Dekhna Tujhe

by Pooja on August 07, 2009, 06:37:28 PM
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Ek dost ko kuch shabd kavita ke roop main kisi ko kahne the.. unke shabdo ko maine Kavita ka roop dene ki koshish ki hai.. aor unki permission se yah unke liye likhi kavita mai yaha post karne ja rahi hu:

Dekhna tujhe aor dekh kar tujhe chu lena
Sapna lage mujhe ab, jaise urr kar badalo ko chu lena

Her jagah thi bheer, per ek tera chehra he yaad hai
Yaad hai bas, wo hans kar tera  mujhko uhin dekh lena

Pakda tha hath maine, ya tum he simat aai thi bahon main
Yaad hai bas, wo tera mujh per yakin kar lena

Bichard kar mil gaye hai, mil kar na bichade ab kabhi
Zindagi ka maksad ban gaya, bas tera yeh mujhko kah dena

Dekhna tujhe aor dekh kar tujhe chu lena
Sapna lage mujhe ab, jaise urr kar badalo ko chu lena
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Bharat
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2009, 06:42:41 PM »
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Pooja ji,
Aapne bahot achcha likha hai...
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2009, 06:43:32 PM »
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Pooja ji,
Aapne bahot achcha likha hai...

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Bharat ji!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2009, 06:50:46 PM »
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WAH WAH POOJA JI... WAH ,.... bahut hi khoob ....

DEKHA TUJHEY TOH DIL MERA MACHAL GAYA
LABOH PEH KHUSHI AUR AAKOH MEH NOOR AAYA
KARISHMA TERE PYAR KA HAI YEH AISA SANAM
PATJHAR KEY MAUSAM MEH HI JAISEY SAWAN AAYA



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2009, 04:54:33 AM »
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Ek dost ko kuch shabd kavita ke roop main kisi ko kahne the.. unke shabdo ko maine Kavita ka roop dene ki koshish ki hai.. aor unki permission se yah unke liye likhi kavita mai yaha post karne ja rahi hu:

Dekhna tujhe aor dekh kar tujhe chu lena
Sapna lage mujhe ab, jaise urr kar badalo ko chu lena

Her jagah thi bheer, per ek tera chehra he yaad hai
Yaad hai bas, wo hans kar tera  mujhko uhin dekh lena

Pakda tha hath maine, ya tum he simat aai thi bahon main
Yaad hai bas, wo tera mujh per yakin kar lena

Bichard kar mil gaye hai, mil kar na bichade ab kabhi
Zindagi ka maksad ban gaya, bas tera yeh mujhko kah dena

Dekhna tujhe aor dekh kar tujhe chu lena
Sapna lage mujhe ab, jaise urr kar badalo ko chu lena


Awwww.. Bahoot bahoot romantic hai...bahoot hi pyara aur khubsoorat likha hai aapne.. bahoot Khoob!

Kaash mujhe bhi koi aisa kehta..Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2009, 04:55:00 AM »
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WAH WAH POOJA JI... WAH ,.... bahut hi khoob ....

DEKHA TUJHEY TOH DIL MERA MACHAL GAYA
LABOH PEH KHUSHI AUR AAKOH MEH NOOR AAYA
KARISHMA TERE PYAR KA HAI YEH AISA SANAM
PATJHAR KEY MAUSAM MEH HI JAISEY SAWAN AAYA



JASBIR SINGH

Waah Bahoot bahoot khoob Jasbir ji
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cara
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2009, 06:20:52 AM »
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Ek dost ko kuch shabd kavita ke roop main kisi ko kahne the.. unke shabdo ko maine Kavita ka roop dene ki koshish ki hai.. aor unki permission se yah unke liye likhi kavita mai yaha post karne ja rahi hu:

Dekhna tujhe aor dekh kar tujhe chu lena
Sapna lage mujhe ab, jaise urr kar badalo ko chu lena

Her jagah thi bheer, per ek tera chehra he yaad hai
Yaad hai bas, wo hans kar tera  mujhko uhin dekh lena

Pakda tha hath maine, ya tum he simat aai thi bahon main
Yaad hai bas, wo tera mujh per yakin kar lena

Bichard kar mil gaye hai, mil kar na bichade ab kabhi
Zindagi ka maksad ban gaya, bas tera yeh mujhko kah dena

Dekhna tujhe aor dekh kar tujhe chu lena
Sapna lage mujhe ab, jaise urr kar badalo ko chu lena

kya baat hai     pooja ji.......

DEKHNA TUJHE AOR DEKH KAR TUJHE CHU LENA,
LAGAA JAISEY APNE HAATHON MAIN JANNAT LENA.

