Dekhna Tujhe

by Pooja on August 07, 2009, 06:37:28 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 11, 2009, 01:57:19 PM »
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Bahut Acche Pooja Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: August 11, 2009, 04:09:49 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on August 11, 2009, 08:08:15 AM
Wow Pooja Ji.. Behad Hi Pyaar Bhare Alfaaz Yahan Bikhere Hain aapne.. Mohabbat Aur Chaahat Ko Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya hai.. Ek Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash hai aapki.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**

Kaya Gazab hua ki Mann ji app yaha ayye, kavita parri, achi lagi aor do line bhi nahi nikali apki kalam se....

kaise maan jaye ki apko such main kavita achi lagi  DOH DOH DOH

bahoot NA-INSAAFI HAI YAH TO HUMARI KAVITA KE SATH  Crying Crying
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«Reply #17 on: August 11, 2009, 04:10:24 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 11, 2009, 08:13:20 AM
Wah wah Pooja ji bahut khoob mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :clap:beautiful lines by Jasbir ji and Cara ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


BAHOOT BAHOOT SHUKARIA MADHU JI!!!
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«Reply #18 on: August 11, 2009, 04:12:34 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 11, 2009, 11:45:47 AM
bahut achche di kya baat hai

dil ko tere ishq kii arzoo nahin
tu na mila toh bhi yeh tujhe chahega
magar itna toh bata de kii tu pehchanega mujhko
jab kabhi bheed main "saahil" najar aayega

thanks and nice lines Saahil bro!!
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«Reply #19 on: August 11, 2009, 04:13:37 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on August 11, 2009, 01:57:19 PM
Bahut Acche Pooja Ji Usual Smile

na isaafi app bhi kar rahe hai HumTum ji... adat nahi apse sirf comments dekhne ki....
acha laga ki apko mera likha acha laga!! Usual Smile

Next time koshish hogi ki itna acha jaroor lage ki apki kalam khud b khud do lines to likh he jaaye!!
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«Reply #20 on: August 12, 2009, 09:58:06 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 11, 2009, 04:09:49 PM
Kaya Gazab hua ki Mann ji app yaha ayye, kavita parri, achi lagi aor do line bhi nahi nikali apki kalam se....

kaise maan jaye ki apko such main kavita achi lagi  DOH DOH DOH

bahoot NA-INSAAFI HAI YAH TO HUMARI KAVITA KE SATH  Crying Crying

Hahaha.. Pooja Ji.. Pahale hi Bahut si Threads aapke Jawab ka intzaar kar rahi hai Bechaari.. un par Bhi Nazren Inaayat kijiye..  Giggle Giggle

Is Na-insaafi Ke Sath, Chaliye Insaaf Kiye dete Hain,
Aapki Khubsoorati Par Hi Kuch Alfaaz Likhe Dete Hain...!!

****~~~~****~~~~****~~~~****~~~~****~~~~****

Teri Aankhon Se Thodi Aur Dillagi Karne Ko Dil Chaahta Hai,
Sharaarat Ke Sath, “Mann” Thoda Gustaakh Hona Chaahta Hai..

Jheel Si Neeli Aankhon Me Tere, Thoda Sa Kaajal Laga Kar,
Khud Apni Hi Nazar Se, Husn Ko Tere Bachaana Chaahta Hai…….

Sharbati Labon Se Tere Chura Ke, Zara Kamsim Si Sharaab,
Har Raat Pee Ke Nashe Me Tere, Jhoom Sa Jana Chaahta Hai…..

Har Ek Deedar Pe Tujhe Choone Ki, Tamanna Me Yeh Aashiq,
Tere Haathon Me Apne Naam Ki, Mehndi Sajaana Chaahta Hai…!!!


Pooja Ji Ab Wah wah Kaha ke Gayab Na Ho Jana.. Jawab de dena iska..   tongue3 tongue3


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #21 on: August 12, 2009, 05:07:43 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on August 12, 2009, 09:58:06 AM
Hahaha.. Pooja Ji.. Pahale hi Bahut si Threads aapke Jawab ka intzaar kar rahi hai Bechaari.. un par Bhi Nazren Inaayat kijiye..  Giggle Giggle

Is Na-insaafi Ke Sath, Chaliye Insaaf Kiye dete Hain,
Aapki Khubsoorati Par Hi Kuch Alfaaz Likhe Dete Hain...!!

