Dekho uss sitare ko......

by Tamanna4u on December 21, 2004, 03:06:07 PM
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Dekho uss sitare ko chamak raha hai jo sabase jyada,
lagta hai aisa dekh raha hai vo mujhe sabase jyada!!!

pyar mein uske gum hoon main aise,
jaan nahi pati dekhta hai auron ko kaise!!

kabhi yahan kabhi vahan tikta nahi ek jagah,
badalon ke peeche chhip jata hai kabhi
kabhi suraj ki aadh mein karta hai vo kya???

PUNCHUNGI AAJ RAAT USSE,
karna hai to IKRAAR kar....
aata hai raaton ko hi kyun,
KARNA HAI TO DIN BHAR PYAR KAR!!!

chala jata hai kahan jab jalata hai suraj mere tan ko,
yun to aata hai raat bhar jaati hoon jahan jahan....
par hota nahi tu jab jarurat hoti hai teri mere man ko!!!

roti hun phir bhi tujhe na pakar aasman mein,
kya girte hai aansun tere bhi mujhe na pakar paas mein!!

Ya bus marta hai tu meri khushiyo par hi yaar ,
ja to kissi aur se kar le pyar...................
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2004, 03:18:25 PM »
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bahut ache tamanna
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2004, 03:22:05 PM »
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dhanyvaad samnoj!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2004, 03:43:18 PM »
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Very Nice tamanna
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2004, 12:13:39 PM »
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excellent tamanna..................:lol:
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«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2004, 10:15:39 AM »
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thanx to all!!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2004, 10:47:28 AM »
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Dekho uss sitare ko chamak raha hai jo sabase jyada,
lagta hai aisa dekh raha hai vo mujhe sabase jyada!!!

pyar mein uske gum hoon main aise,
jaan nahi pati dekhta hai auron ko kaise!!

kabhi yahan kabhi vahan tikta nahi ek jagah,
badalon ke peeche chhip jata hai kabhi
kabhi suraj ki aadh mein karta hai vo kya???

PUNCHUNGI AAJ RAAT USSE,
karna hai to IKRAAR kar....
aata hai raaton ko hi kyun,
KARNA HAI TO DIN BHAR PYAR KAR!!!

chala jata hai kahan jab jalata hai suraj mere tan ko,
yun to aata hai raat bhar jaati hoon jahan jahan....
par hota nahi tu jab jarurat hoti hai teri mere man ko!!!

roti hun phir bhi tujhe na pakar aasman mein,
kya girte hai aansun tere bhi mujhe na pakar paas mein!!

Ya bus marta hai tu meri khushiyo par hi yaar ,
ja to kissi aur se kar le pyar...................


ur welcome Tamanna...............  :lol:

Main Shaah Raah Nahin, Raaste Kaa Patthar Hoon
Yahaan Savaar Bhi Paidal Utar Kar Chalte Hain

Kaii Sitaaron Ko Main Jaantaa Hoon Bachapan Se
Kahin Bhi Jaaon Mere Saath Saath Chalte Hain...............
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2005, 03:36:06 AM »
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nice one!!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2005, 03:45:31 AM »
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Dekho uss sitare ko chamak raha hai jo sabase jyada,
lagta hai aisa dekh raha hai vo mujhe sabase jyada!!!

pyar mein uske gum hoon main aise,
jaan nahi pati dekhta hai auron ko kaise!!

kabhi yahan kabhi vahan tikta nahi ek jagah,
badalon ke peeche chhip jata hai kabhi
kabhi suraj ki aadh mein karta hai vo kya???

PUNCHUNGI AAJ RAAT USSE,
karna hai to IKRAAR kar....
aata hai raaton ko hi kyun,
KARNA HAI TO DIN BHAR PYAR KAR!!!

chala jata hai kahan jab jalata hai suraj mere tan ko,
yun to aata hai raat bhar jaati hoon jahan jahan....
par hota nahi tu jab jarurat hoti hai teri mere man ko!!!

roti hun phir bhi tujhe na pakar aasman mein,
kya girte hai aansun tere bhi mujhe na pakar paas mein!!