HAR JAGAH THI BHEER,PAR EK TERA CHEHRA HI YAAD HAI,
LAGAA JAISEY TAMAAM BADLON KE BEECH,CHAND KO DEKH LENA.

PAKDA THA HAATH MAINE,YA TUM HI SIMAT AAYI THI BAHON MAIN,
LAGAA JAISEY,TERA PURA BADAN MUJHPAR, KHUD NISHAAVAR KAR DENA.

BICHARD KAR MIL GAYE HAI,MIL KAR NA BICHARDE AB KABHI,
HUM TUM SE WADA KARTE HAI,TU HAMSE WADA KAR LENA.

DEKHA TUJHE AOR DEKH KAR TUJHE CHU LENA,
LAGA JAISE ISHQ MAIN BARPUR AANAND LENA.
   
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2009, 01:33:18 PM »
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kya baat hai     pooja ji.......

DEKHNA TUJHE AOR DEKH KAR TUJHE CHU LENA,
LAGAA JAISEY APNE HAATHON MAIN JANNAT LENA.

HAR JAGAH THI BHEER,PAR EK TERA CHEHRA HI YAAD HAI,
LAGAA JAISEY TAMAAM BADLON KE BEECH,CHAND KO DEKH LENA.

PAKDA THA HAATH MAINE,YA TUM HI SIMAT AAYI THI BAHON MAIN,
LAGAA JAISEY,TERA PURA BADAN MUJHPAR, KHUD NISHAAVAR KAR DENA.

BICHARD KAR MIL GAYE HAI,MIL KAR NA BICHARDE AB KABHI,
HUM TUM SE WADA KARTE HAI,TU HAMSE WADA KAR LENA.

DEKHA TUJHE AOR DEKH KAR TUJHE CHU LENA,
LAGA JAISE ISHQ MAIN BARPUR AANAND LENA.
  

wah wah bahut hi khoob cara ji

jasbir singh
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2009, 01:33:35 PM »
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Waah Bahoot bahoot khoob Jasbir ji

thanks sophi ji

jasbir singh
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: August 10, 2009, 06:21:06 PM »
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WAH WAH POOJA JI... WAH ,.... bahut hi khoob ....

DEKHA TUJHEY TOH DIL MERA MACHAL GAYA
LABOH PEH KHUSHI AUR AAKOH MEH NOOR AAYA
KARISHMA TERE PYAR KA HAI YEH AISA SANAM
PATJHAR KEY MAUSAM MEH HI JAISEY SAWAN AAYA



JASBIR SINGH

Thanks Jas ji and Nice lines!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: August 10, 2009, 06:21:26 PM »
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Awwww.. Bahoot bahoot romantic hai...bahoot hi pyara aur khubsoorat likha hai aapne.. bahoot Khoob!

Kaash mujhe bhi koi aisa kehta..Usual Smile

Thanks Sophi!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: August 10, 2009, 06:22:07 PM »
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kya baat hai     pooja ji.......

DEKHNA TUJHE AOR DEKH KAR TUJHE CHU LENA,
LAGAA JAISEY APNE HAATHON MAIN JANNAT LENA.

HAR JAGAH THI BHEER,PAR EK TERA CHEHRA HI YAAD HAI,
LAGAA JAISEY TAMAAM BADLON KE BEECH,CHAND KO DEKH LENA.

PAKDA THA HAATH MAINE,YA TUM HI SIMAT AAYI THI BAHON MAIN,
LAGAA JAISEY,TERA PURA BADAN MUJHPAR, KHUD NISHAAVAR KAR DENA.

BICHARD KAR MIL GAYE HAI,MIL KAR NA BICHARDE AB KABHI,
HUM TUM SE WADA KARTE HAI,TU HAMSE WADA KAR LENA.

DEKHA TUJHE AOR DEKH KAR TUJHE CHU LENA,
LAGA JAISE ISHQ MAIN BARPUR AANAND LENA.
  

Shukaria Cara ji.. behad acha likha hai apne...Koshish hogi jalad kuch aor likhne ki!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 11, 2009, 08:08:15 AM »
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Wow Pooja Ji.. Behad Hi Pyaar Bhare Alfaaz Yahan Bikhere Hain aapne.. Mohabbat Aur Chaahat Ko Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya hai.. Ek Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash hai aapki.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #13 on: August 11, 2009, 08:13:20 AM »
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Wah wah Pooja ji bahut khoob mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :clap:beautiful lines by Jasbir ji and Cara ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: August 11, 2009, 11:45:47 AM »
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bahut achche di kya baat hai

dil ko tere ishq kii arzoo nahin
tu na mila toh bhi yeh tujhe chahega
magar itna toh bata de kii tu pehchanega mujhko
jab kabhi bheed main "saahil" najar aayega
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