****~~~~****~~~~****~~~~****~~~~****~~~~****

Teri Aankhon Se Thodi Aur Dillagi Karne Ko Dil Chaahta Hai,
Sharaarat Ke Sath, “Mann” Thoda Gustaakh Hona Chaahta Hai..

Jheel Si Neeli Aankhon Me Tere, Thoda Sa Kaajal Laga Kar,
Khud Apni Hi Nazar Se, Husn Ko Tere Bachaana Chaahta Hai…….

Sharbati Labon Se Tere Chura Ke, Zara Kamsim Si Sharaab,
Har Raat Pee Ke Nashe Me Tere, Jhoom Sa Jana Chaahta Hai…..

Har Ek Deedar Pe Tujhe Choone Ki, Tamanna Me Yeh Aashiq,
Tere Haathon Me Apne Naam Ki, Mehndi Sajaana Chaahta Hai…!!!


Pooja Ji Ab Wah wah Kaha ke Gayab Na Ho Jana.. Jawab de dena iska..   tongue3 tongue3


**~** Mann **~**


Wow!! bahoot likha hai apke sath Mann ji.... yakin kare ajj to apne hosh urra diye kuch pal ko... apki kavita parri aor phir parri... kai baar parri... kuch nahi samjh ayya ki kaya likhu.... App thahre Khumar-e-Ishaq ke king so app jitna acha to nahi likh sakugi..magar koshish karne lagi hu..


Shabdo  ki teri Gustakhi, Sanam mujhe darane lagi
Na kar is kadar baatein, ankhein haya se jhuk jaane lagi

Lapeta hai khud ko apne anchal se, na dekh is kadar
Sir se anchal ki lapet bhi hai,  ab Sarak jaane lagi

Na aao kareeb is tarah,  na chuna mujhe
Soch se he, sansein meri Ruk  jaane lagi

Bandha hai sama tere shabdo ne yah kis tarah fiza main
Band ankhon se, main khud he teri bahon mai simat jaane lagi……
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«Reply #22 on: August 12, 2009, 05:29:34 PM »
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WAH MANN JII & POOJA JI... WAH , BAHUT HI KHOOB ... WAH


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #23 on: August 12, 2009, 06:11:23 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 12, 2009, 05:29:34 PM
WAH MANN JII & POOJA JI... WAH , BAHUT HI KHOOB ... WAH


JASBIR SINGH

bahoot bahoot shukaria Jas ji!!
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«Reply #24 on: August 12, 2009, 06:19:03 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 12, 2009, 05:29:34 PM
WAH MANN JII & POOJA JI... WAH , BAHUT HI KHOOB ... WAH


JASBIR SINGH

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Jasbir Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #25 on: August 13, 2009, 11:28:30 AM »
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Poojaa jee:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap?

aapki koShiSh se pehli baar ru-ba-ru ho rahaa huuN! dil ko chhu lene waale aSh'aar.. be-had pasaNd aaueN! Shuruaat ka Sher mujhe KhaaS pasaNd aaya.! tuuNhi bazm ki Shaan baRhaate raheN! dil se DheroN saarii daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #26 on: August 13, 2009, 03:25:16 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 11, 2009, 04:13:37 PM
na isaafi app bhi kar rahe hai HumTum ji... adat nahi apse sirf comments dekhne ki....
acha laga ki apko mera likha acha laga!! Usual Smile

Next time koshish hogi ki itna acha jaroor lage ki apki kalam khud b khud do lines to likh he jaaye!!


Pooja Ji asie baat nai hai ... aap hamesha hi bahut accha likhte ho ... magar waqt ki kami ki wajah se mein aap ki shyri ke upper koi jawab nai de paya aur haan reply karne ka mouka bhi nai chodna chahta tha ...  so aap ki shyri ki tareef hi kar di .. waseey bhi aap ko pta hai ke aaj kal yha bahut shyar ho gaye hai ... kucch pots karo to agle din woh post 3 - 4 panne par milti hai ... khair ... Lijiye Arz kiya hai ...


