~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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Jab tak hai umeed is dil main mere, koshish main karta jaunga,
Bulava ayega uss Rabb ka, akhri uss sans tak mohobat karta jaunga..

Ik arse baad mila hai koi apna iss ajnabi si zalim duniya main mujhe,
Bichda jo tu mujse mere humdum, sach kehta hoon, bikhar jaunga..

Kareeb hai tere dil se jitni tere dil ki dhadkanein mere yaar,
Tujhe ehsaas bhi nahin hoga aur tujhme uss gehrayi tak bas jaunga..

Tere kareeb aa kar ehsaas hua hai, tujhe bharose par bharosa na raha,
Kitabi baatein nahin karta main kay tere bin jee nahin paunga..

Ek baar tu mera haath thamle, vaada karta hoon khush rakhunga,
Jaise pee jati hai sharab sharafat ko, tere ghum main pee jaunga..

Be buniyaad aur bin jazbaat kay lavzon pe kayam nahin hai ‘Khamosh’,
Jo kaha hai, wohi mehsoos kiya hai, bharosa rakh, har vaada nibhaunga,
Tu jab tak khud nahin kehti, main dhoor nahin jaunga…dhoor nahin jaunga..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~


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Re: ~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2013, 04:32:41 PM »

Bohat Khub!!!

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Re: ~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2013, 06:12:20 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Dost


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Re: ~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2013, 06:30:07 PM »

waah bhaai waah... bahut der der se aate ho aur jab bhi aate ho koi dhamaakaa le ke aate ho... maan gaye ustaad kyaa khoob likhaa hai... bahut bahut khoob Rahim bhaai.....!!!


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Re: ~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2013, 02:37:57 AM »

wqah wah wah Applause


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Re: ~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2013, 04:37:53 AM »

excellent


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Re: ~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2013, 10:11:47 AM »

mind blowing rahim jee


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Re: ~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2013, 12:03:07 PM »

Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab badi achchi kalaam kahi hai, ahsaas O khayaal
behad khoob rahe...

aur aakhri do ashaar behad khoob rahe janab...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez...


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Re: ~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2013, 12:04:45 PM »

bohut khub rahim ji bohut umda peshkash hai apki


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Re: ~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2013, 02:05:32 PM »

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on January 22, 2013, 04:32:41 PM

Bohat Khub!!!

Applause

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Shireen jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: khwaish on January 22, 2013, 06:12:20 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Dost

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 22, 2013, 06:30:07 PM

waah bhaai waah... bahut der der se aate ho aur jab bhi aate ho koi dhamaakaa le ke aate ho... maan gaye ustaad kyaa khoob likhaa hai... bahut bahut khoob Rahim bhaai.....!!!

Kapil dost,
Apne hamesha saath diya hai iss baat ka tahe tahe dil se shukriya..
Ustaad bahaut bada lavz kaha hai apne aur main dil se shukriya kehta hoon..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: Aarish on January 23, 2013, 02:37:57 AM

wqah wah wah Applause

Bahaut shukriya Aarish jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: sksaini4 on January 23, 2013, 04:37:53 AM

excellent

Bahaut shukriya Saini jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: aqsh on January 23, 2013, 10:11:47 AM

mind blowing rahim jee

Bahaut shukriya Aqsh jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 23, 2013, 12:03:07 PM