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aqsh ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Anmol ji....!!!

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