DekhoN jo us ka maiN rukh e pur noor baiTh ke

by Ghulam Haider on January 06, 2012, 11:04:16 PM
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DekhoN jo us ka maiN rukh e pur noor baiTh ke.
Karta hai mujh ko aur wo mas.hoor baiTh ke.

Aaiena rakh ke saamne kis aan-baan se,
Dekhe hai apna husn wo maghroor baiTh ke.

Allah re, ye tarz e takallum to dekhiye,
Karti ho jaise baat koi hoor baiTh ke.

Beemaar us ka ho ke paRa hoN maiN is liye,
Dekhe wo meri haalat e na joor baiTh ke.

Tapke hai shae’ri se meri khoN kahiN kahiN,
Dil ke kured leta hoN naasoor baiTh ke.

Wah.shat mere junoN se thi kaisi ke ba’d e marg,
Roye hai meri qabr se wo door baiTh ke.

Wo waqt yaad aata hai tanhaayi meN mujhe,
Jab dostoN meN rehta tha masroor baiTh ke.

Haider ki shae’ri meN junoN ka hai wo shu’oor,
MajnuN se bhi ziyada hai mash.hoor baiTh ke.
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2012, 04:54:54 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Haidar sahab
Behatrin peshkash.

DAAD DAAD DAAD Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2012, 10:02:44 AM »
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Itni saari daad dene ke liye tah e dil se aap ka shukr guzaar hoN "mkv" ji.
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2012, 10:06:09 AM »
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Quote from: Ghulam Haider on January 06, 2012, 11:04:16 PM
DekhoN jo us ka maiN rukh e pur noor baiTh ke.
Karta hai mujh ko aur wo mas.hoor baiTh ke.

Aaiena rakh ke saamne kis aan-baan se,
Dekhe hai apna husn wo maghroor baiTh ke.

Allah re, ye tarz e takallum to dekhiye,
Karti ho jaise baat koi hoor baiTh ke.

Beemaar us ka ho ke paRa hoN maiN is liye,
Dekhe wo meri haalat e na joor baiTh ke.

Tapke hai shae’ri se meri khoN kahiN kahiN,
Dil ke kured leta hoN naasoor baiTh ke.

Wah.shat mere junoN se thi kaisi ke ba’d e marg,
Roye hai meri qabr se wo door baiTh ke.

Wo waqt yaad aata hai tanhaayi meN mujhe,
Jab dostoN meN rehta tha masroor baiTh ke.

Haider ki shae’ri meN junoN ka hai wo shu’oor,
MajnuN se bhi ziyada hai mash.hoor baiTh ke.



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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2012, 10:10:05 AM »
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Aap ne dil se daad di hai janaab !
Aap ki daad kuchh khusoosi hai. icon_salut
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2012, 11:26:37 AM »
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Ghulam Haidar saheb, Adaab.Aap ki yeh khubsurat ghazal parh ke tabiat khush ho gai. Aise hi khubsurat kalaam se nawaazte rahiye.Bahut bahut daad.Hasan
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2012, 11:46:40 AM »
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Quote from: Ghulam Haider on January 06, 2012, 11:04:16 PM
DekhoN jo us ka maiN rukh e pur noor baiTh ke.
Karta hai mujh ko aur wo mas.hoor baiTh ke.

Aaiena rakh ke saamne kis aan-baan se,
Dekhe hai apna husn wo maghroor baiTh ke.

Allah re, ye tarz e takallum to dekhiye,
Karti ho jaise baat koi hoor baiTh ke.

Beemaar us ka ho ke paRa hoN maiN is liye,
Dekhe wo meri haalat e na joor baiTh ke.

Tapke hai shae’ri se meri khoN kahiN kahiN,
Dil ke kured leta hoN naasoor baiTh ke.

Wah.shat mere junoN se thi kaisi ke ba’d e marg,
Roye hai meri qabr se wo door baiTh ke.

Wo waqt yaad aata hai tanhaayi meN mujhe,
Jab dostoN meN rehta tha masroor baiTh ke.