Ya bus marta hai tu meri khushiyo par hi yaar ,
ja to kissi aur se kar le pyar...................


ur welcome Tamanna...............  :lol:

Main Shaah Raah Nahin, Raaste Kaa Patthar Hoon
Yahaan Savaar Bhi Paidal Utar Kar Chalte Hain

Kaii Sitaaron Ko Main Jaantaa Hoon Bachapan Se
Kahin Bhi Jaaon Mere Saath Saath Chalte Hain...............


gr8 waheed bhai


sitaaron ki kya baat ki
har raat meine unki tasveer li
jab bhi aayi kali raat to unke tata kar di
par jab bhi aayi chandni raat haaste haaste unhone meri baju tham li
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2005, 06:19:47 AM »
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Excellennnnnt Tamanna mere paas shadb nahi hai mai kya bolu its really gr888
and Waheed aapki ki to baat hi kya hai as usual gr8888 :lol:
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«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2005, 07:02:01 AM »
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Dekho uss sitare ko chamak raha hai jo sabase jyada,
lagta hai aisa dekh raha hai vo mujhe sabase jyada!!!

pyar mein uske gum hoon main aise,
jaan nahi pati dekhta hai auron ko kaise!!

kabhi yahan kabhi vahan tikta nahi ek jagah,
badalon ke peeche chhip jata hai kabhi
kabhi suraj ki aadh mein karta hai vo kya???

PUNCHUNGI AAJ RAAT USSE,
karna hai to IKRAAR kar....
aata hai raaton ko hi kyun,
KARNA HAI TO DIN BHAR PYAR KAR!!!

chala jata hai kahan jab jalata hai suraj mere tan ko,
yun to aata hai raat bhar jaati hoon jahan jahan....
par hota nahi tu jab jarurat hoti hai teri mere man ko!!!

roti hun phir bhi tujhe na pakar aasman mein,
kya girte hai aansun tere bhi mujhe na pakar paas mein!!

Ya bus marta hai tu meri khushiyo par hi yaar ,
ja to kissi aur se kar le pyar...................


ur welcome Tamanna...............  :lol:

Main Shaah Raah Nahin, Raaste Kaa Patthar Hoon
Yahaan Savaar Bhi Paidal Utar Kar Chalte Hain

Kaii Sitaaron Ko Main Jaantaa Hoon Bachapan Se
Kahin Bhi Jaaon Mere Saath Saath Chalte Hain...............


gr8 waheed bhai


sitaaron ki kya baat ki
har raat meine unki tasveer li
jab bhi aayi kali raat to unke tata kar di
par jab bhi aayi chandni raat haaste haaste unhone meri baju tham li


ur welcome......yogi................dhadkan......... ...  :lol:  :lol:    tongue3  tongue3

very nice yogi..........

Ankhon mein utar kar dheere dheere purane ghum
Palkon pe nanhe nanhe sitare piro gaye
Ab bachpane ki neend to ek khwab ho gayi
Wo din kahan  ke raat huee aur so gaye................
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2005, 07:18:55 AM »
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Dekho sajana, sitaron ki mehfil sajayi hai sirf tumhare liye,
Chand bhi usme ayege sirf tumhare liye,
Meri aankhon se chalakta paimana bhi hoga sirf tumhare liye,
Bus ek baar aake dekh le tu, Ye sari raunak hai tumhare liye…
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2005, 02:16:05 AM »
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thanx dhadkan!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2005, 09:46:50 AM »
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Vo dil kya jo milne ki aas na kare.......
tujhe bhool kar jeeyun KHUDA na kare
rahega tera pyar meri zindagi bankar........
vo baat aur hai zindagi humse wafa kare na kare!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: February 04, 2005, 03:48:56 PM »
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welcome  back  tamanna...........veri  nice  dhadkan......tamanna..........   :lol:
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