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by Qutubuddin on July 16, 2005, 10:19:09 AM
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~~DHADKAN~~



kadmoN meiN tere aakhiri dhadkan bicHaa chale
maathe pe tere ik jo shikan thii , mitaa chale

waqt-e-nizaa itni tassalli to thii dil ko
tum be-wafaa hue to hue , HUM nibhaa chale

aaraam tha kuch aag ki garmii se zaKhm ko
aaye voh meri kabr par , shama bhujhaa chale

kaise banauuN us jagah khwaboN ka aashiyaaN
har samt fareboN ki jahaaN par hawaa chale

usne hamaari khwaahisheN pairoN tal'e rauNdiiN
har ik razaa pe jiski hum gardan jhukaa , chale

haathoN ki lakiiroN ko bajaa jaan kar chup huN
kismat meiN hai liKhaa jo uspe zor kya chale !

nakaam hasratoN ko bhulaane kahaaN jaate !!
nikle teri galii se suu-e-maikadaa chale

"Ques..." yuN Gham-e-yaar tu seene meiN cHupa le
chehra bhi gar koi paDhe , kuch na pataa chale
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2005, 10:24:07 AM »
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.............Jiyoooooooo......!!!............ too good...
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2005, 10:26:45 AM »
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~~DHADKAN~~



kadmoN meiN tere aakhiri dhadkan bicHaa chale
maathe pe tere ik jo shikan thii , mitaa chale

waqt-e-nizaa itni tassalli to thii dil ko
tum be-wafaa hue to hue , HUM nibhaa chale

aaraam tha kuch aag ki garmii se zaKhm ko
aaye voh meri kabr par , shama bhujhaa chale

kaise banauuN us jagah khwaboN ka aashiyaaN
har samt fareboN ki jahaaN par hawaa chale

usne hamaari khwaahisheN pairoN tal'e rauNdiiN
har ik razaa pe jiski hum gardan jhukaa , chale

haathoN ki lakiiroN ko bajaa jaan kar chup huN
kismat meiN hai liKhaa jo uspe zor kya chale !

nakaam hasratoN ko bhulaane kahaaN jaate !!
nikle teri galii se suu-e-maikadaa chale

"Ques..." yuN Gham-e-yaar tu seene meiN cHupa le
chehra bhi gar koi paDhe , kuch na pataa chale


waoooooooo

to good to comment
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2005, 10:31:10 AM »
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Bhoot Bhoot Sukreyaa amrita and vikas..

Zaranawazee kaa Sukreyaa..

Amrita.. I feel pain when I see ur Avtar with the Blood Tear.. Can u please change it.. As it hurts me and I cannot see anyone crying.. As I am the only one who is allowed to cry..

Ques.....
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2005, 02:14:15 PM »
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~~DHADKAN~~



kadmoN meiN tere aakhiri dhadkan bicHaa chale
maathe pe tere ik jo shikan thii , mitaa chale

waqt-e-nizaa itni tassalli to thii dil ko
tum be-wafaa hue to hue , HUM nibhaa chale

aaraam tha kuch aag ki garmii se zaKhm ko
aaye voh meri kabr par , shama bhujhaa chale

kaise banauuN us jagah khwaboN ka aashiyaaN
har samt fareboN ki jahaaN par hawaa chale

usne hamaari khwaahisheN pairoN tal'e rauNdiiN
har ik razaa pe jiski hum gardan jhukaa , chale

haathoN ki lakiiroN ko bajaa jaan kar chup huN
kismat meiN hai liKhaa jo uspe zor kya chale !

nakaam hasratoN ko bhulaane kahaaN jaate !!
nikle teri galii se suu-e-maikadaa chale

"Ques..." yuN Gham-e-yaar tu seene meiN cHupa le
chehra bhi gar koi paDhe , kuch na pataa chale


bohat khoob qutubuddin ji.
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2005, 02:28:09 PM »
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Sukreyaa nidhi_yadein .....

Ques....

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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2005, 01:03:07 PM »
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Rago mein daudhne ke nahi hum kayal
woh Lahu hi kya jo ankhon se na tapke..nm
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2005, 01:05:34 PM »
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Bohat khoob Qutubuddin ........& Good One Amrita........
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2005, 01:06:09 PM »
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Mashallah... Great and well quoted Amrita..

Rago mein daudhne ke nahi hum kayal
woh Lahu hi kya jo ankhon se na tapke...

Good...

Ques....
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2005, 03:00:53 PM »
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...............thanks a lot aryaan and qutubuddin...!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2005, 06:52:14 AM »
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Amazing .. Qutubuddin ji
...
ek ek lafa mano marza sa lagta hai
zakhmo to khuredta hai
phir bhi mohabbat karta hai
yeh dil bhi ek rahesay hai
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«Reply #11 on: July 20, 2005, 07:52:16 AM »
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~~DHADKAN~~



kadmoN meiN tere aakhiri dhadkan bicHaa chale
maathe pe tere ik jo shikan thii , mitaa chale

waqt-e-nizaa itni tassalli to thii dil ko
tum be-wafaa hue to hue , HUM nibhaa chale

aaraam tha kuch aag ki garmii se zaKhm ko
aaye voh meri kabr par , shama bhujhaa chale

kaise banauuN us jagah khwaboN ka aashiyaaN
har samt fareboN ki jahaaN par hawaa chale

usne hamaari khwaahisheN pairoN tal'e rauNdiiN
har ik razaa pe jiski hum gardan jhukaa , chale

haathoN ki lakiiroN ko bajaa jaan kar chup huN
kismat meiN hai liKhaa jo uspe zor kya chale !

nakaam hasratoN ko bhulaane kahaaN jaate !!
nikle teri galii se suu-e-maikadaa chale

"Ques..." yuN Gham-e-yaar tu seene meiN cHupa le
chehra bhi gar koi paDhe , kuch na pataa chale


Haila KUTUB.................!!!!
wahhh ! ...wah !!! :wink:
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«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2005, 10:22:30 AM »
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Rago mein daudhne ke nahi hum kayal
woh Lahu hi kya jo ankhon se na tapke..nm


 Usual Smile KYA BAAT HAI AMRITA JI  Usual Smile

zaham khaye hain humne dil pe is tarah
ki har dam har pal hum maut ko tarse
Nikla na khoon jab ragon se humari to jaana
ki wohLahu hi kya jo ankhon se na tapke
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«Reply #13 on: July 20, 2005, 12:28:53 PM »
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this was an awesome quote beleive me i mean i have no words to xpress my feelings after reading it
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«Reply #14 on: July 21, 2005, 03:23:18 AM »
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Buhat  Khoob......................................... Supreb Gr8

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