Haider ki shae’ri meN junoN ka hai wo shu’oor,
MajnuN se bhi ziyada hai mash.hoor baiTh ke.


Bahut Bahut Khoooob Haider Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: khwaish on January 07, 2012, 11:46:40 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Haider Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Aap ki nawaazish hai khwaish ji ke meri ghazal ko aap ne qaabil e daad samjha. be had shukriya.
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 07, 2012, 11:26:37 AM
Ghulam Haidar saheb, Adaab.Aap ki yeh khubsurat ghazal parh ke tabiat khush ho gai. Aise hi khubsurat kalaam se nawaazte rahiye.Bahut bahut daad.Hasan
MoHtaram F.H.Siddiqui Sb. hamari Allah se yehi dua'a hai ke wo aap ko hamesha khush rakhe, aur aap hameN apni mohabbat aur dua'aoN se nawaazte raheN.
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«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2012, 05:36:52 PM »
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bohat khoob haider ji
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Wah.shat mere junoN se thi kaisi ke ba’d e marg,
Roya hai meri qabr se wo door baiTh ke.
Ghulam Haidar saheb, Adaab.
Aap ki ghazal ka yeh sher parh ke khushi mahsoos huyee  Aise hi khubsurat ash.aar se nawaazte rahiye aur Khudaye berhaq se aap ke haq mein dua-go hoon ke aap issse bhi achchi ghazal kahein jo Radeef pakad kar chale ' aameen
.............Sadiq Rizvi
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Quote from: HUM_DUM on January 07, 2012, 05:36:52 PM
bohat khoob haider ji
Shukrira "HUM_DUM" Ji ke aap ne meri ma'mooli si koshish ko pasand kiya.
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on January 08, 2012, 05:51:13 AM
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A'zeez "Sunildehgawani ji, Aap ne meri ghazal ko paRha aur pasand kiya,ye aap ki mohabbat hai, hamesha khush raheN.
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Quote from: Sadiq Rizvi on January 08, 2012, 08:21:09 PM
Wah.shat mere junoN se thi kaisi ke ba’d e marg,
Roya hai meri qabr se wo door baiTh ke.
Ghulam Haidar saheb, Adaab.
Aap ki ghazal ka yeh sher parh ke khushi mahsoos huyee  Aise hi khubsurat ash.aar se nawaazte rahiye aur Khudaye berhaq se aap ke haq mein dua-go hoon ke aap issse bhi achchi ghazal kahein jo Radeef pakad kar chale ' aameen
.............Sadiq Rizvi

Buzurgwaar, "Sadiq Rizvi" Sb. Aadaab Pesh e khidmat.
Mujhe is baat ki be Had khushi hai ke aap ko meri ghazal ke is shea'r ko paRh kar khushi mahsoos huyee. Allah(A.J.) aap ki dua'a qabool kare aur mujhe is se bhi achchhi ghazal likhne ki taufeeq de. Ye aap ka khulooS aur dili moHabbat hai ke aapne meri ghazal par apni daqeeq nazar daali. Jo log haq bayaani se kaam lete haiN wo bohot kam haiN. Mujhe is baat ki be had khushi hai ke aap ne is (ya kisi doosri)ghazal par kuchh tanqeedi nigaah daali aur ye a'rZ kiya ke "aap isse bhi achchi ghazal kahein jo Radeef pakad kar chale". Ye jumlah is baat ki taraf isharah karta hai ke kahiN, kisi jagah(is ghazal meN ya kisi doosre kalaam meN)aap ko radeef meN kuchh na kuchh aisa zuroor maHsoos huwa hai jis ne ye khaaS jumlah likhne par aap ko aamaadah kiya. Agar aap ki nazar meN mere kisi kalaam meN aisi koi baat nazar aayi ho to mujhe zuroor mutavajjeh karN. Is se meri iSlaaH bhi hogi, mere i'lm meN bhi azaafah hoga, aur jo naqS hai woh bhi bar taraf ho sakega. Allah aap ko hamesha khush o khurram rakhe... Aameen
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