**Dhadkanon main naam tumhara** by Rahim

by dead heart on March 31, 2010, 08:12:43 PM
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Sach bataun toh, mohobat pe likhne ki wajah nahin milti aj kal..Bas ek koshish...Kuch lavz achanak zehen ne jorr diye toh shaer bangaya...

Kabhi kabhi gaur se sunlia karo dhadkanon ko Rahim ki,
Sirf aur sirf tumhara naam suniya dega tumhe...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2010, 08:45:06 PM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim bhai,kamaal ke likha aapne. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 10:27:59 PM »
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Bahut pyaari lines hain Rahim bhai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

kaash unhone hamaari dhadkano ko suna hota,
aaj wo hamare hote aur hamari har ek saans me naam unka hota...

Quote from: -Rahim- on March 31, 2010, 08:12:43 PM
Kabhi kabhi gaur se sunlia karo dhadkanon ko Rahim ki,
Sirf aur sirf tumhara naam suniya dega tumhe...
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2010, 05:11:54 AM »
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Nice creation Rahim ji.
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2010, 09:20:38 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
             iss anjaan shahar main kyon dil lagaya Bechain,
             hai mushkil abb kahna dharakta hai kis ke liye....!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2010, 09:18:35 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Madhu di, Kapil dost, Adil jee aur Riyaz jee..

Nice lines Kapil dost aur Adil jee... Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2010, 09:56:25 AM »
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Thanx a lot Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 02, 2010, 09:18:35 AM
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Madhu di, Kapil dost, Adil jee aur Riyaz jee..

Nice lines Kapil dost aur Adil jee... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2010, 10:00:05 AM »
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good .very good Rahim ji.
Quote from: -Rahim- on March 31, 2010, 08:12:43 PM
Sach bataun toh, mohobat pe likhne ki wajah nahin milti aj kal..Bas ek koshish...Kuch lavz achanak zehen ne jorr diye toh shaer bangaya...

Kabhi kabhi gaur se sunlia karo dhadkanon ko Rahim ki,
Sirf aur sirf tumhara naam suniya dega tumhe...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2010, 10:17:14 AM »
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Shukriya Suresh jee
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2010, 05:19:24 AM »
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Rahimmmm Bhai.. Kya baat Hai.. Chand Alfaazon me Poori Gazal Likh Di Yaaaaaaaaaar aapne.. Mohabbat Bhare Yeh Alfaaz Dil Ko Chhoo Gaye Dost.. Bahut khooooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2010, 05:21:55 AM »
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Mujhe Naaz Hai Apne Dil Ki Dharkano Par,
Shor Bhi Karti Hain To Tere Naam Ke Sath...!!



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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2010, 08:54:55 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 31, 2010, 08:12:43 PM
Sach bataun toh, mohobat pe likhne ki wajah nahin milti aj kal..Bas ek koshish...Kuch lavz achanak zehen ne jorr diye toh shaer bangaya...

Kabhi kabhi gaur se sunlia karo dhadkanon ko Rahim ki,
Sirf aur sirf tumhara naam suniya dega tumhe...

~Rahim~

Good one Rahim Ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2010, 07:22:10 PM »
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Shukriya Vikas bhaijan aur Rajesh jee..

Main kya kahoun tariff main apki Vikas bhaijan...Itna khubsoorat shaer likha hai...Sach dil ko choo gaya.. Applause Applause
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