-----/// Dekhiye ///------Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on September 25, 2013, 10:17:52 PM
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un  ki  teer -e- nazar dekhiye
chaahaton  kaa  asar dekhiye

jaane hum ko  kyaa ho rahaa
neend nahi raatbhar dekhiye

bheege  sharbati honth unke
unki  patli  si   kamar dekhiye

gehre  hain  kitne  nain unke
kabhi unme doobkar dekhiye

pyaar  un  se kyun naa karen
kamsin  si  yeh  umar dekhiye

unpar  dil   haarte  hain kyun
unkaa  hi   hai  hunar dekhiye

chhoo  lenge aasmaan ko bhi
khwaahishon  ke par dekhiye

hai  khoobsurat  yeh  zindagi
kareeb  unke  thahar dekhiye


*****HRIDAY*****


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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2013, 10:21:11 PM »
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un  ki  teer -e- nazar dekhiye
chaahaton  kaa  asar dekhiye

jaane hum ko  kyaa ho rahaa
neend nahi raatbhar dekhiye

bheege  sharbati honth unke
unki  patli  si   kamar dekhiye

gehre  hain  kitne  nain unke
kabhi unme doobkar dekhiye

pyaar un se kyun naa karen
kamsin si yeh umar dekhiye

unpar dil haarte hain kyun
unkaa hi hai hunar dekhiye

chhoo lenge aasmaan ko bhi
khwaahishon ke par dekhiye

hai khoobsurat yeh zindagi
kareeb unke thahar dekhiye


*****HRIDAY*****




nice one,sir
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«Reply #2 on: September 25, 2013, 10:42:52 PM »
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unpar  dil   haarte  hain kyun
unkaa  hi   hai  hunar dekhiye
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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2013, 11:32:55 PM »
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Nice One Hriday Jee.
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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2013, 01:52:58 AM »
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bahut khoob Hriday ji . Ishq ka poora khumaar ghazal par chadha hai . daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2013, 02:59:55 AM »
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wha wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2013, 04:16:15 AM »
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un  ki  teer -e- nazar dekhiye
chaahaton  kaa  asar dekhiye

jaane hum ko  kyaa ho rahaa
neend nahi raatbhar dekhiye

bheege  sharbati honth unke
unki  patli  si   kamar dekhiye

gehre  hain  kitne  nain unke
kabhi unme doobkar dekhiye

pyaar  un  se kyun naa karen
kamsin  si  yeh  umar dekhiye

unpar  dil   haarte  hain kyun
unkaa  hi   hai  hunar dekhiye

chhoo  lenge aasmaan ko bhi
khwaahishon  ke par dekhiye

hai  khoobsurat  yeh  zindagi
kareeb  unke  thahar dekhiye


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wah wah......!


                    likhne ka jnoo.n aisa hai mujh per!
                    aaj ghazal mujh se bekhabar dekhiye!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 26, 2013, 09:07:34 AM »
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waah waah waah waah waah bas waah
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«Reply #8 on: September 26, 2013, 04:34:54 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waah waah waah hridayji.. kya baat hai.. sirf khumar hi khumar nazar aa raha hai aapki ghazal mein.. aise hi khush rahiye.... hame achchi ghazalein padhne ko milti hai ek dam ishq mein doobi hui.. dheron dheron daaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2013, 12:18:54 AM »
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bheege  sharbati honth unke
unki  patli  si   kamar dekhiye

bahut badhiya Hriday jee
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«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2013, 02:23:38 AM »
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thank u sooo much M_B ji....!!!

nice one,sir
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bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sabhi kaa....!!!
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