Muhoobat Mein Itna Hum Ko Na Satayaa Karo Tum
Ahad Karo Jab Wasl Ka To Phir Nibaya Karo Tum

YaqeenaN Aap Hum Se Muhhobaat Karte Ho, Magar
Dil Chahtaa Hai Ke Kabhi Kabhi Jataya Karo Tum

Larzzate LaboN Se, Daihkate Ishq Ke NaGmaat
Baith Kar Mere Pehluu Mein, GunGunayaa Karo Tum

Tumhare Jane Se Dil Ka Qaraar Bhi Chla Jata Hai
Kasam Hai Tum Ko Muhoobat Ki, Na Jayaa Karo Tum

Qareeb Aaane Se Muhoobat Aur JawaaN Hoti Hai
Kabhi Kudh Paas Aao, Kabhi Mujhe Bulaya Karo Tum

Chodo Bhi Gile Shikwe, Sab Bekaar Ki Baatien Hai
Meri BahoN Mein Aao, Khush Rho, Muskuraya Karo Tum !!


Jawab Ka Muntzir

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«Reply #27 on: August 13, 2009, 05:41:42 PM »
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Bahut Accha aur Lajawa likha hai Humtum Bhai.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #28 on: August 13, 2009, 05:50:06 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 12, 2009, 05:07:43 PM
Wow!! bahoot likha hai apke sath Mann ji.... yakin kare ajj to apne hosh urra diye kuch pal ko... apki kavita parri aor phir parri... kai baar parri... kuch nahi samjh ayya ki kaya likhu.... App thahre Khumar-e-Ishaq ke king so app jitna acha to nahi likh sakugi..magar koshish karne lagi hu..


Shabdo  ki teri Gustakhi, Sanam mujhe darane lagi
Na kar is kadar baatein, ankhein haya se jhuk jaane lagi

Lapeta hai khud ko apne anchal se, na dekh is kadar
Sir se anchal ki lapet bhi hai,  ab Sarak jaane lagi

Na aao kareeb is tarah,  na chuna mujhe
Soch se he, sansein meri Ruk  jaane lagi

Bandha hai sama tere shabdo ne yah kis tarah fiza main
Band ankhon se, main khud he teri bahon mai simat jaane lagi……


Haye.... Succhi Mucchi.. happy3 Such Me Maine Itna Accha Likha hai..? Thank U Pooja ji Itni Pyaari Taareef Ke Liye.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Aapne to Kamaal Kar diya Pooja Ji.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Pyaar sa Bhara Jawab likha hai aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


Band Aankhon Se Nahi, Palken Khol Meri Taraf Dekho,
Tumhe Meri Nigaahon Me, Sirf Mohabhat Nazar Aayegi...

Iqraar Kar Baithoge, Inkaar Karte Karte Tum E-Sanam,
Jab Labon Ki Tadap, Tere Labon Ki Jaan Ban Jaayegi.....

Bichdi hai Neend Meri, Jab Se Hui Hai Mohabbat Tujhse,
Har Baar Ki Tarah Aaj Bhi Raat Aankhon me Hi Kat Jaayegi...

Har Khwaab Har Khayaal Yehi Ek Sawal Karta hai Dil Se,
Ke Kab Tu Dilbar, Mere Qareeb....... Aur Qareeb Aayegi....!!!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #29 on: August 13, 2009, 06:09:04 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 07, 2009, 06:37:28 PM
Ek dost ko kuch shabd kavita ke roop main kisi ko kahne the.. unke shabdo ko maine Kavita ka roop dene ki koshish ki hai.. aor unki permission se yah unke liye likhi kavita mai yaha post karne ja rahi hu:

Dekhna tujhe aor dekh kar tujhe chu lena
Sapna lage mujhe ab, jaise urr kar badalo ko chu lena

Her jagah thi bheer, per ek tera chehra he yaad hai
Yaad hai bas, wo hans kar tera  mujhko uhin dekh lena

Pakda tha hath maine, ya tum he simat aai thi bahon main
Yaad hai bas, wo tera mujh per yakin kar lena

Bichard kar mil gaye hai, mil kar na bichade ab kabhi
Zindagi ka maksad ban gaya, bas tera yeh mujhko kah dena

Dekhna tujhe aor dekh kar tujhe chu lena
Sapna lage mujhe ab, jaise urr kar badalo ko chu lena


Bohot hi pyara likha hai Pooja aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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